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GoWithTheFlow
GoWithTheFlowLv114yr
2021-04-13 21:36

Lemme just say this a great and finish this review quickly for people that just came here to look at the reviews a little. Pros: -mc isn’t a wimp -mc isn’t a simp - mc doesn’t seek a giant harem but has some of the most beautiful women in the world that are in love with him (some are obsessed) -unlike other harems the harem members don’t suddenly disappear only to never be heard of again. They are almost always with him and he cares for his women ALOOOOOOT. - he does not go around acting chummy and trusts everyone he meets. Has a heart that does not let others in easily as he went through some stuff in his childhood. Currently has a low number of people he “trusts” that can only be counted on ones fingers. -harem members actually have a personality and aren’t bland like so many other novels I read. -novel isnt very cliche other than the fact that a lot of people near him turn out to be op. But the reason they are actually makes sense unlike the others novels where mc picks up random girl that’s struggling in some weird way and WOAH WHO WOULDA THOUGHT SHE ACTUALLY HAS A SUPER INFINITY DIVINE HEAVENLY SOVEREIGN YIN YANG SPIRIT ROOT AND CONSTITUTION OF THE ANCIENT EVIL FIENDGODS AND ALSO SHES HEAVENLY EMPERORS DAUGHTER??!!!?!?. it makes sense cause though he hasn’t revealed it yet it’s obvious that most of the girls with him are due to some events mentioned in some of the earlier chapters. Mostly having to do with destiny(you’ll understand if you read it) - this could also be a con for some but you can simply skip if if you don’t like it as it wouldn’t matter much to the story. The story isn’t filled with lusty mc that bangs everyone and so far there haven’t been much smutty or $ex scenes ( whatever you wanna call it) but some people might like that so maybe you think this shouldn’t be on the PROS list but whatever. -mc does not back away from a challenge as he considers himself to be “extremely prideful” which leads him to be arrogant but it’s not the annoying kind. When he’s arrogant it’s funny to watch cause he embarrasses tf outta other people lol. Mc has only ran away from a battle twice but that’s only cause he wasn’t expecting it in the first place. The first one, though he was very weak at the time, he managed to counterattack the one that attacked him and swore he would someday kill him. The second one was already resolved by him. - mc isn’t stupid and not once has he put his loved in a a dangerous position cause of his actions. He also never lets someone get away from him. You know how mc in other novels fights a young master and young master gets defeated and shouts “ ILL BE BACK FOR REVENGE!!!!” While getting hauled away by his loyal bootlickers and mc just watches them leave like a total retard? Mc here did it a few times and that’s only because he was smart and noticed it would be disadvantage but finished what they started a few chapters later. - mc does not start as crippled trash ugly man with no talent. He was born and raised an orphan(don’t worry you won’t have to learn about his Chili’s hood by reading a lot of chapters) but was adopted into a family of some pretty noble people and become a very refined man. Looks normal at start but soon becomes one of the most handsome in the world( for those who don’t like normal looking mc) -not sure there are a few more but this is already too long and I doubt anyone would see this or especially read to the end. Cons: -sometimes the naming system is weird but it gets fixed in the later chapters. -author sometimes confuses names but that’s is also fixed in the later chapters. Lol that’s all I can think off. Anyway I’m waiting for more cause I finished all this in a day

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XIETIAN
XIETIANAuthor

Thanks for the review <3

GoWithTheFlow
GoWithTheFlowLv11

thanks for writing this novel!! Keep up the good work! This story is great because it isn’t always cliche like countless other novels and is a breath of fresh air.

el_pistolero
el_pistoleroLv1

Thanks for the review

Retarded_Reader
Retarded_ReaderLv4

Thanks for the review

Devoid_of_Emotion
Devoid_of_EmotionLv13

lol, picking up girst and so many surprize HAHAHAHA

Worn_out_by
Worn_out_byLv15

Yo you have been posting chapters for your new novel but not this one for almost a month is this one put on the back burner now with your newest novel? Because thats wack if thats the case

XIETIAN:Thanks for the review <3
XIETIAN
XIETIANAuthor

I am focusing on BW because it is currently participating in a competition and could win an anime adaptation or a movie. That's why Samsara is on hiatus and only gets chapters when I have free time.

Worn_out_by:Yo you have been posting chapters for your new novel but not this one for almost a month is this one put on the back burner now with your newest novel? Because thats wack if thats the case
AldiTaher
AldiTaherLv13

Its ok to pursue a chance winning an anime or movie , but i think its better if you also continue your samsara... 2 novel but both still premature , kinda disapointing...

XIETIAN:I am focusing on BW because it is currently participating in a competition and could win an anime adaptation or a movie. That's why Samsara is on hiatus and only gets chapters when I have free time.
XIETIAN
XIETIANAuthor

If you cant wait you can drop it I already gave my answer and I think I didnt owe nothing to you

AldiTaher:Its ok to pursue a chance winning an anime or movie , but i think its better if you also continue your samsara... 2 novel but both still premature , kinda disapointing...
Worn_out_by
Worn_out_byLv15

Any news considering your other novel is catching up to posted chapters to this one will you start this one up again

XIETIAN:Thanks for the review <3
XIETIAN
XIETIANAuthor

The competition is not over yet and even then I myself need to reread several things that I need to refresh in my memory. It will probably take about 1 month and a half (that's my estimate, nothing 100% sure as it could be more or it could be less time).

Worn_out_by:Any news considering your other novel is catching up to posted chapters to this one will you start this one up again
Anonymous_Reader06
Anonymous_Reader06Lv14

So there's still hope !

XIETIAN:The competition is not over yet and even then I myself need to reread several things that I need to refresh in my memory. It will probably take about 1 month and a half (that's my estimate, nothing 100% sure as it could be more or it could be less time).
Spekratu
SpekratuLv2

this is quickly?!??!

Maakachoda
MaakachodaLv12

this mAkes me dont want to read this

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XIETIAN
XIETIANAuthor

I decided to remove the previous review and write a completely new one. The reason? you may ask. Well, the reason is that my previous review didn't give too much information about the novel, so I decided to write a little about the story here. Pros: 1) I consider that writing only about the virtual world is boring, so I will also take some chapters to build a solid and meaningful real world as it is necessary for future chapters. This can be considered an advantage or a disadvantage, according to your personal preference. 2) Harem not big or small (it depends on the preference of each one if it is an advantage or not) 3) Characters with a clear personality division. For example: the MC is playful and fun for the people he appreciates, but he is indifferent, casual and polite for the rest of the people. 4) A strong protagonist in the real world and in the virtual world, but he will still face challenges, many challenges. 5) An interesting plot. Cons: 1) Harem (as I said, it depends on one's preference) 2) The story is not just about the virtual world. There will be interesting scenes from the real world (as I said, it depends on one's preference if it is an advantage or a disadvantage) 3) There may be minor errors, however, it does not make the story difficult to read in the least. Still, I try to fix those details as quickly as possible. 4) I will not bother too much to shape secondary characters and I will focus more on those characters that will continue to be part of the story. Additional information: Chapter update: 1 chapter per day, if the objectives of the synopsis are met, more chapters. Chapter length: 1500 - 2000 words per chapter. If you have questions about the plot or forgot something, you can ask your question in the comments (politely) and I will answer to clarify doubts whenever possible. In this novel there are supernatural powers, so don't try to make everything too logical. Now, I will not take up any more of your time. I hope you enjoy the story and, if you think it's worth it, vote for it and add it to your library. Cordially, the shameless author who gives himself 5 stars. ^^

Nightmare321
Nightmare321Lv2

Not gonna lie, the start was pretty rough to get through(the initial first 25 chapters or so) for various reasons like the ranking system (I am a person that is bothered even by small details like this, so this might not have been as bothersome for others), some grammatical errors as I usually read only top-quality novels and the MC's edginess. However as more chapters came out the grammar improved to the point there were only a few errors noticeable in a dozen chapters or so, I stopped being bothered by the ranking system, we got more of the character's background and the MC was not as edgy as before and he actually developed as a character and made believable mistakes and decisions. The only major thing I was bothered overall was how the MC was able to dodge magic spells at the speed of a bullet and the author gave the explanation that he analyzed it and dodged it since he had the skills in the real world too. There was someone who said that even if he is able to do that, his body in the VR world will not be able to keep up with him and the author replied that since it's VR things depend more on his brain's abilities or something like that. I completely disagree with that, because the stats in VR are supposed to limit his body's movement and his agility was his lowest stat (the stats of a player that just started the game). If he could move his body in whatever way he wanted, then what will be the meaning of stats? Now I will move on to the point I liked the most in the novel - the focus on the 'real' world. I think that the best decision that the author made in the entire novel is to focus on the 'real' world as much as he did on the VR world. The other VR novels I have read are always 95% ( in the very least) VR and 5% (an exaggeration) real world. I commend the author for that. Overall the novel is worth it if you can endure the first 25 chapters or so.

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