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Hit1903Lv44yr
2020-12-02 21:20

There are so many problems in this story that I don't know from where to begin. This can't be called a story. Its just a wish fulfilment. First, he is angry with dumbledore about not getting his kidnappers death due to his meddling. He even become his friend. And that 5th year being a head boy... it was just ridiculous. Him apolozing to everybody, even ron when he didn't do anything wrong as they were the ones who started it. You gave mercy to luscious just to save canon. You knew dumbledore let harry be abused and your reaction was okay. I will just heal the damage. And most of all, he acted all smiles in front of harry and told him to "tough" it out when marge came instead of helping him. These are just I remember. There are at least triple of what I don't remember.

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yeah, I like the book but the head boy thing was always a little ridiculous.

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