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chadliu221
chadliu221Lv43yr
2021-02-16 01:13

So I think the idea that this story is about is interesting (that's what got me into this) but I read the first 3 chapters and I'm pretty sure I can say that while the idea is interesting, the character designs are pretty bad, things seem quite forced and just appear out of nowhere, the grammar is horrible and you can barely tell what is going on throughout the chapters. The story also doesnt really explain why things happen and that it just happens randomly causing quite a lot of people to be confused. Hopefully things are more smooth in the latter chapters, and I recommend the author to re-edit the first few chapters because it actually doesnt make sense. Read at your own risk

I Know the Secret to Surpass Level 100

Peltivierre
3.8
604 Chs

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deletedaccount_Lv1

read Hitman Hitman Garden, you won't be disappointed

3yr
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Peltivierre
PeltivierreAuthor

Hello! Author here~ I just wanted to say that I am grateful for everyone who had supported this book. Writing these novels had been my rock since my studies are giving me tons of headache. Hope you all would enjoy! Have a great day~

3yr

amber0613
amber0613Lv3

Wow! your book is amazing! Adventures is my favorite genre. I hope got to learn more about magics. Kinda excited to read more of this chapter. Keep it up the good work author!

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Fhrutz_D_Hollow
Fhrutz_D_HollowLv4

I like the premise. Very anime-feels. The Mc staring some gallant warriors in the parrade while dreaming of becoming one someday. Really, it is one of the best opening for me in all anime I’d watched. The following chapters is unexpectedly interesting. Immersive and enjoyable. I recommend this book to readers who love system and anime feels.

3yr
Aeternabilis
AeternabilisLv14

It's an alright book, however, I simply cannot stand the mc so yeah. This is important for any book obviously. The mc basically has the intelligence of a brick. He is dumb af. When reading books I like the mc to at least have a spec of intelligence to them when reading. It helps with the immersion of the book when reading. Like, the tipping point for me was when he met Connor, was it? It was just overall an sht show. It was so random to the point of stupidity. He was fighting in the wave of monsters, he saves him. All good, but then he lets him join his party leaving out the fact he is like 11 levels ahead of him. The mc shows him is an ultra-secret class he could get killed for. Let's this random dude follow him around and in his home. The uses his secret ability right in front of him because he "forgot" about him. Then decides to give basically all his secrets away to him. All to a RANDOM ass dude, we know nothing about. It's a joke tbh.... Too painful to carry on for me, but if you can stand this sort of interaction you may like the story. He is op af just needs time to grow. Not many descriptions either so yeah.

3yr
Lavitz13
Lavitz13Lv14

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Blackwater
BlackwaterLv11

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Young_fruit_Smiley
Young_fruit_SmileyLv14

This is a good LN, but a little bit rushed though & also world building is way too low, like no street name, no telling how much bigger is his house or is it near forest or how people view him now he passes through streets character background is also non existent. These things make the story in our mind bit more realistic. Again thanks for the chapter.

4yr
DawnStar
DawnStarLv15

Read about 40ish chapters so far and it's fairly decent. Character development is very slow and class/stats are kinda weird as I'm used to standard class and stats 😅. An example of this is their so called stealth knight = assasin. Also Grammer and wording is kinda bad, not as bad as MTL though. If you're the kind of people who don't want to deal with bad grammer/wording then you might want to skip on this. Otherwise it's a decent read to pass the time.

3yr
MeanBluePanda
MeanBluePandaLv15

I read the first 20 chapters and i couldnt take anymore. The story doesn't progress in any natural way. The author wants something to happen, thus it does. It gets pretty unbearable pretty fast, and you can tell from the comments people leave. Wouldnt recommend wasting your time.

3yr
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