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Pegasus100
Pegasus100Lv14yr
2020-10-16 08:27

Honest Review : Writing Quality: 4*. Why ? Mistakes which is common in most pieces on this site so it's not as bad as some normally are. Update: 5* Nice and consistent so far ! This' where the low numbers come in... Story Development: 3.5*. It's a DC original story yet things are happening and aren't being explained well at all... Honestly it feels rushed, but not rushed enough. As in his interactions are poor to the story, and it's annoying too follow the weird journey with what powers he has. Character Design: 2*. And by god does it deserve such a low number ! His personality changes every 30 seconds. 'I'll kill you' 'Oh, you and your whole team and elder provoked and attacked me with the intent to kill, let me injure you, heal you and let you stomp on my pride !'. His whole schtick is him being unable to fully die and when he does die to become stronger to summarise, he should be a fucking god by now yet he still 'requests' things. I get this may be me being a prick, but I find the MC being too stupid at times and him not being arrogant enough for his power. This whole thing seems to be turning into an English version of a Chinese Martial Arts novel... <- to put it bluntly. World Background: 3.5*. It's DC yet we've seen nothing much that shows its DC or that we will get to see anything soon... the martians, cool, half the stuff in that arc were rushed and made little sense. I don't even know what's happening in these latest chapters, I'm just trying to push through and hope that when he finally gets to modern time with the JLA that he doesnt suddenly gets nerfed and becomes a bitch. Anyways this' my personal, long review hurray! Everyones entitled to their own opinion, and this' mine so yeh... Still a better read than half the shit on here.

Zenith: Last Revenant

Shaele
4.4
104 Chs

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Jasonenrick
JasonenrickLv14

Well, everything except the Last chapters where he is on this Dragon Ball Planet xD is from another Author...so ...

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Origin_Saint
Origin_SaintLv14

Damn bro, you ruthless

Jasonenrick:Well, everything except the Last chapters where he is on this Dragon Ball Planet xD is from another Author...so ...
3yr
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Jasonenrick
JasonenrickLv14

I mean, it's true! The Original author wrote everything up to the Dragon Ball Planet Arc but dropped it because it consumed too much of his precious time. So, he found another author, and Shale, the author now continued writing this amazing Dc-Universe Novel. But we are all homies so it's not like I wanted to diss someone with this comment of mine. #CornbringerSquat #Devil

Origin_Saint:Damn bro, you ruthless
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Origin_Saint
Origin_SaintLv14

I see you know of the might cornbringer, is this devilsquat another godly author

Jasonenrick:I mean, it's true! The Original author wrote everything up to the Dragon Ball Planet Arc but dropped it because it consumed too much of his precious time. So, he found another author, and Shale, the author now continued writing this amazing Dc-Universe Novel. But we are all homies so it's not like I wanted to diss someone with this comment of mine. #CornbringerSquat #Devil
3yr
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Origin_Saint
Origin_SaintLv14

I know you weren't trying to Diss him though, and u actually agree with you the story seriously started detoriating in quality at that point, doesn't necessarily mean his a bad author but that's the risk of picking up someone else's story you night not be able to catch their flow

Jasonenrick:I mean, it's true! The Original author wrote everything up to the Dragon Ball Planet Arc but dropped it because it consumed too much of his precious time. So, he found another author, and Shale, the author now continued writing this amazing Dc-Universe Novel. But we are all homies so it's not like I wanted to diss someone with this comment of mine. #CornbringerSquat #Devil
3yr
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Jasonenrick
JasonenrickLv14

No, brother from another mother. It is the Devil Frame Squat. And your Profile demands good Reincarnation/Tramsmigrate Stories.......so here we go. One Piece: Reborn as a Fishman by HolyJoker (#HolyJokerSquat hehe, all his stories are good and most are finished) on Webnovel. The Greatest Sith by EternalMonarch on Webnovel. Dragon in the Multiverse by TeeNo on Webnovel. The Great Lion by LargeFarva on Webnovel. The Strongest Omni Traveler by Magnus08 on Webnovel. Transmigrated in the World of My Wife is a beautiful Ceo by CrummyBread on Webnovel. etc etc, I have a lot more but I spent most of the time on websites such as Fanfiction.net or spacebattles. Bye brother from another mother and may you be blessed by the Cornbringer and the Holy Joker.

Origin_Saint:I see you know of the might cornbringer, is this devilsquat another godly author
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Origin_Saint
Origin_SaintLv14

Thank you brother, for this much needed benediction, while I have been blessed enough to be touched by cornbringer and the holyjoker, also having met good fortune and come across the greatest lion, I still have recieved new enlightenment from this post, stay blessed brother

Jasonenrick:No, brother from another mother. It is the Devil Frame Squat. And your Profile demands good Reincarnation/Tramsmigrate Stories.......so here we go. One Piece: Reborn as a Fishman by HolyJoker (#HolyJokerSquat hehe, all his stories are good and most are finished) on Webnovel. The Greatest Sith by EternalMonarch on Webnovel. Dragon in the Multiverse by TeeNo on Webnovel. The Great Lion by LargeFarva on Webnovel. The Strongest Omni Traveler by Magnus08 on Webnovel. Transmigrated in the World of My Wife is a beautiful Ceo by CrummyBread on Webnovel. etc etc, I have a lot more but I spent most of the time on websites such as Fanfiction.net or spacebattles. Bye brother from another mother and may you be blessed by the Cornbringer and the Holy Joker.
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If you want to start reading this novel don't bother with first 20 or so chapters. I can summarize it in a sentance or so. Guy dies, comes back stronger eats the thing that killed him. Rinse and fuc*ing repeat. When he comes in contact with primitve humans it starts going interesting but his behaviour is annoying. He develpos a God complex in a world like DC. It is so comedic he thinks of himself as a God while he cant even leave a planet until he gets mutant powers. And even with his body strenght (which he still hasnt mastered or used to full ponential) he goes and dables in some mutant energy bull*hit. Idea is good execution is so-so at best. I dont understand the point of first 20 or so chapters. Him leaving his kingdom which he half assedly built. For whatever reason. He uses woman (primitive but woman) as a breeding mares. He is hypocritical to extreme. I find him Issei level annoying. Honestly if you literally have nothing else to read you can check this out but I can't really recommend, it sorry to both authors for this harsh review but this is how I geniuenly feel about this one. Sorry.

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i'm a fan of the original hehehe. good luck author, remember that even thought some people downgrade you, there are still others supporting you hehehe. good luck!

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Aelyx_BlackfyreLv11

Had a great start, foundation and idea but the more chapters you read the more disappointed you become. The mc becomes incredibly annoying to read about. Every chapter ppl are complaining in the comments. It drifts away from the dc atmosphere. I’m just disappointed bc this fanfic could’ve been so amazing with the unique wishes and setting but I think I’ll just stop here . Anyway good luck author

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Uchiha_Lover21
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rutheless mc my ass and let's be honest the tribe probably would of tried to kill him when he liquefied that beast, like this mc is a pussy atleast at the start

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