Hey there, author here! So, I am going to rate my own story and leave this review for those who might get interested in giving it a try after reding through the synopsis. Also, please, if you are liking this novel leave your review and slowly move your fingers to that little "vote" button (press it!). HUEHUEHUE *evil laugh* - "Thank you! my dear reader!" Writing Quality – First of all, I would like to emphasize that English is not my first language and I have been studying it for five years. So, I might make a few mistakes here and there. However, I am always proofreading and using softwares to improve the writing. Story Development – I don’t think that the story development is going to deviate much from other novels. However, as a reader, I have always been losing myself when an author drifts too apart from a chronological line of events, so I am going to follow as much as possible an established order. I don’t want to write something confusing. Now, talking about the pace of the story, the start is going to be a bit chaotic, due to the situation that the MC finds himself in. However, the future chapters are going to slowly cement a flow. Character Design – I have always loved characters that are rational, self-centered, somewhat arrogant, and confident. Someone who is always planning and thinking how they can get the most of a situation, but still maintains certain values. This is the MC that I am trying to build. As for the other characters, I will be setting them according to the story’s progression. (I don't have but a few important character planned). Updating Stability – Around 2-3 chapters/week. I may exceed that amount if I have enough free time. World Background – It’s a world filled with different species, where all beings can become stronger through Mana. A world that is in the point of “rupture”. I know it’s a common setting, but I will be adding things up as the chapters are updates. However, I plan on doing a good job on that. (I hope) If you have read the synopsis and this review, and liked it, please consider giving this book a try. "Also, don't forget to leave your vote and a review if you liked this work" - The author wrote, with hopeful eyes, waiting for your response. - "Thank you!"
Liked by 41 people
LIKESorry, but no harem in sight. (I might change this later on, but, for now, it's not in my plans.)
Romance??
Sure thing!
hope u wont change your mind
author can you put khalid ibn al-walid the most undefeated general in Islam please
esse huehue entregou kkkkk, aliás concordo que sem harem seria melhor.
Sempre!
I will do some research on him and see if I can add him somewhere around, maybe I can utilize some of his tactics. Thank you for the support!
I'm only here for the kingdom building and romance
mc used khalid ibn al-walid tactics to defeat desert army right can you put it please
rules of war
if this is true, most ppl and ven believers of the same religions dont do by that so... i can say, in war is win what matter, winner decide and looser can just accept.....
HHHHHAAAAAARRRRRREEEEEEEMMMM!!!!
Don’t change keep it no harem 😁
read for now i am out if it changes to harem
harem nah one or two love interest is fine by me , keep up the good work🍻
Please no harem.
no harem please. I has dropped a lot of novel bc the author decided to change to harem😔
Bro don’t write a harem if your a beginner writer romance isn’t easy to write also harder when add multiple people
Not on my radar for now! Thank you for the support!!
