Item: Now, where am I? [Completed]
Rating: 5
Author: Vipin_Chaudhary_8036

Vipin_Chaudhary_8036Lv14yr

2020-10-04 02:58

Good grammer not many mistakes and not very long chapters loved it.waiting for the arcs to released. What would be the first world world instead of mcu make it mha it would be morefun but at the end you have the book.

Now, where am I? [Completed]

wheretonow

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CassTheEeveeLv14

are you....delusional? even in the synopsis the grammar needs hard work, so it is far from perfect

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Listless_GrimLv4

your review is bordering on fraudulent. saying this steaming pile has good grammar... how much did you get paid?

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