I can't believe books like this exist and even are in top 200. THIS IS A REVIEW ONLY FOR DANMACHI ARC. I READ IT ALL AND MY EYES ARE BLEEDING. Writing Quality - 1, please just remove this book, virtual paper can't bear the shame of having words on it. Stability of Updates - 1. IT DOESN'T MATTER HOW MUCH YOU UPDATE OLD GARBAGE WITH NEW GARBAGE CHAPTERS, IT IS STILL A COMPLETE GARBAGE. Story Development - 1. Absolute crap, following main story with small additions, unrealistic, boring. Character Design - 1 oh boy, MC Design is absolutely unrealistic, it's ridiculous. World Background - 1, now new additions, just a simple copy paste and usage of default Danmachi world. SKIP THIS BOOK, YOU WILL REGRET WASTING YOUR TIME READING IT. I PROMISE THIS.

I guess people just don't read comments completely. I'll repeat my explanation just for you. Character Design is not about "I LIKE/DISLIKE THIS CHARACTER" it's about consistency and stability. Author showed that MC is a whiny kid and he continues that line through all the chapters, nothing changed, he is whining and he is stable, he also explained why he is whiny, all this dying stuff in the first chapters. So since character is stable and you don't suddenly feel like "wtf, MC became something else this chapter suddenly" then it's good Character Design. This is CHARACTER DESIGN rating system, you should rate how much MC is described in the book, not if you like that he is a whiny kid or not. What you want to rate is Character Likeability or something like that since you say that "people like and don't like" and there is no button for that. This improper usage of Character Design rating is a MAIN problem. I personally would rate Character Likeability of MC at 1 or even lower, because he is a whiny kid at 18 y.o. that got a new life and basically cheats and instead of living his life happily now he whines and cries about his past, that's extremely hard to read, but unfortunately there is no button for that, there is only Character Design where it's properly explained why he is like that so I have to put 4 to 5 because as I said before - everything is properly explained, even if I don't like it at all.

Kid, you just need to learn what do the words mean, I see that it's hard for you, but I still believe that you will open dictionaries and read again my comments, intelligence doesn't come easy way.

Oh boy... now I see that I wasted the time explaining how you properly rate novels... w/e maybe time will help you, maybe it won't.

You still don't get it, even I agree mostly with your review, I don't agree with your ratings.

This is BS, you say it like the world is centered around you while you are just a human like everyone else here. Character Design is not about "I LIKE/DISLIKE THIS CHARACTER" it's about consistency and stability. Author showed that MC is a whiny kid and he continues that line through all the chapters, nothing changed, he is whining and he is stable, he also explained why he is whiny, all this dying stuff in the first chapters. So since character is stable and you don't suddenly feel like "wtf, MC became something else this chapter suddenly" then it's good Character Design. Story Development - Here you again say "speed is too slow, and not to my liking so I put 1 star". This is wrong again. First of all it is in the tags for you that this story is Weak to Strong, that means it's going to be SLOW in case you don't know. SO AUTHOR ALREADY STATED THAT IT IS A SLOW DEVELOPMENT STORY. And here you come and say, story is SLOW get 1 start from me. You are either a genius or an idiot honestly. Correct 1 star rating would be for this story if it was FAST instead of SLOW.

As I said before, try to write your fanfic without the problems that you see here, it will help everyone, you will get the book that you like and everyone else will get something to read.

So your personal opinion is extremely biased and it's not about the story the whole it's about what you don't like in the story and somehow you get this rating. While I dislike MC too I will say that his Character Design is 4 to 5, while you say that his Design is 1 to 2, do you get it now or it is still too hard for you to understand that while your review is nice and helps people like you to avoid the story the rating that you gave is completely wrong.

You are wrong, you didn't use review function how it's proposed. Writing quality is nice Stability of updates is mostly 2 chapters with nice amount of words Story Development, it develops, we don't have 20 chapters of doing the same thing, everything changes. Character Design - whiny 18 year old that died from cancer and instead of living his life fully now still whining. YES you can dislike him, but that's normal for whiny character, it's HIS personality, not yours, everything goes whiny right from the start, there is no sudden PERSONALITY CHANGE which is the main thing. Even if you dislike him as a character he is consistent, which shows that it's a good character design of a whiny 18 y.o. kid. World Background is great too.

I know it's hard for you to correlate to the actual universe but "easiest" level up takes two years+, only cheats like Bell get it in month and hardworkers like Ais got it in a year, he was something like 3 days in the dungeon and all his stats are 400+, that's even more OP than Bell if I am not wrong or at least about the same speed, so use your brain a little, we are flying to the level 2 fast AF. And regarding this whining and crying that MC has about his last gf when he was dying, I don't like it either honestly, BUT that's HIS PERSONALITY and it's DIFFERENT from YOURS AND MINE, wake up, people are different and there are people with even WORSE personalities. But as author answered you, all your points are just useless ranting about "this novel is not for my personal taste so I'll put 2 stars for it" and I agree with author and here is an addition from me to you: GTFO and stop whining already, we have enough whining from MC. P.S. Be a man and use your time better: write your fanfic that won't have all these things that you dislike, we will come and read it!