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Each person has his or her own tastes, I guess. I saw that many readers like this story, and that's fine, but for me, this is one of the worst ATG fanfics I've ever read. The OC(Chu Qingyi) is too flat as a character. There is too much sugar, sometimes it feels like filler and there are long chapters of this. The MC acts in a very contradictory way. The humor is terrible, really, very bad, if you are not funny don't try or it ends badly. Totally a waste of time This is just my opinion, that I don't like it doesn't make it bad, I saw that there are many who do like the story, but I simply can't read this.
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FanficSlayer2021
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Hey, and first of all thx for the review. Do you have some fanfiction you would recommend with a good, fleshed out, oc. (It's my first time writing a story so I know I can work on this) ? Could you also tell me how does Yami act in a contradictory way? Maybe I didn't notice it myself. About the sugar thing and the humor then sry you don't like it, but I write mostly for fun so I'm gonna keep writing it haha
You're at least a nice person, I expected insults, that's the most common thing. I don't think you're a bad author, you just lack practice. The best examples of good "OC" in fanfiction are those of Rebirth in a Magical World, but basically everything is good in that story, in my opinion all "OC" are excellent. Give it a chance if you haven't read it. If you don't like Harry Potter, you can give a chance to Broly The Saiyan of Legend! also has decent OC's
FanficSlayer2021:Hey, and first of all thx for the review. Do you have some fanfiction you would recommend with a good, fleshed out, oc. (It's my first time writing a story so I know I can work on this) ? Could you also tell me how does Yami act in a contradictory way? Maybe I didn't notice it myself. About the sugar thing and the humor then sry you don't like it, but I write mostly for fun so I'm gonna keep writing it haha
3PoundsOfRice:You're at least a nice person, I expected insults, that's the most common thing. I don't think you're a bad author, you just lack practice. The best examples of good "OC" in fanfiction are those of Rebirth in a Magical World, but basically everything is good in that story, in my opinion all "OC" are excellent. Give it a chance if you haven't read it. If you don't like Harry Potter, you can give a chance to Broly The Saiyan of Legend! also has decent OC's
I was wondering when a review like this will show up. The story is terrible like most of the Against the God fics here is. I don't know they are never interesting for me to care about the story. And then they become more and more unreadable as girls are introduced even the manhua is an imitation of bad.