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Aeternabilis
AeternabilisLv144yr
2020-09-17 07:02

ehhh not the best story tbh. The first two chapters are a joke so ignore them and don't judge the rest of the fanfic on them. The main problem I have with this story is the mc's personality is a joke. It's like a child throwing a tantrum not getting his way. After all these years he never matures, its always the same child tantrum personality. We see no growth, no changes. The author says the mc gets depressed etc but that's the thing he says it but doesn't show it. All that is shown is again the childish tantrum. No changes. Honestly for me, this just pure and plainly ruins the rest of the story. I just can't like the story when the mc is like that. Gl to the author but yeah

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The_Stone_Age
The_Stone_AgeLv4

The original story was a lot better than this, the mc wasn't doing a lot of mistakes he acted how somebody who died so many times and has so much experience should. i dropped this after continue reading on the chapter that i was on in the original Story, why? because they completly changed the personality of the mc in the first chapter they made. He became a beta mc and acted like a 15 year old. It came to my attention that im still mad at this author for destroying one of my Favorite Story's (even tho it's been like one year)

DeejaeSutherland
DeejaeSutherlandLv14

I just don't know the point of naming it the Last Revenant? because I've read the reviews, and I don't get it, besides the point of him coming back from being dead.

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Pegasus100
Pegasus100Lv1

Honest Review : Writing Quality: 4*. Why ? Mistakes which is common in most pieces on this site so it's not as bad as some normally are. Update: 5* Nice and consistent so far ! This' where the low numbers come in... Story Development: 3.5*. It's a DC original story yet things are happening and aren't being explained well at all... Honestly it feels rushed, but not rushed enough. As in his interactions are poor to the story, and it's annoying too follow the weird journey with what powers he has. Character Design: 2*. And by god does it deserve such a low number ! His personality changes every 30 seconds. 'I'll kill you' 'Oh, you and your whole team and elder provoked and attacked me with the intent to kill, let me injure you, heal you and let you stomp on my pride !'. His whole schtick is him being unable to fully die and when he does die to become stronger to summarise, he should be a fucking god by now yet he still 'requests' things. I get this may be me being a prick, but I find the MC being too stupid at times and him not being arrogant enough for his power. This whole thing seems to be turning into an English version of a Chinese Martial Arts novel... <- to put it bluntly. World Background: 3.5*. It's DC yet we've seen nothing much that shows its DC or that we will get to see anything soon... the martians, cool, half the stuff in that arc were rushed and made little sense. I don't even know what's happening in these latest chapters, I'm just trying to push through and hope that when he finally gets to modern time with the JLA that he doesnt suddenly gets nerfed and becomes a bitch. Anyways this' my personal, long review hurray! Everyones entitled to their own opinion, and this' mine so yeh... Still a better read than half the shit on here.

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