Review Detail of Ashmodai in Is it Wrong to be Reincarnated after Death?

Let's have a look at this review. - Story development very slow / boring = Have you ever read a story with very slow development? no you don't. Average reader coming from the FF where plot is confusing & fast as hell with holes everywhere. - Mc still level 1 = Oh what a bad point, Haru should have had that growth ability to level up in 10 chapters, I apologize. - Prologue goes alone 5 chapters = Don't worry mate, it was almost 20 chapters worth of backstory before where I took every single aspect of Haru's life into consideration. - Skills he gets are not really interesting = Yeah, you obviously know everything about Haru's skills in 40 chapters, I'm ashamed of myself. - Romance fanfiction of a Harem novel makes no progress cause the Mc doesn't get over the gf he had in his previous world = Again, What the hell? In 40 chapters what do you think to know about romance in the story? It's barely the first 2 weeks I'm writing lmfao, you're used to fast-paced novel, go reading a novel where in 20 chapters MC is the king of the world, this story ain't for you. My final thoughts of your review: it's not a review. You're saying you would want a fast-paced novel, with no backstory, op MC, and interesting skills from the start. Does this novel seemed like that to you? No. My story is not "boring" for you, it doesn't suit your taste, that's all. Why bothering making a review like this? It makes no sense. Review are meant to help me understand what I have to correct, I can't correct your taste, can I?

It's interesting how every single point has no sense behind it and based purely on your taste. The author already slapped your face, so I'll be original. Return To Your Stupid Op Mc With No Backstory We Don't Need Your Useless Opinion

And here is the salty author that can't accept a honest review. Rather a review where I write 140 letters worth of "more more". Reading about how polite he is cause he speaks like a decent normal human being is fucking boring and only gives the impression that every other person talks like third rate thug. The continuously whining about his past, his past gf, that he doesn't want to owe others anymore bla, bla. is annoying and just a text wall. He should live for the future not the past. The never seen amount points his gf earned for curing a "rare" form of cancer (like medicine didn't wipe out whole epidemics millions of people would have died of) was wasted for a system instead of a interesting ability. Your FF is one of the slowest I've ever read. Why should a reader read it if almost nothing happens.

I don't like OP MC and don't read that kind of Stuff. Even though I found it hard to read I tried to give the FF a chance an now wrote a honest review. If a trash person like you can't accept it it's your problem as sad it is. But never insult the opinion of someone else. It only shows what kind of human being you are.

I believe you have never dealt with a salty author, the one who insults you or smth. I don't mind when a review has something to tell me, but this novel doesn't suit your tastes, that's what you're trying to convey. Why should I care if you think the story is boring the plot is slow and you would want better skills, or that the mc still level 1 after 40 chapters? About the points, lung cancer is one of the most deadly cause of death in the whole world. Millions of people and families were saved. As Gaia said, the Judgment Room is a space where time has no meaning. She took into consideration the entirety of lives Asumi had changed in the world history, and you wouldn't want to know the real amount of point she has lmfao. But yeah let's just cool down. Your review has no meaning to help me whatsoever, so why should I act nicely? I'm not here to let someone insult my work like nothing and even act like I should even thank you for this if you don't mind☺

you wrote yourself that asami found a " "cure for cancers as rare as Harus" in chapter 4. If it isn't rare then don't write it.

It's not wrong for a story to be slow, for mc to not be strong from the start, to deepen into the backstory before the story will actually get interesting in fighting and romance. For example, in the tags there's literally "Weak to strong". If you don't like weak to strong fanfics, then just don't read and don't annoy us with your non-sense! I knew how the novel would be from the start as the tag is there.

Oh! that's finally something I can correct. Thanks. It was meant to say that Asumi found a cure for lung cancers, even as rare as Haru's.

I literally wrote in the reply you answered that I don't like OP MCs. I read it because it's weak to strong. I wrote my review so it won't be 100 chapters until his first ( the easiest) level up.

I know it's hard for you to correlate to the actual universe but "easiest" level up takes two years+, only cheats like Bell get it in month and hardworkers like Ais got it in a year, he was something like 3 days in the dungeon and all his stats are 400+, that's even more OP than Bell if I am not wrong or at least about the same speed, so use your brain a little, we are flying to the level 2 fast AF. And regarding this whining and crying that MC has about his last gf when he was dying, I don't like it either honestly, BUT that's HIS PERSONALITY and it's DIFFERENT from YOURS AND MINE, wake up, people are different and there are people with even WORSE personalities. But as author answered you, all your points are just useless ranting about "this novel is not for my personal taste so I'll put 2 stars for it" and I agree with author and here is an addition from me to you: GTFO and stop whining already, we have enough whining from MC. P.S. Be a man and use your time better: write your fanfic that won't have all these things that you dislike, we will come and read it!

I used the review function how it's proposed. I gave my reasons why I rated it that way so people know what they should expect instead of an useless almost 5 star review like everywhere else. It's your problem if you can't accept a negative opinion.

You are wrong, you didn't use review function how it's proposed. Writing quality is nice Stability of updates is mostly 2 chapters with nice amount of words Story Development, it develops, we don't have 20 chapters of doing the same thing, everything changes. Character Design - whiny 18 year old that died from cancer and instead of living his life fully now still whining. YES you can dislike him, but that's normal for whiny character, it's HIS personality, not yours, everything goes whiny right from the start, there is no sudden PERSONALITY CHANGE which is the main thing. Even if you dislike him as a character he is consistent, which shows that it's a good character design of a whiny 18 y.o. kid. World Background is great too.

I gave update stability and writing quality a good rating and World background a intermediate rating. You are wrong.

So your personal opinion is extremely biased and it's not about the story the whole it's about what you don't like in the story and somehow you get this rating. While I dislike MC too I will say that his Character Design is 4 to 5, while you say that his Design is 1 to 2, do you get it now or it is still too hard for you to understand that while your review is nice and helps people like you to avoid the story the rating that you gave is completely wrong.

There is no way to rate wrong. Since Character design and Story development are based on personal opinion. There is now logical guideline to rate something like this or we would end up with stories that all are in core the same. Do you see where you are wrong.

This is BS, you say it like the world is centered around you while you are just a human like everyone else here. Character Design is not about "I LIKE/DISLIKE THIS CHARACTER" it's about consistency and stability. Author showed that MC is a whiny kid and he continues that line through all the chapters, nothing changed, he is whining and he is stable, he also explained why he is whiny, all this dying stuff in the first chapters. So since character is stable and you don't suddenly feel like "wtf, MC became something else this chapter suddenly" then it's good Character Design. Story Development - Here you again say "speed is too slow, and not to my liking so I put 1 star". This is wrong again. First of all it is in the tags for you that this story is Weak to Strong, that means it's going to be SLOW in case you don't know. SO AUTHOR ALREADY STATED THAT IT IS A SLOW DEVELOPMENT STORY. And here you come and say, story is SLOW get 1 start from me. You are either a genius or an idiot honestly. Correct 1 star rating would be for this story if it was FAST instead of SLOW.

then write your own review if you are of other opinion. I write MINE like I felt it is and it seems there are people that agree with me.

You still don't get it, even I agree mostly with your review, I don't agree with your ratings.

And why should I care?