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They have holography?
How many times will ben smirk bro
Too late to say that after he cried infront of a bunch of 10y olds
If u r an adult, do u cry if u get frustrated infront of kids?
chin ching chong chong?
Not in ur country bro, change the name
How did he get excellent memory?
Introduced a side character, related her to mc and killed her off in next chap. MC just straight up forgot her existence. If u r making a novel realistic, go all the way dude.
MC a psychopath or what? No anger, no frustration, no rage. He even have time to joke around. Make the mc a human not a fuckin machine