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Rouedkaross
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2021-03-27 10:22

Currently at chap 94. Mixed on this one... I usually like when there is a bit of outside world story development but i feel in this case it's way too much and quickly becomes boring. The game aspect is great but after almost 100 chapters we had very little of it.

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XIETIAN
XIETIANAuthor

If you are bored by the fact that I write about the world outside the game, I cordially advise you to stop reading because what you have seen is nothing yet.

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GoWithTheFlow
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XIETIAN
XIETIANAuthor

I decided to remove the previous review and write a completely new one. The reason? you may ask. Well, the reason is that my previous review didn't give too much information about the novel, so I decided to write a little about the story here. Pros: 1) I consider that writing only about the virtual world is boring, so I will also take some chapters to build a solid and meaningful real world as it is necessary for future chapters. This can be considered an advantage or a disadvantage, according to your personal preference. 2) Harem not big or small (it depends on the preference of each one if it is an advantage or not) 3) Characters with a clear personality division. For example: the MC is playful and fun for the people he appreciates, but he is indifferent, casual and polite for the rest of the people. 4) A strong protagonist in the real world and in the virtual world, but he will still face challenges, many challenges. 5) An interesting plot. Cons: 1) Harem (as I said, it depends on one's preference) 2) The story is not just about the virtual world. There will be interesting scenes from the real world (as I said, it depends on one's preference if it is an advantage or a disadvantage) 3) There may be minor errors, however, it does not make the story difficult to read in the least. Still, I try to fix those details as quickly as possible. 4) I will not bother too much to shape secondary characters and I will focus more on those characters that will continue to be part of the story. Additional information: Chapter update: 1 chapter per day, if the objectives of the synopsis are met, more chapters. Chapter length: 1500 - 2000 words per chapter. If you have questions about the plot or forgot something, you can ask your question in the comments (politely) and I will answer to clarify doubts whenever possible. In this novel there are supernatural powers, so don't try to make everything too logical. Now, I will not take up any more of your time. I hope you enjoy the story and, if you think it's worth it, vote for it and add it to your library. Cordially, the shameless author who gives himself 5 stars. ^^

Nightmare321
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Not gonna lie, the start was pretty rough to get through(the initial first 25 chapters or so) for various reasons like the ranking system (I am a person that is bothered even by small details like this, so this might not have been as bothersome for others), some grammatical errors as I usually read only top-quality novels and the MC's edginess. However as more chapters came out the grammar improved to the point there were only a few errors noticeable in a dozen chapters or so, I stopped being bothered by the ranking system, we got more of the character's background and the MC was not as edgy as before and he actually developed as a character and made believable mistakes and decisions. The only major thing I was bothered overall was how the MC was able to dodge magic spells at the speed of a bullet and the author gave the explanation that he analyzed it and dodged it since he had the skills in the real world too. There was someone who said that even if he is able to do that, his body in the VR world will not be able to keep up with him and the author replied that since it's VR things depend more on his brain's abilities or something like that. I completely disagree with that, because the stats in VR are supposed to limit his body's movement and his agility was his lowest stat (the stats of a player that just started the game). If he could move his body in whatever way he wanted, then what will be the meaning of stats? Now I will move on to the point I liked the most in the novel - the focus on the 'real' world. I think that the best decision that the author made in the entire novel is to focus on the 'real' world as much as he did on the VR world. The other VR novels I have read are always 95% ( in the very least) VR and 5% (an exaggeration) real world. I commend the author for that. Overall the novel is worth it if you can endure the first 25 chapters or so.

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