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Stoicist
StoicistAuthor2yr
2023-01-27 11:03

Hey there, author here! So, I am going to rate my own story and leave this review for those who might get interested in giving it a try after reding through the synopsis. Also, please, if you are liking this novel leave your review and slowly move your fingers to that little "vote" button (press it!). HUEHUEHUE *evil laugh* - "Thank you! my dear reader!" Writing Quality – First of all, I would like to emphasize that English is not my first language and I have been studying it for five years. So, I might make a few mistakes here and there. However, I am always proofreading and using softwares to improve the writing. Story Development – I don’t think that the story development is going to deviate much from other novels. However, as a reader, I have always been losing myself when an author drifts too apart from a chronological line of events, so I am going to follow as much as possible an established order. I don’t want to write something confusing. Now, talking about the pace of the story, the start is going to be a bit chaotic, due to the situation that the MC finds himself in. However, the future chapters are going to slowly cement a flow. Character Design – I have always loved characters that are rational, self-centered, somewhat arrogant, and confident. Someone who is always planning and thinking how they can get the most of a situation, but still maintains certain values. This is the MC that I am trying to build. As for the other characters, I will be setting them according to the story’s progression. (I don't have but a few important character planned). Updating Stability – Around 2-3 chapters/week. I may exceed that amount if I have enough free time. World Background – It’s a world filled with different species, where all beings can become stronger through Mana. A world that is in the point of “rupture”. I know it’s a common setting, but I will be adding things up as the chapters are updates. However, I plan on doing a good job on that. (I hope) If you have read the synopsis and this review, and liked it, please consider giving this book a try. "Also, don't forget to leave your vote and a review if you liked this work" - The author wrote, with hopeful eyes, waiting for your response. - "Thank you!"

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Stoicist
StoicistAuthor

Sorry, but no harem in sight. (I might change this later on, but, for now, it's not in my plans.)

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king2005
king2005Lv4

Romance??

Stoicist:Sorry, but no harem in sight. (I might change this later on, but, for now, it's not in my plans.)
Stoicist
StoicistAuthor

Sure thing!

king2005:Romance??
Maedreas
MaedreasLv13

hope u wont change your mind

Stoicist:Sorry, but no harem in sight. (I might change this later on, but, for now, it's not in my plans.)
Lee_Sooyeon123
Lee_Sooyeon123Lv4

author can you put khalid ibn al-walid the most undefeated general in Islam please

4rthr77
4rthr77Lv2

esse huehue entregou kkkkk, aliás concordo que sem harem seria melhor.

Stoicist
StoicistAuthor

Sempre!

4rthr77:esse huehue entregou kkkkk, aliás concordo que sem harem seria melhor.
Stoicist
StoicistAuthor

I will do some research on him and see if I can add him somewhere around, maybe I can utilize some of his tactics. Thank you for the support!

Lee_Sooyeon123:author can you put khalid ibn al-walid the most undefeated general in Islam please
RyuSenju
RyuSenjuLv13

I'm only here for the kingdom building and romance

Stoicist:Sure thing!
Lee_Sooyeon123
Lee_Sooyeon123Lv4

mc used khalid ibn al-walid tactics to defeat desert army right can you put it please

Stoicist:I will do some research on him and see if I can add him somewhere around, maybe I can utilize some of his tactics. Thank you for the support!
Lee_Sooyeon123
Lee_Sooyeon123Lv4

rules of war

Harith_TM
Harith_TMLv15

if this is true, most ppl and ven believers of the same religions dont do by that so... i can say, in war is win what matter, winner decide and looser can just accept.....

Lee_Sooyeon123:rules of war
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KSATRIA
KSATRIALv11

HHHHHAAAAAARRRRRREEEEEEEMMMM!!!!

Stoicist:Sorry, but no harem in sight. (I might change this later on, but, for now, it's not in my plans.)
KottuRoti
KottuRotiLv12

Don’t change keep it no harem 😁

Stoicist:Sorry, but no harem in sight. (I might change this later on, but, for now, it's not in my plans.)
Maedreas
MaedreasLv13

read for now i am out if it changes to harem

Stoicist:Sorry, but no harem in sight. (I might change this later on, but, for now, it's not in my plans.)
Fallen_Angel777
Fallen_Angel777Lv4

harem nah one or two love interest is fine by me , keep up the good work🍻

Sad_Armadillo
Sad_ArmadilloLv15

Please no harem.

Stoicist:Sorry, but no harem in sight. (I might change this later on, but, for now, it's not in my plans.)
Lizardzzz
LizardzzzLv11

no harem please. I has dropped a lot of novel bc the author decided to change to harem😔

Stoicist:Sorry, but no harem in sight. (I might change this later on, but, for now, it's not in my plans.)
ageless_heart
ageless_heartLv13

Bro don’t write a harem if your a beginner writer romance isn’t easy to write also harder when add multiple people

Stoicist:Sorry, but no harem in sight. (I might change this later on, but, for now, it's not in my plans.)
Stoicist
StoicistAuthor

Not on my radar for now! Thank you for the support!!

Lizardzzz:no harem please. I has dropped a lot of novel bc the author decided to change to harem😔
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