Good grammer not many mistakes and not very long chapters loved it.waiting for the arcs to released. What would be the first world world instead of mcu make it mha it would be morefun but at the end you have the book.
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are you....delusional? even in the synopsis the grammar needs hard work, so it is far from perfect
your review is bordering on fraudulent. saying this steaming pile has good grammar... how much did you get paid?
Argh its already over!!! This is one of the best marvel fics it's up there with burnable's post apocalyptic potter in a parallel universe. 馃憤馃徑
Billions of women to choose from and he chooses take the one person Captain America loved. Would have fine if he showed interest before Steve but he didn't.
A shameless review by the author himself. Its my very first writing hope you guys like it and if you find any problems or mistake feel free to point it out. Thank you
MASSIVE quality drop in chapters. MC is unlikable, grammar is meh and the story is badly written. Don't read if you dislike bad character pairings.
Broken grammar, when reading, the flow of words is constantly broken. it is nothing like the fanfic he based it off of, except the copying ability. It's more like a gag-comic as he has a companion he suddenly forgets about, then adopts a child and soon becomes an obsessed big brother figure, it's just bad. But the fanfic it's based off of, is a 10/10*
Ok first of all I thought you copied but us is only to set up the story, it changes drastically after ch 15. Good you changes the story as per your readers but still follows the canon. Good story. I like it very much. Waiting for more chapters.
I'm giving it a low rating based on my feel of the way it is written. After reading until the Invasion chapter, everything is like a narrative. Its bland, and felt rushed. Still good job for trying and sharing your work.
I don't know if anyone other than me noticed this but as far as I read this novel it has a lot of things in common to another fanfic in webnovel named "I am in Marvel" but not all but copy and story it is almost same I think......... I don't know whether this is my imagination or not but I think you guys should check whether it's just my imagination or not (In my opinion this fanfic is almost a copy with some more things (wishes, travel) that that novel [*I am in MARVEL* ] but that novel doesn't have travel powers)
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So he rusjed all the first few chaps and then decided tojust copy another novel off of here to set up his relationships with bucky and steve minus the actual good interesting and character building moments of the novel. Overall just lazy copying while adding his own twists in to make it his own character
Not my translation, just importing from third party sites. All credit to translations on https://youzitsu.surge.sh/ and https://confusedtls.wordpress.com/youkoso-jitsuroku/ Don't have eng translations for vol 4.5 yet. will update as they come out. Also, will be adding illustrations as i go, just let me know if i miss one.
Mr. Dayal, an investigation officer is trying hard to solve his very last case as he'll soon retire from his service. It was not only the last mission for him but also a sort of justice to his daughters culprit that he tells about at the end. Everything seemed to end as he got no information or clues against the culprit until one day he coincidentally collided with Jake who has connections with this politician that Mr. Dayal assumed to be the main culprit.Jake promised to help him along with the other 3 officers who were selected for the team. *** "I'm planning on switching sides. Again! " Mr. Hussain and his brother widened their eyes. "Did you just.. " Mr. Hussain, the politician asks. "Yes you heard it right" Jake smirks. "Then tell us what they are exactly planning? Tell us everything. " Mr. Hussain asked. "You just need to go meet them and the rest,you guess!" "Huh! As if I'm going to blurt everything out to them. I never thought Dayal could be this naive."The politician laughed. *** Will they be able to last as a team till the end? Will they succeed in the last mission? Find out more about this last mission by reading the story further. Find me: Discord: Juman12#1675 Join my discord server for more updates!! https://discord.gg/k4muFv2P
The story takes place at Advanced Nurturing High School, a leading prestigious school with state-of-the-art facilities where nearly 100% of students go on to university or find employment.The students there have the freedom to wear any hairstyle and bring any personal effects they desire. The said high school is a paradise-like school, but the truth is thst only the most superior of students recieve favourable treatment. The protagonist Kiyotaka Ayanakoji is a student of D-Class, which is where the school dumps its "inferior" students in order to ridicule them. For a certain reason Kiyotaka was "careless"(wrote exam badly on purpose) on his entrance examination, and was put in D-Class. After meeting Suzune Horikita and Kikyo Kushida, two other students in his class, Kiyotaka's situation begins to change.
No NTR-Incest A Boy struggles with the problems of being raised in a family full of lewd older women.
You wake up on a cold hard floor with no knowledge of where you are and what your name is. A person tells you that if you want to learn more you must survive and play their games. Would you do anything to win and make it farther or would you try and fight back against those that hold you? Watch as J makes his way through these games with everything on the line. Will he be a winner? Read and find out.
This story has a typical incest plot of a son wanting to have sex with his mother. But I was intrigued by the twist Klxro put on it of the father being forced to give permission to his son to impregnate the mother, due to the father being caught in a compromising situation. The story then has a tension of the father being forced to watch the son seduce his mother and yet be unable to stop it. It's mainly from the point of view of the son, so one experiences this as the "bull," not as the "cuckold." #THIS IS NOT MY CREATION BUT SPACER CREATION WASNT ABE TO CONTACT HIM HENCE UPLOADING AS HIS SITE DOWN FOR A LONG TIME
"Make girls fall in love with you or accept your death." The female devil smiled through her crimson eyes and her white hairs shining under the moonlight. An introvert boy of 17 years old, who deemed love a questionable waste of emotions. And people who love each other as idiots and na茂ve for wasting their time and effort. Until that one unfortunate day, He involuntarily signed a contract with a devil from hell and his world turned upside down. And what the hell is this contract. (Pun unintended) ... Discord: lon_okami#9417 Join my Discord Server https://discord.gg/QXshWHNcxm
"As a child, Kenji Yoshikawa did everything by himself and dropped it once he was bored. But his family is full of mystery, especially his father, a retired mangaka. After finding out the secret behind his father's actions, he decided to pursue becoming a mangaka. After this, surprisingly, he somehow managed to get into a harem due to his manga works."