Item: Now, where am I? [Completed]
Rating: 5
Author: hs_chhaunkar

hs_chhaunkarLv14yr

2020-10-14 14:46

Ok first of all I thought you copied but us is only to set up the story, it changes drastically after ch 15. Good you changes the story as per your readers but still follows the canon. Good story. I like it very much. Waiting for more chapters.

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