Item: Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector
Rating: 2
Author: Kratsel

KratselLv23yr

2021-04-27 06:41

Very boring start of the story, and the MC is of course a prodigy and better than everyone in every way possible, except his personality which is just a weak minded little beta boy. Would hate to meet this kind of person irl.

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