I don't understand how the hell I forget to rate this work of art. 10/10, not only is this the best RI fanfic I've ever read, it's also one of the best farming fanfics I've seen, maybe the best.

Probablemente por la misma razón por la que yo, un hispanohablante leo la versión en ingles, a pesar de que no hablo ingles jaja. Sencilla idiotez humana.

This is ..... surprisingly good. I like it, the only negative point I can think of is that MC is a bit clingy with Hayley. But overall I think the characters are well portrayed. So, I'm curious, MC has some kind of golden finger? Nothing ridiculously strong, but in that world souls have significant power. An otherworldly soul should have something to contribute. Klaus will be able to do magic? Will he be able to turn wolves into hybrids? Maybe he will be a bit stronger and faster? After all, Klaus is too far behind on the power scale in the future.

All the characters are MC but with a different name. Same attitude and thought process. Always ready to applaud and magnify the figure of the MC. And you tell me he disfigured someone and was not sued? He is not even the only case where there are no consequences for his actions. And sure, Gwen was being developed as a love interest beautifully. But she had to add more, and according to the author she was going to develop all those love interests. But in the end none of them were well developed. Instead of giving a good evolution to one character, you gave a bad evolution to all of them.

People, this story is stolen, and the real author does not charge for his work. The original name is Rhaegar the Ruthless [REWRITE] (SI) ...............

You can't be talking about that silly fight between clans. Brother, Chinese novels did their job. Because of those novels now everyone wants to force a clan fight into their stories. And in this particular case, it doesn't make any sense. We don't know other members of the Gojo clan (except maybe for Uiui and Mei) so you decided to make him fight with Satoru? It's serious? Brother the story is good, you don't need to make that exchange. You are on the right track.

Is Mc trying to show us his confused sense of the law or is the author just an idiot? How can it be none of the city guard's business if a guy beats up 20 guys because they wouldn't let him into their restaurant?

Perhaps my review was a bit rushed, after all there were not many chapters. But the points I criticized are not as bad as I may have made them out to be. Especially the part about Mai.

This feels very forced. Start off well, but you had to look for love interests so soon and so hastily. It all felt very unorganic. His maid contributes nothing when she speaks. I recommend you keep her quiet. Treat the filler characters for what they are. Don't try to give them value if you are going to discard them early.

Decent writing, good idea, decent protagonist and an excellent title. Personally I'm sick of ROBs, but the third wish is the most logical thing I've read. I just wanted to give you a little input. The adaptation of Mahoraga and MC can't be similar. Let's remember that Mahoraga could use the cut that cuts the world because he has those swords embedded to his body. In MC's case it should be similar to using a simple domain to disable Gojo's infinite in melee. If I have to point out something profoundly negative, and the hasty decision of the thanks for the chapters.

Bro, the story is just beginning. Mc is young, Fang Yuan lived a long time to become who he is. There is something called character development.

There are some minor flaws, I feel like you don't follow a thread, but when you come up with something you just use a totally rushed flashback to justify it. Which takes away a lot from the quality of the storytelling. Other than that, you don't do too badly. The story is somewhat innovative and readable. Mc is not a nasty person his development goes well. Although it would be nice if you explained his improvement a bit more. Thanks for the chapters. I sincerely hope you kill his fiancée. I didn't see anything wrong with him at first, but their relationship started to look very forced, very much so.

Could someone explain to me what our MC is trying to do?

No, in everything else it has a great development. But the jutsu is the worst thing that happened to this story. Imagine the U.S. military banning its soldiers from using assault rifles until they are lieutenant rank. And on top of that they have to buy all their equipment to go out and risk their lives. It's like working to die. You're telling me that the big deal he made with the Uchiha only gave him two or three C-class jutsu? Stupid, ridiculous and absurd. His master didn't teach him any jutsu? Did he teach? All to maintain "realism". And look, I love the story, I think it's realistic. But in that aspect it's ridiculous.

MTL

Sabes, creo que esa respuesta fue respondida en un episodio de Konosuba xD

Hui Mie is not human. He is a slime

Okay, I have to admit that there are things I don't like about this story. But that was masterful