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ehhh not the best story tbh. The first two chapters are a joke so ignore them and don't judge the rest of the fanfic on them. The main problem I have with this story is the mc's personality is a joke. It's like a child throwing a tantrum not getting his way. After all these years he never matures, its always the same child tantrum personality. We see no growth, no changes. The author says the mc gets depressed etc but that's the thing he says it but doesn't show it. All that is shown is again the childish tantrum. No changes. Honestly for me, this just pure and plainly ruins the rest of the story. I just can't like the story when the mc is like that. Gl to the author but yeah

First heheheh Well, I loved the Original one and I hope that I'll loved this one just as much as the First;). can't be worse,aye?😁

i'm a fan of the original hehehe. good luck author, remember that even thought some people downgrade you, there are still others supporting you hehehe. good luck!

Meh. A little interesting at first but it eventually got boring.

Honest Review : Writing Quality: 4*. Why ? Mistakes which is common in most pieces on this site so it's not as bad as some normally are. Update: 5* Nice and consistent so far ! This' where the low numbers come in... Story Development: 3.5*. It's a DC original story yet things are happening and aren't being explained well at all... Honestly it feels rushed, but not rushed enough. As in his interactions are poor to the story, and it's annoying too follow the weird journey with what powers he has. Character Design: 2*. And by god does it deserve such a low number ! His personality changes every 30 seconds. 'I'll kill you' 'Oh, you and your whole team and elder provoked and attacked me with the intent to kill, let me injure you, heal you and let you stomp on my pride !'. His whole schtick is him being unable to fully die and when he does die to become stronger to summarise, he should be a fucking god by now yet he still 'requests' things. I get this may be me being a prick, but I find the MC being too stupid at times and him not being arrogant enough for his power. This whole thing seems to be turning into an English version of a Chinese Martial Arts novel... <- to put it bluntly. World Background: 3.5*. It's DC yet we've seen nothing much that shows its DC or that we will get to see anything soon... the martians, cool, half the stuff in that arc were rushed and made little sense. I don't even know what's happening in these latest chapters, I'm just trying to push through and hope that when he finally gets to modern time with the JLA that he doesnt suddenly gets nerfed and becomes a bitch. Anyways this' my personal, long review hurray! Everyones entitled to their own opinion, and this' mine so yeh... Still a better read than half the shit on here.

This is so bad... Basically, MC is OP right from the start, thing is, he is a bully with a build in revenge system that makes him immortal and able to kill the shit that got him, that's the power, next we have a man child trowing tantrums left and right. this is garbage.

Had a great start, foundation and idea but the more chapters you read the more disappointed you become. The mc becomes incredibly annoying to read about. Every chapter ppl are complaining in the comments. It drifts away from the dc atmosphere. I’m just disappointed bc this fanfic could’ve been so amazing with the unique wishes and setting but I think I’ll just stop here . Anyway good luck author

rutheless mc my ass and let's be honest the tribe probably would of tried to kill him when he liquefied that beast, like this mc is a pussy atleast at the start