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ey3euw82
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2021-04-10 22:59

I read till ch 104 and couldn't continue. The biggest problem is the lack of depth in chs. The story paid attention to irrelevant details thus making the story very slow paced and the Mc's train of thought is all over the place; Although this might be on purpose to emphasize character development it still made the story confusing. With that being said, if you can handle more than 100 chs the story might pick up speed later by focusing on crucial information rather than fillers. If you disagree with me I totally get it my friend is the biggest example. Ps: he is into lifestyle novels and likes unnecessary details if you're asking about the good rating after what I said. it's due to the writing quality although it's not perfect it is of high standard and the update stability is pretty good.

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Antihero
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Thanks for reading and the fair review. I get my style isn't for everyone, so no worries. I do have 2 other novels that I'm updating that have started recently. So hopefully you might like one of them. The Legendary Junkmaster and Pantheon Online

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Darth_Xiane
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First off I'll be straight forward. I don't like this book. Not because it's poorly written or a bad premise but mainly because key parts of the main character are developed during time skips. Anyways for the breakdown... The book is very easy to read, spelling and grammatical errors are few and far between. Technical wise the book is a delight compared to some stories which are so badly edited it makes your eyes bleed as the writer/translator tries to maintain their own languages nuances in English. Story development... the plot is well laid out, the pacing is okay, as initially stated though this delight to watch unfold gets a kick in the proverbial balls at the end of volume one and the story skips a year. Things go down hill from there. Character design... I honestly love all the supporting cast. From the monsters to the humans all are well written and fleshed out... the main character however is a mess. Very early on its revealed he has a hero complex and while its believable that he becomes a monstrous hero the fact he goes full Hannibal over a single chapter is mind blowing stupid. There's no conflict of morality of having a human become a monster, its just 'Eh I'm a monster now, when in Rome!' Even worse is a key part of his character development happens during the volume one end time skip, its just thrust upon the readers as hey look, he has a new major character issue during that year that you know might have been interesting to learn about... except is thrown in when faced against a Supreme opponent... ignoring the fact he faced a similarly impossible existence not a few chapters prior and didn't use it... Its like the author pulls this super power out of his ass on a whim, no build up or hint just bam Kace is now the juggernaut with plot armor. Updates... I think it updates regularly, after the above issue I couldn't read anymore. The fact the author skipped time again soon after this super power was enacted just killed my desire to continue. World Background... the world is well flushed out. The setting is very interesting. Just a pity the eyes we get to experience it through is just trash. If the story was literally focused on anyone other than the MC we'd see more of this great world. Overall, its a great technical read, I encourage you to read it for yourself. The time skips over integral main character developments/plot progression is what killed it for me, such may not be true for you.

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