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kanekiUchiha25
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2023-06-04 18:24

Author stop trying to add the need to be ethical in the MC's personality, we're not children,we understand that humans are selfish and are driven by ambition,cause at this point it's almost as tho you try label everyone the MC goes up against as 'evil',no is evil,people just have conflicting interests,other than this there's not much to complain about,keep up the good work💯

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kanekiUchiha25
kanekiUchiha25Lv4

But then again these problems don't appear often in your novel,so don't mind me

June08
June08Lv12

yes 💯

darangelortiz
darangelortizLv14

People are evil my guy since there are acts like grape and abuse that give no benefit and people still do it just want to clear that up not trying to dog on you for it

Iwill_Meetu
Iwill_MeetuLv4

you really don't get it, if you want to expand your country, regardless of whether the neighbouring country is evil or not, you still have to conquer them of you want to expand. Doesn't mean you're evil it's just ambition, going for what you need, putting yourself first, putting your people above those of other countries. People are just people, they can do either good or evil, your best friend the ine you trust most can betray you ans your most hated enemy can be the person who helps you when you're down and no one else care to. It's called human potential, what you choose to do is what people judge you to be. but real life isn't all black and white, a convicted killer could have been killing the man who killed his family. Was he wrong, yes but it's understandable. A thief could have just been stealing to feed his family so they don't go hungry. Is he wrong, yes, but it's understandable.

darangelortiz:People are evil my guy since there are acts like grape and abuse that give no benefit and people still do it just want to clear that up not trying to dog on you for it
Suk_min_Tak
Suk_min_TakLv3

damn you good.👍👍👍😁

Iwill_Meetu:you really don't get it, if you want to expand your country, regardless of whether the neighbouring country is evil or not, you still have to conquer them of you want to expand. Doesn't mean you're evil it's just ambition, going for what you need, putting yourself first, putting your people above those of other countries. People are just people, they can do either good or evil, your best friend the ine you trust most can betray you ans your most hated enemy can be the person who helps you when you're down and no one else care to. It's called human potential, what you choose to do is what people judge you to be. but real life isn't all black and white, a convicted killer could have been killing the man who killed his family. Was he wrong, yes but it's understandable. A thief could have just been stealing to feed his family so they don't go hungry. Is he wrong, yes, but it's understandable.
LifeIsStage
LifeIsStageLv4

stupid

Suk_min_Tak:damn you good.👍👍👍😁
LifeIsStage
LifeIsStageLv4

stupid

Suk_min_Tak:damn you good.👍👍👍😁
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