HUGE INFODUMPS! And author constantly repeats the same thing OVER AND OVER AND OVER again. Also, one chapter he introduces a new rule of this book, later he will break this rule. Let me put it this way. The normal conversation in this novel goes like this, Mc says something. The person mc is talking to replies with unfamiliar terminology. Author takes 3 paragraphs to explain. The mc replies with unknown terminology again. Author explains using 3 paragraph again. Every conversation is a tool for the author to dump huuuuge info that will probably never be mentioned again. 30 chapters in and VERY LITTLE has actually happened. But boy oh boy you probably know about half of all technical details on how fey, fey grades, fey characteristics, various companies, tools, fey cultivation plans used in this book's universe. Also, to the review that said no system, that is true. But the mc has a huge all encompassing cheat when it comes to feys. Not a bad thing per say but just mentioning. Dialogue is VERY dry because of the constant info dumps in them. So i s the exposition. And whenever any character in this story is feeling something, like happiness or anger, the author explains exactly why that character is feeling that, why the mc mad them feel like that, what the mc thinks about that character, etcetc you get my point. I mean the readers aren't dumb. the author doesn't have to explain why the mc's sister is feeling happy when the mc got her a good fey. But the author does, line by line, breaking down what she was feeling. Also, in this world it is apparently really hard for people to train something called 'runes'. But the mc just has to look in a certain random direction and recite poems. Then boom, new rune. Author said only contractors can choose skills for fey, but a few chapters later we see people choosing skill for fey not contracted to them. Author spends HUGE TIME explaining how things work, but when executing them in the book he literally throws all that out of the window and lets the characters break every rule he established. Oh and don't get me started with FEYS. Random fey appears, author takes a chapter to explain all the characteristics of that fey. Like he does that for almost every fey. Even the ones not related to mc or any major character. This is not a novel, it is one GIANT INFO DUMP or MONSTER ENCYCLOPEDIA. Not recommended.
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LIKETo clarify this review, the author does give lots of information. However, this information is for world building and character depth primarily. I don't feel the dialogue is dry but its definitely not your "FAST PACED, HIGH ACTION, ULTRA HAREM, OP MC" novel - if you're looking for a slower novel with an interesting world design (not necessarily original world design, but seems to be well thought out so far) then definitely give this novel a try.
To clarify the above comment, what he means by 'World building' is irrelevant information dump that will never again be used in any plot point in this story. Why would the author add a few different 'world building' or info dumps in one conversation of the mc with a shopkeeper? Cause the author wanted to make the chapters longer. I don't think explaining every detail about every fey is worldbuilding. It is blatant 'word padding'. For me the conversation is absolutely dry cause every conversation is another attempt at info dump, or as the previous commenter said, 'world building.'
ForcedToMake:To clarify this review, the author does give lots of information. However, this information is for world building and character depth primarily. I don't feel the dialogue is dry but its definitely not your "FAST PACED, HIGH ACTION, ULTRA HAREM, OP MC" novel - if you're looking for a slower novel with an interesting world design (not necessarily original world design, but seems to be well thought out so far) then definitely give this novel a try.
To further clarify, even if you don't want a "FAST PACED, HIGH ACTION, ULTRA HAREM, OP MC", then this novel still is definitely not for you either. Because the novel doesn't have even a little bit of interesting character design or world building. No character development to speak of, mc gets everything handed to him by his ultra "Cheat" or bullshit luck plot armor. People instantly like him. No interesting conflict. Just huge information dumps. After 60 chapters what you have here is a few characters reciting a monster encyclopedia. If you want a "SLOW PACED STORY WITH INTERESTING WORLD BUILDING", skip this. But if you want a thesis paper with unnecessary details about why a giant lizard has poison attacks (a lizard which only appears in 2 chapters of this 60 chapter story, but had one whole chapter dedicated to explaining its characteristics), then this story is for you.
ForcedToMake:To clarify this review, the author does give lots of information. However, this information is for world building and character depth primarily. I don't feel the dialogue is dry but its definitely not your "FAST PACED, HIGH ACTION, ULTRA HAREM, OP MC" novel - if you're looking for a slower novel with an interesting world design (not necessarily original world design, but seems to be well thought out so far) then definitely give this novel a try.
There's nothing wrong with the novel, there must be something wrong with you. I've already fnished the 60 chapters, and never once was I bored, nor did I notice any "information dumps". If it's too much information for you, you're probably just stupid. Definitely no Genius. At one point in this novel the author mentions that it's a myth that goldfish have an extremely short memory. Maybe you just don't like the novel because it reminded you that a goldfish is smarter than you. Nevermind a Spirit-Siphon goldfish, you probably have the attention span of a regular goldfish with ADHD.
😅Even if you aren't okay with his review I don't think it's necessary to insult him. People are entitled to their opinions No need to insult anyone just because they don't like what you do. It isn't like it's a hate review Guy clearly read at least 30 chapters. It's more than enough to form an opinion
dns7950:There's nothing wrong with the novel, there must be something wrong with you. I've already fnished the 60 chapters, and never once was I bored, nor did I notice any "information dumps". If it's too much information for you, you're probably just stupid. Definitely no Genius. At one point in this novel the author mentions that it's a myth that goldfish have an extremely short memory. Maybe you just don't like the novel because it reminded you that a goldfish is smarter than you. Nevermind a Spirit-Siphon goldfish, you probably have the attention span of a regular goldfish with ADHD.
wow! just cause someone criticized this novel, which is the only thing keeping you from committing suicide in real life, your only meaning of existence, you attack the other person. I know your spouse left you because you kept spending all your money on qidian like the china simp you are, but no need to be that rude dude! Or, i guess for a lifeless bastard without any real life friends. or an estranged ex-partner (who ****ed your boss and sent you the video cause you are a fking nerd and needs to be cucked), this novel might really really be the only speck of joy in your miserable life. That's why you insulted everyone for criticizing the novel. I get it now. You ain't stupid. You just a nerd and depressed.
dns7950:There's nothing wrong with the novel, there must be something wrong with you. I've already fnished the 60 chapters, and never once was I bored, nor did I notice any "information dumps". If it's too much information for you, you're probably just stupid. Definitely no Genius. At one point in this novel the author mentions that it's a myth that goldfish have an extremely short memory. Maybe you just don't like the novel because it reminded you that a goldfish is smarter than you. Nevermind a Spirit-Siphon goldfish, you probably have the attention span of a regular goldfish with ADHD.
dns7950:There's nothing wrong with the novel, there must be something wrong with you. I've already fnished the 60 chapters, and never once was I bored, nor did I notice any "information dumps". If it's too much information for you, you're probably just stupid. Definitely no Genius. At one point in this novel the author mentions that it's a myth that goldfish have an extremely short memory. Maybe you just don't like the novel because it reminded you that a goldfish is smarter than you. Nevermind a Spirit-Siphon goldfish, you probably have the attention span of a regular goldfish with ADHD.
TLDR: -OP thinks book is a long, slow paced infodump. -Commenter 1 disagrees, thinks that the book is slower than your average OP MC harem but isn’t really slow. -OP begs to differ -Commenter 2 thinks OP has an attention span shorter than a spirit-siphon goldfish and was offended -Commenter 3 thinks Commenter 2 went overboard in calling OP a fish brain -OP thinks Commenter 2 is butthurt, has no life, no wife, and should kill him self
Very nice clarification of the clarification of this review and the further clarification of that clarification, and the subsequent degeneracy of chinese webnovel weeb.
YASDASKAFRZ:TLDR: -OP thinks book is a long, slow paced infodump. -Commenter 1 disagrees, thinks that the book is slower than your average OP MC harem but isn’t really slow. -OP begs to differ -Commenter 2 thinks OP has an attention span shorter than a spirit-siphon goldfish and was offended -Commenter 3 thinks Commenter 2 went overboard in calling OP a fish brain -OP thinks Commenter 2 is butthurt, has no life, no wife, and should kill him self
At this point the comment section of this review is more entertaining than the novel itself.
Negative_Reviewer:Thanks for the review. Saved me from wasting time here. Also it is only natural that when you post a 1 star review the hordes of hypocritical simps come. Had a blast reading the comments. Keep up the good work.image
I definitely agree on the info dump. Makes reading kinda difficult and I still can't remember the rankings system within the novel. However, if this author somehow brings these info back later in the story I'll continue reading
catvi:To further clarify, even if you don't want a "FAST PACED, HIGH ACTION, ULTRA HAREM, OP MC", then this novel still is definitely not for you either. Because the novel doesn't have even a little bit of interesting character design or world building. No character development to speak of, mc gets everything handed to him by his ultra "Cheat" or bullshit luck plot armor. People instantly like him. No interesting conflict. Just huge information dumps. After 60 chapters what you have here is a few characters reciting a monster encyclopedia. If you want a "SLOW PACED STORY WITH INTERESTING WORLD BUILDING", skip this. But if you want a thesis paper with unnecessary details about why a giant lizard has poison attacks (a lizard which only appears in 2 chapters of this 60 chapter story, but had one whole chapter dedicated to explaining its characteristics), then this story is for you.
I almost fell out of my chair because I was laughing so hard from reading this! LOL
YASDASKAFRZ:TLDR: -OP thinks book is a long, slow paced infodump. -Commenter 1 disagrees, thinks that the book is slower than your average OP MC harem but isn’t really slow. -OP begs to differ -Commenter 2 thinks OP has an attention span shorter than a spirit-siphon goldfish and was offended -Commenter 3 thinks Commenter 2 went overboard in calling OP a fish brain -OP thinks Commenter 2 is butthurt, has no life, no wife, and should kill him self
Nope this guys spot on with his review I just go scrolling through chapters and 17 paragraphs later authors finally done talking about how amazing his ability to evolve pets and how hard it is for other people
ForcedToMake:To clarify this review, the author does give lots of information. However, this information is for world building and character depth primarily. I don't feel the dialogue is dry but its definitely not your "FAST PACED, HIGH ACTION, ULTRA HAREM, OP MC" novel - if you're looking for a slower novel with an interesting world design (not necessarily original world design, but seems to be well thought out so far) then definitely give this novel a try.
Can we just stop here please -_- We all have our own opinions okay? In my opinion, I would say the first few hundred chapters start out as an info dump, and for me, it only starts getting better at chapter 500+ or so, the info dumps don't appear frequently starting from there. Well, for me at least, since I may have become numb to the info dumps in the chapters :/ I read from the mtl, and I think you should atleast give it a try and read at least the first 80 chapters or so, its a good story to read while passing time. Now don't think I'm telling you to read it, it's your choice to read it or not. If you don't want to read it then you can just ignore this and be on with your day 😁