This is a good LN, but a little bit rushed though & also world building is way too low, like no street name, no telling how much bigger is his house or is it near forest or how people view him now he passes through streets character background is also non existent. These things make the story in our mind bit more realistic. Again thanks for the chapter.
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Hello! Currently, I'm still undergoing edits (and exams). By next week, the chapters should be refined. Thank you so much! I will keep your comment in my mind.
seeing interaction like this between authors and readers brings tears to my eyes. lately Situations like have become so rare. constructive criticism almost a myth. mostly both side cursing each other out.
ah **** that In case it's not obvious, and to avoid any negative views I would like to point out that this comment is a joke based on your sentence. Your sentence in which said "cursing each other out" :D 😂
Your joke was too big brain for me but using all my brain cells (only 1) I understood it after reading it 5 times
😂 glad you ended up understanding it. Also was it worth it?
It was worth every braincell I used
Thats good 😂
the fact that you used the term LN... troubles me, it immediately makes me expect a dumbass protagonist that has heavens blessing in everything he does and says, and even when he meets people, will randomly tumble about god level equipment etc... sigh i've read too many of those so i'll pass... thanks for the review
try reading Nine Ender, you won't be disappointed
So, author here doing promotion.... lol . but I'll give it a try.... good luck 🤞
