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2024-01-30 03:31

Surprisingly it is a masterpiece, this novel is exactly what we expect to see from the war&military genre

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Hey there, author here! So, I am going to rate my own story and leave this review for those who might get interested in giving it a try after reding through the synopsis. Also, please, if you are liking this novel leave your review and slowly move your fingers to that little "vote" button (press it!). HUEHUEHUE *evil laugh* - "Thank you! my dear reader!" Writing Quality – First of all, I would like to emphasize that English is not my first language and I have been studying it for five years. So, I might make a few mistakes here and there. However, I am always proofreading and using softwares to improve the writing. Story Development – I don’t think that the story development is going to deviate much from other novels. However, as a reader, I have always been losing myself when an author drifts too apart from a chronological line of events, so I am going to follow as much as possible an established order. I don’t want to write something confusing. Now, talking about the pace of the story, the start is going to be a bit chaotic, due to the situation that the MC finds himself in. However, the future chapters are going to slowly cement a flow. Character Design – I have always loved characters that are rational, self-centered, somewhat arrogant, and confident. Someone who is always planning and thinking how they can get the most of a situation, but still maintains certain values. This is the MC that I am trying to build. As for the other characters, I will be setting them according to the story’s progression. (I don't have but a few important character planned). Updating Stability – Around 2-3 chapters/week. I may exceed that amount if I have enough free time. World Background – It’s a world filled with different species, where all beings can become stronger through Mana. A world that is in the point of “rupture”. I know it’s a common setting, but I will be adding things up as the chapters are updates. However, I plan on doing a good job on that. (I hope) If you have read the synopsis and this review, and liked it, please consider giving this book a try. "Also, don't forget to leave your vote and a review if you liked this work" - The author wrote, with hopeful eyes, waiting for your response. - "Thank you!"

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