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Level1Goblin
Level1GoblinLv33yr
2021-09-23 10:44

I can tell the author of this story is very young. He's still very idealistic and believes everything the tv tells him to be true. He also is clearly a virgin and I don't mean that as a negative. I think it's admirable to be a virgin these days. I'm just saying this is why he doesn't seem to understand women and what they like. The MC is a yes man to women. He simply thinks that because someone is a woman that they need to bend over backwards for them. I'm not a fan of this behavior myself and that is why I dropped it. I also could be wrong, but I saw many comments throughout the story of unhappy readers, but when I see the reviews here they are all good reviews. Deleting reviews or? I really wanted to like this story because the idea isn't bad. I can read literally any Japanese manga and get Mc's like this. Losers that think they are morally superior and let women step all over them. MC IS A...

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Darth_Xiane
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First off I'll be straight forward. I don't like this book. Not because it's poorly written or a bad premise but mainly because key parts of the main character are developed during time skips. Anyways for the breakdown... The book is very easy to read, spelling and grammatical errors are few and far between. Technical wise the book is a delight compared to some stories which are so badly edited it makes your eyes bleed as the writer/translator tries to maintain their own languages nuances in English. Story development... the plot is well laid out, the pacing is okay, as initially stated though this delight to watch unfold gets a kick in the proverbial balls at the end of volume one and the story skips a year. Things go down hill from there. Character design... I honestly love all the supporting cast. From the monsters to the humans all are well written and fleshed out... the main character however is a mess. Very early on its revealed he has a hero complex and while its believable that he becomes a monstrous hero the fact he goes full Hannibal over a single chapter is mind blowing stupid. There's no conflict of morality of having a human become a monster, its just 'Eh I'm a monster now, when in Rome!' Even worse is a key part of his character development happens during the volume one end time skip, its just thrust upon the readers as hey look, he has a new major character issue during that year that you know might have been interesting to learn about... except is thrown in when faced against a Supreme opponent... ignoring the fact he faced a similarly impossible existence not a few chapters prior and didn't use it... Its like the author pulls this super power out of his ass on a whim, no build up or hint just bam Kace is now the juggernaut with plot armor. Updates... I think it updates regularly, after the above issue I couldn't read anymore. The fact the author skipped time again soon after this super power was enacted just killed my desire to continue. World Background... the world is well flushed out. The setting is very interesting. Just a pity the eyes we get to experience it through is just trash. If the story was literally focused on anyone other than the MC we'd see more of this great world. Overall, its a great technical read, I encourage you to read it for yourself. The time skips over integral main character developments/plot progression is what killed it for me, such may not be true for you.

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