Hey readers, this is the Author but you probably already knew that from the 'Author' tag in front of my name. This review is to give you a quick and fairly important rundown of my novel and not just as an excuse to rate myself 5 stars *wink*, so here goes... The MC, Hal, is a little irrational at the beginning but please blame this on the fact that he is in a new environment and believes he is trying to get a feel of the 'place'... so to speak. Also in the beginning, (Spoiler alert!) he tends to unlock new abilities just in time to save his life from stupid situations he put himself in (This is only in the first twenty chapters. more or less). This is my fault and I did not realise that it was recurring until a reader brought it to my attention. - All this faults are only really in the first few chapters and if you can please stick with it. it does get better and you might actually like them (the early chapters) as well. They are quite interesting If you like or can overlook those minor details. I was still new at the time but I am way better now. so please, .give my novel a try and be a tad bit nice in your comments and reviews. XD. - *Phew* Now that I've got that off my chest, I invite you to read and Enjoy this novel of mine. - (Spoiler Alert) It's awesome.

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(Read to chapter 54) 1. It’s not exactly the flow of writing that’s a problem it’s more that clearly there’s been a lack of care in the editing and checking of grammar, spelling and punctuation making it not hard per se but irritating to read. 2. The story itself seems ok but it also seems quite rushed in some areas and the writing itself doesn’t absorb the reader. There are constant coincidences and plot armout. “You know that girl you had *** with? Turns out she has a special bloodline that means she can become super strong with you so that you can carry on having *** with her and have a superficial relationship!” 3. In my opinion, the mc has an unlikeable personality. He’s rash, arrogant and makes impulsive decisions. 4. The world building is pretty lackadaisical in my opinion. By the way, I’ve focused mainly on the negatives simply because they stand out more to me. It’s not terrible but it’s also not very immersive.

What a shame...... clearly it's a sketch of the novel profane prince of domination, however it's a little worse, mc poorly done, and the way you try to fragment the scenes is bad, after all it's not an anime, it doesn't flow .

Not every day I read a story with Genies 🧞‍♀️ !! Interesting story and its unique. Only thing thst needs improvement would be capitalization and punctuation errors need to be fixed in future updates. Krrp up the good work author!

Ways to survive the MC 1. Be Beautiful 2. Be hot 3. Be sexy 4. Have nice assets Only works for for females

Great book, underrated, good potential, awesome grammar, unique, great writing quality, and an awesome book so far with professional writing. What more to hope for.

Wow a very interesting novel the main character background Everything is awesome keep it up This is wonderful Please don't drop it the novel is very interesting wonderful thank you so much

heyo crazy cronie here, review on 24/01/2021 @chap100 review divided in: Short review Long review Ratings Conclusion short review: You came here for R-18? You are at the right place! You came here for A big harem? You are at the right place! long review: pros: 1) for those who came here for harem, yep this is for you.. this is really for you.. a very big harem novel 2) r-18 scenes short but great! Different set ups so yeah readers will enjoy it!! 3) some great comedy scenes, people might enjoy it... cons: 1) first 25 chapters mc is "inconsistent". The start is not great! 2) writing style becomes confusing (maybe only I am feeling this) 3) This really isn't romance. There are few scenes but not really romance RATINGS: writing: 8/10 update: 9/10 plot: 8/10 characters: 8/10 pacing: 8/10 dialogues: 8/10 entertainment: 9/10 OVERALL: 4.1/5 Conclusion: Read 25 chapters before thinking whether to continue this novel. World building I can't comment since it's only 100 chapters... A very enjoyable read for those who are searching for R-18 and a lil plot. To all the readers who enjoyed profane prince, this is a must for you!!!!