I am just a shameless writer rating my own fanfic i just wants people to read my fanfic and tell me what they think and as i said above its my first time writing so please go easy on me

I'm liking the story so far very few people have stuff updating I do hope author looks at my comment on his latest chapter on the last paragraph I put some suggestions I think would help

Just an honest and realist review ... For any guys, this fanfic in english is just terrible, google trad is better that this. Reading this make me sick .. . Otherwise, story is classic enough ... just see where this is going, when there will be more chapter. **: This is a fanfic and should be in the fanfic section 😒

REALLY really Really Really Great 👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌 Keep up the good work 👍👌👏👏👌👍👏👏👍👍👏👍👏👍👌👏👌👍👌👏👌👌👍👌👌👌

The story is really good, it showed me different outcomes of the canon characters actions. Furthermore, it’s a reincarnation fic with the MC’s romantic interest being Rosalie

so far one of the best I have seen. great story 👏, can't wait for more, hope you keep up with new chapters 😀 🧒✌😊😊😊😊📔📔📔📔📔📔📔📔📔📔

Writing Quality: 3 stars, its readable but there are too many mistakes, not using a period or having some words stuck together. Stability of Updates: 5 stars, the story is already finished so you wouldn't have to worry about any updates, though the first 20 chaps are really long which is nice. Story Development: 5 stars, I like the development, some would say that the story progressed too fast however you gotta remember that the whole novel is 52chaps and not 300+. this novel is simply written for people to enjoy/read in a day. Character Design: 5 stars, if were talking about all characters then i think they're all written correctly, idk about how they are in the original novel but as far as i read from other fanfics/movies i think author did a good job. mc's personality not bad.👍 World Background: 4 stars, everything is the same as the movie however there are some nice twists here and there, though I think the story about how the first vampire/werewolf/shifters were created was a bit lackluster or better said boring that's why 4 stars. Also author kept mentioning the first werewolf and that mc was supposed to kill him, but that never happened. If I have to give author any tips it would be to try and fix your grammar, even if its not your main language you could still do better in writing, you don't use any question marks/ exclamation marks/ period, you also forget to put spaces a lot of times. Anyway thanks for the nice fanfic author and I hope you write another one in the same world soon.

Not a quality ff, and the first chapters Are rushed, too OP, without much explanation. It seems to me the author wanted to add all the fun things at the same time so he could write his own story in the twilight universe. I mean, that's ff so we can't be too demanding. But as a STORY and not just ff I think the author need to rewrite a bit. It has potential, and if in the futur the author try to ameliorate his/ her writing quality, the backroung and character design, I will read it with delight ! Thank you for trying. Good luck.

I like the story but reading it makes me feel dyslexic. Do not read if you cant handle extremely bad grammar and spelling mistakes in almost every sentence.