Very good novel, especially for the protagonist in search of a harem that I sincerely appreciate a lot, in addition to the possible big harem. Some may complain about the r-18 short scenes, but haven't you read the novel "dual cultivation"? That novel has few r-18 scenes and they're all just as short, but I don't see anyone complaining about that. Anyway, author, please don't drop this novel, it has a lot of potential. For my part I can only say that I loved it and I hope you continue like this.

Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem?

(Read to chapter 54) 1. It’s not exactly the flow of writing that’s a problem it’s more that clearly there’s been a lack of care in the editing and checking of grammar, spelling and punctuation making it not hard per se but irritating to read. 2. The story itself seems ok but it also seems quite rushed in some areas and the writing itself doesn’t absorb the reader. There are constant coincidences and plot armout. “You know that girl you had *** with? Turns out she has a special bloodline that means she can become super strong with you so that you can carry on having *** with her and have a superficial relationship!” 3. In my opinion, the mc has an unlikeable personality. He’s rash, arrogant and makes impulsive decisions. 4. The world building is pretty lackadaisical in my opinion. By the way, I’ve focused mainly on the negatives simply because they stand out more to me. It’s not terrible but it’s also not very immersive.

What a shame...... clearly it's a sketch of the novel profane prince of domination, however it's a little worse, mc poorly done, and the way you try to fragment the scenes is bad, after all it's not an anime, it doesn't flow .

Not every day I read a story with Genies 🧞‍♀️ !! Interesting story and its unique. Only thing thst needs improvement would be capitalization and punctuation errors need to be fixed in future updates. Krrp up the good work author!

Ways to survive the MC 1. Be Beautiful 2. Be hot 3. Be sexy 4. Have nice assets Only works for for females

Great book, underrated, good potential, awesome grammar, unique, great writing quality, and an awesome book so far with professional writing. What more to hope for.

Wow a very interesting novel the main character background Everything is awesome keep it up This is wonderful Please don't drop it the novel is very interesting wonderful thank you so much

heyo crazy cronie here, review on 24/01/2021 @chap100 review divided in: Short review Long review Ratings Conclusion short review: You came here for R-18? You are at the right place! You came here for A big harem? You are at the right place! long review: pros: 1) for those who came here for harem, yep this is for you.. this is really for you.. a very big harem novel 2) r-18 scenes short but great! Different set ups so yeah readers will enjoy it!! 3) some great comedy scenes, people might enjoy it... cons: 1) first 25 chapters mc is "inconsistent". The start is not great! 2) writing style becomes confusing (maybe only I am feeling this) 3) This really isn't romance. There are few scenes but not really romance RATINGS: writing: 8/10 update: 9/10 plot: 8/10 characters: 8/10 pacing: 8/10 dialogues: 8/10 entertainment: 9/10 OVERALL: 4.1/5 Conclusion: Read 25 chapters before thinking whether to continue this novel. World building I can't comment since it's only 100 chapters... A very enjoyable read for those who are searching for R-18 and a lil plot. To all the readers who enjoyed profane prince, this is a must for you!!!!