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Zarathustra
ZarathustraLv34yr
2020-10-12 22:52

I love this story and how he slowly becomes more and more monster like and none of that i need to retain a bit of my humanity bullshit thank you so mich for writing this and i hope you will continue to pump out awesome chapters

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Antihero
AntiheroAuthor

Thanks a lot. These reviews mean so much to me. Especially because it lets me know how the story connects with you, the readers. You'll be glad to know I'm intending on trying to push releases to two a day as a reward for all you readers who have shown so much support recently. I hope you continue to enjoy it.

PHlLlPPlnes
PHlLlPPlnesLv3

10/day is a great idea too...😂🔨

Antihero:Thanks a lot. These reviews mean so much to me. Especially because it lets me know how the story connects with you, the readers. You'll be glad to know I'm intending on trying to push releases to two a day as a reward for all you readers who have shown so much support recently. I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Antihero
AntiheroAuthor

Well if the book gets enough support for me to turn to full time writing I may consider between 3 and 5 a day

PHlLlPPlnes: 10/day is a great idea too...😂🔨
PHlLlPPlnes
PHlLlPPlnesLv3

if your book is done, i'll read it. ive got some painful experience from some books i started reading,so now i only add interesting books and wait for it to be done. i only read books that i know wont let down. i feel extremely upset when the book im reading goes on hiatus or something.

Antihero:Well if the book gets enough support for me to turn to full time writing I may consider between 3 and 5 a day
Antihero
AntiheroAuthor

It's not finished, but it is fully outlined to the end. I may miss a day or two here and there fur to work, but if I can make the chapters back up before the end of the month, I do.

PHlLlPPlnes:if your book is done, i'll read it. ive got some painful experience from some books i started reading,so now i only add interesting books and wait for it to be done. i only read books that i know wont let down. i feel extremely upset when the book im reading goes on hiatus or something.
PHlLlPPlnes
PHlLlPPlnesLv3

ok i'll read it. pressure is on you though i hope you can really finish it cuz you see, sometimes things happen lol. i quite like interactive authors like you so i'd give my votes to your novel. wish you luck on your novel.i hope you get lots of readers.

Antihero:It's not finished, but it is fully outlined to the end. I may miss a day or two here and there fur to work, but if I can make the chapters back up before the end of the month, I do.
Antihero
AntiheroAuthor

Oh it will definitely make it to it's end there's no doubt there. If it was going to get dropped it would have happened already due to difficulties last month. Thanks for the support and I hope you enjoy it.

PHlLlPPlnes:ok i'll read it. pressure is on you though i hope you can really finish it cuz you see, sometimes things happen lol. i quite like interactive authors like you so i'd give my votes to your novel. wish you luck on your novel.i hope you get lots of readers.
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Darth_Xiane
Darth_XianeLv15

First off I'll be straight forward. I don't like this book. Not because it's poorly written or a bad premise but mainly because key parts of the main character are developed during time skips. Anyways for the breakdown... The book is very easy to read, spelling and grammatical errors are few and far between. Technical wise the book is a delight compared to some stories which are so badly edited it makes your eyes bleed as the writer/translator tries to maintain their own languages nuances in English. Story development... the plot is well laid out, the pacing is okay, as initially stated though this delight to watch unfold gets a kick in the proverbial balls at the end of volume one and the story skips a year. Things go down hill from there. Character design... I honestly love all the supporting cast. From the monsters to the humans all are well written and fleshed out... the main character however is a mess. Very early on its revealed he has a hero complex and while its believable that he becomes a monstrous hero the fact he goes full Hannibal over a single chapter is mind blowing stupid. There's no conflict of morality of having a human become a monster, its just 'Eh I'm a monster now, when in Rome!' Even worse is a key part of his character development happens during the volume one end time skip, its just thrust upon the readers as hey look, he has a new major character issue during that year that you know might have been interesting to learn about... except is thrown in when faced against a Supreme opponent... ignoring the fact he faced a similarly impossible existence not a few chapters prior and didn't use it... Its like the author pulls this super power out of his ass on a whim, no build up or hint just bam Kace is now the juggernaut with plot armor. Updates... I think it updates regularly, after the above issue I couldn't read anymore. The fact the author skipped time again soon after this super power was enacted just killed my desire to continue. World Background... the world is well flushed out. The setting is very interesting. Just a pity the eyes we get to experience it through is just trash. If the story was literally focused on anyone other than the MC we'd see more of this great world. Overall, its a great technical read, I encourage you to read it for yourself. The time skips over integral main character developments/plot progression is what killed it for me, such may not be true for you.

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