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Nate_Quinn
Nate_QuinnAuthor4yr
2021-01-15 14:24

Hey readers, this is the Author but you probably already knew that from the 'Author' tag in front of my name. This review is to give you a quick and fairly important rundown of my novel and not just as an excuse to rate myself 5 stars *wink*, so here goes... The MC, Hal, is a little irrational at the beginning but please blame this on the fact that he is in a new environment and believes he is trying to get a feel of the 'place'... so to speak. Also in the beginning, (Spoiler alert!) he tends to unlock new abilities just in time to save his life from stupid situations he put himself in (This is only in the first twenty chapters. more or less). This is my fault and I did not realise that it was recurring until a reader brought it to my attention. - All this faults are only really in the first few chapters and if you can please stick with it. it does get better and you might actually like them (the early chapters) as well. They are quite interesting If you like or can overlook those minor details. I was still new at the time but I am way better now. so please, .give my novel a try and be a tad bit nice in your comments and reviews. XD. - *Phew* Now that I've got that off my chest, I invite you to read and Enjoy this novel of mine. - (Spoiler Alert) It's awesome.

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Jalaluddinaris
JalaluddinarisLv14

Thanks for the info.

DarthQuil
DarthQuilLv11

You're doing a great job man. The plot,characters,comedy and its pacing is very good. Despite having a xianxia setting I like how it's not filled with the regular tropes, though you might wanna change the fact that he gets new powerups just before getting defeated in the early chaps. The only problem I have is the large number of typos and other little tidbits. Otherwise it's great.

Raven_Master
Raven_MasterLv14

make it a completely free novel and you'd have a lot more ppl reading just saying 🙄🤷🏻‍♀️🤷🏻‍♀️🤷🏻‍♀️🤷🏻‍♀️🙄

Burn_it
Burn_itLv2

this story is copie past from Profane prince bitch as mother MC whit demon blood MC hate man and want every girl in existence and to give u even more prof the father of amelia who is named ford have the same story as one of the father of a woman that F whit the MC right away ahh and the mother have special background and don't love her husband and will leav him for MC like nothing and the husband don't even give dam so this story for me is Drop ty

Nate_Quinn
Nate_QuinnAuthor

Please do not assume you know all that will happen in my novel!

Burn_it:this story is copie past from Profane prince bitch as mother MC whit demon blood MC hate man and want every girl in existence and to give u even more prof the father of amelia who is named ford have the same story as one of the father of a woman that F whit the MC right away ahh and the mother have special background and don't love her husband and will leav him for MC like nothing and the husband don't even give dam so this story for me is Drop ty
Triple_x
Triple_xLv10

Will her mother enter the harem later?

Jack_OFFICIAL
Jack_OFFICIALLv4

thank you far an amazing novel

Imactuallyverylazy
ImactuallyverylazyLv15

first: grammar. second: Konrad was awesome from Profane Prince and don't assume every book is the same with your pea-sized brain

Burn_it:this story is copie past from Profane prince bitch as mother MC whit demon blood MC hate man and want every girl in existence and to give u even more prof the father of amelia who is named ford have the same story as one of the father of a woman that F whit the MC right away ahh and the mother have special background and don't love her husband and will leav him for MC like nothing and the husband don't even give dam so this story for me is Drop ty
WISEDRAGON
WISEDRAGONLv6

Are the relationships in this novel serius or casual ? Casual relationships always give me the Ntr feeling you see

Nate_Quinn:Please do not assume you know all that will happen in my novel!
Alemax08
Alemax08Lv14

I'll give you my daily stones, but please! never stop writing it until you finished it and keep the novel being interesting and funny XD

schizocat
schizocatLv2

Who's the artist for the cover?

Diarkis
DiarkisLv12

Just don't stop writing

James_Collins_6428
James_Collins_6428Lv1

Hello dear friend Sophia how are you feeling today and I will love us to be good friends dear okay

schizocat:Who's the artist for the cover?
Cloudy_Blood
Cloudy_BloodLv5

do you have discord? i wish to join... [img=recommend]

PersonaJ
PersonaJLv15

Im having fun reading this novel at the Moment. just wanted to ask if you have a discord for the novel or plan to have one? It would be nice to see character art references or a glossary for example.

Nate_Quinn
Nate_QuinnAuthor

Not yet, but I am planning one...

Cloudy_Blood:do you have discord? i wish to join... [img=recommend]
Cloudy_Blood
Cloudy_BloodLv5

thanks!!

Nate_Quinn:Not yet, but I am planning one...
The_Starters
The_StartersLv1

number of people who will be in harem??

raynan
raynanLv10

No ntr?

Nate_Quinn:Not yet, but I am planning one...
raynan
raynanLv10

I wanted to refer to the novel, I'm sorry I'm new here on the site

raynan:No ntr?
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