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Ted is that you?
Your point is, even if he has shigure’s talent, battle experience and a DF power, he still can’t beat 2 masters after only 2 years of training right?
Hmm fair point. But isn’t that why he hasn’t cleared that step yet? I mean he normally should be able to defeat one master right? (DF + haki on top of shigure who’s level was abiut the same as them. With her battle experience, he should be able to beat one of them even with a small body as long as he could use them well. Especially after two years) Now he’s still stuck at two. in other words he can’t beat 2 masters at the same time just like you said.
But he has the experience from shigurez In other world he’s already at the master level in terms of technique. He can compensate for his lack of physcial strength thanks to his fruit and Haki (Ki and Haki share the same concept of projecting someone’s will so he could easily master it thanks to Shigure’s experience and her talent which he inhereted from her) What do you think? (I thought it is pretty logic and that’s why he’s stuck at two people at the same level as Shigure. but then again I can be wrong *shrug*)
Thx rly apreciate it
It’s a story I started for the fun of it. I updated a lot recently just because it’s the start and the ideas kept flowing. I still need some time to make a good plan. And I did warn you guys that the updates would be random 😅
It’s a story I started for the fun of it. I updated a lot recently just because it’s the start and the ideas kept flowing. I still need some time to make a good plan. And I did warn you guys that the updates would be random 😅 Glad you like though
It’s a story I started for the fun of it. I updated a lot recently just because it’s the start and the ideas kept flowing. I still need some time to make a good plan. And I did warn you guys that the updates would be random 😅
Oi oi, I said there’d be only 4 😂😂
Sorry dude I'm gonna stop spoiling stuff from now on. I actually regret saying that Qingyue would be a harem member. So I'll stop saying what might or might not happen in the future.
Thx for the review. I’ll try to improve on the dialogue bit if I have time (this is just a hibby of mine. I don’t plan on becoming a writer) As for the wishes, well to wach their own I guess. I think they’re pretty good and Kaito should be pretty Op even in the Dxd world’s standart when he combines them. As for the foul mouth... this is my frist time wrtiting a character like that and others also said that it’s a bit too much, so I’ll tone it down a bit Anw thanks for the helplfull review. 😉
Oooh my bad my bad
😑😑😑 dude I accept criticism but at least tell me why this is trash... If you don’t like it say why. what’s the point of commenting ...
Oh. Well same answer I guess (if you’re talking about Kaito).
it’s in his mind so he doesn’t get tired physically? Idk just hope it kinda makes sense. it’s a supernatural world where someone like issei can reach the Top, just think of it like an op power where he has unlimited stamina while fighting the Masters (it doesn’t affect the real world)
She just met him lol. It’d be pretty weird if she acted like one from the start. Give her some time to turn into a full fledged yandere