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2022-10-08 06:38

If you want to feel EMPTY read it. I know it's dramatic, but if you read attentively you'll realise it soon. I honestly don't know how the original author even wrote it, for it to have a rewrite. The blatant disregard for life irks me a bit, when the MC moves across different civilisations in search for 'power', only to leave them knowing that they will be left to near-extinction. Even when he makes emotional connections with them, he just leaves. But sometimes when in the spur of the moment he 'recruits' someone only to fill the void of his own loneliness. It's selfish and disgusting, but I guess he can always use the excuse that he is immortal. If this happened in IRL, he would basically just destroy the planet himself after taking what he wanted, but for a novel - the plot thickens.

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