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Ripcorez
RipcorezAuthor4yr
2020-08-26 11:13

Hey! author here, so I have to be shameless and give myself a free 5 star review, right? I hope you guys like this novel, it's my first time trying out such a genre so some things might be off, I can only know when you guys tell me so comments are important if you see any flaws. Also, this is for the WPC so please, if you can spare a few power stones for me, that would be amazing. I hope you all have a wonderful day!

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Nikhil_Chand
Nikhil_ChandLv4

Any romance, power couple or harem?

VoiD_dEmOn
VoiD_dEmOnLv11

harem?

The_Bum
The_BumLv14

bromance?

Ripcorez
RipcorezAuthor

The first time in my life have I seen someone ask for something other than a harem.

The_Bum:bromance?
ProfessorofCulture
ProfessorofCultureLv14

harem or not?

Ripcorez:The first time in my life have I seen someone ask for something other than a harem.
Ripcorez
RipcorezAuthor

lmao

ProfessorofCulture:harem or not?
Ripcorez
RipcorezAuthor

Sure, but it'd be better if you dm me on discord or join my server, I don't see these that much so I might miss questions

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Ripcorez
RipcorezAuthor

You can check the synopsis for the discord server, You'll find me within the server it self. I don't want to give out my discord id in comments

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Z0mb1e
Z0mb1eLv1

Let's be honest. You wouldn't post anything if you don't think it's 5 Star right?

Ripcorez
RipcorezAuthor

hahaha, I won't be cocky and say that it's a 5 star but might as well try to get it the highest star possible, right?

Z0mb1e:Let's be honest. You wouldn't post anything if you don't think it's 5 Star right?
Amro
AmroLv4

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Matt_pike
Matt_pikeLv5

Although you responded to other people about romance or harem you never actually answered so would yoh mind telling me?

Ripcorez:hahaha, I won't be cocky and say that it's a 5 star but might as well try to get it the highest star possible, right?
booknoobz21
booknoobz21Lv15

Fist time seeing writing by Nepali Author, good luck:).

Alemax08
Alemax08Lv14

R-18 ? 🤤😈

JheyDi
JheyDiLv3

Harem?

Yung_Richard
Yung_RichardLv1

Hi

dollar_king
dollar_kingLv13

Author, I am not a critic and that's why I would like to ask - 1.Is the novel always gonna be a low paced with no break between events ... 2.Does hero have a tint of paranoia? ,coz those are my preferences .. 3.Is it me or is it just ur hormone ,coz this is going more towards shoujo side ,well it's not complaining, just I am not expecting it as such.. 4.environment explanation is good but slows down the events quite a bit... So, I would like answers to them coz I really wanna read it but the pace is giving me headache , and so I alternate between this and komi-san... my liked pace is of the Rainbow mage, Oracle and Supreme Magus.

Omnisiac
OmnisiacLv15

🤣

Ripcorez:lmao
Orange_Jo
Orange_JoLv14

Bro your liked pace will not change his writing style

dollar_king:Author, I am not a critic and that's why I would like to ask - 1.Is the novel always gonna be a low paced with no break between events ... 2.Does hero have a tint of paranoia? ,coz those are my preferences .. 3.Is it me or is it just ur hormone ,coz this is going more towards shoujo side ,well it's not complaining, just I am not expecting it as such.. 4.environment explanation is good but slows down the events quite a bit... So, I would like answers to them coz I really wanna read it but the pace is giving me headache , and so I alternate between this and komi-san... my liked pace is of the Rainbow mage, Oracle and Supreme Magus.
DOKKAEBII
DOKKAEBIILv14

mans really demanded a lot all while endbig every sentence in …

Orange_Jo:Bro your liked pace will not change his writing style
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