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Ikosa
IkosaLv134yr
2020-10-02 22:40

Same old faceslapping as always and on top of it is a System story. ..................................................................

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DaoistTaiChi
DaoistTaiChiLv4

nuff said

symonp05
symonp05Lv15

it is not, but a very heavy novel, howerver, it will start after maybe 150 chapter. This is not a light novel. When I was reading i sometimes thought that i was on some extra philosophical course.

Ancient_
Ancient_Lv14

I really liked World's Best Martial Artist. I just read 6 chapters of this novel then dropped it but it reminds me bit of it.

symonp05:it is not, but a very heavy novel, howerver, it will start after maybe 150 chapter. This is not a light novel. When I was reading i sometimes thought that i was on some extra philosophical course.
Raron
RaronLv15

If you have read Forty Milleniums then you will understand that the author adored exploring ideology... a lot. This book i assume will be similar

preciousedetkarger
preciousedetkargerLv13

I love the way they gain their power

absolute_havoc
absolute_havocLv10

good book if your looking to pass the time

LordKram
LordKramLv13

lmao

LoveMyself
LoveMyselfLv5

the face slapping will only happen in the few starting chapter. and slowly the story gets interesting after knowing exploring and revealing the side-charact, world, power, and mc himself.

JimmyBlah
JimmyBlahLv14

If a novel (of any kind) takes 150 chapters to curve upward in quality, it’s not worth anyone’s time 🤣🤣

symonp05:it is not, but a very heavy novel, howerver, it will start after maybe 150 chapter. This is not a light novel. When I was reading i sometimes thought that i was on some extra philosophical course.
Alfha_Robby
Alfha_RobbyLv6

you mail it bruh. why everyone so hellbent forcing other people to read fricking 150 chapter of face slapping / word pad filler in order to enjoy this novel, atleast there's lots of people pirate this sh1t.

JimmyBlah:If a novel (of any kind) takes 150 chapters to curve upward in quality, it’s not worth anyone’s time 🤣🤣
Oatmeal
OatmealLv14

150 is exaggerated. The start till about chapter 80 is between decent and good with a bit too much faceslapping and rapidly gets better afterwards in my opinion. Also, I trust this author to deliver something good after reading his other work, Forty Millenniums of Cultivation. Compared to the typical wish-fulfillment trash you find here, even the somewhat rough start of this novel is really good.

Alfha_Robby:you mail it bruh. why everyone so hellbent forcing other people to read fricking 150 chapter of face slapping / word pad filler in order to enjoy this novel, atleast there's lots of people pirate this sh1t.
jats2004
jats2004Lv15

i have read the raws and i still dislike it. It is a philosofical discussion where the mc is so naive and wants to help others no matter what and is unwilling to even kill enemy tryijg to hurt him because they are human

symonp05:it is not, but a very heavy novel, howerver, it will start after maybe 150 chapter. This is not a light novel. When I was reading i sometimes thought that i was on some extra philosophical course.
Book_Knight
Book_KnightLv4

Um, I am not so sure about that.......

jats2004:i have read the raws and i still dislike it. It is a philosofical discussion where the mc is so naive and wants to help others no matter what and is unwilling to even kill enemy tryijg to hurt him because they are human
N0xiety
N0xietyLv7

You mean it's a novel heavy with filler and walls of text explaining everything in the most long winded way possible. Author seems to have missed the 'show, not tell' lesson for authors. Instead, he seems to love inserting long winded walls of info at every opportunity. Half the novel is basically a wall of info, and most that info we can do without. The info is fluffed as much as possible so it takes 10 times the text and bore readers to death. Not to mention, author is best at utilizing overused tropes one after another, which makes the novel very predictable, and also making sure that mc faces lots of setbacks so that he doesn't rise as he should, and instead take as much time and chapters as possible. Mc should always appear weak, so author can have lots of opportunities for people to mess with him. But yeah, he will act the pig then eat the tiger. Over and over. Solved one injury? Add another one over it, why not? Rinse, repeat. Enjoy...

symonp05:it is not, but a very heavy novel, howerver, it will start after maybe 150 chapter. This is not a light novel. When I was reading i sometimes thought that i was on some extra philosophical course.
Stuffedcrow
StuffedcrowLv14

is this harem

Mute
MuteLv13

It's neither a faceslapping novel nor is it as bad as worlds best martial artist.

Ancient_:I really liked World's Best Martial Artist. I just read 6 chapters of this novel then dropped it but it reminds me bit of it.
Ancient_
Ancient_Lv14

World's Best Martial Artist is best, I'm gonna try reading this again, because the comments are saying it's different from all the other same cliche novels.

Mute:It's neither a faceslapping novel nor is it as bad as worlds best martial artist.
Mute
MuteLv13

Shame that novel got dropped, i was stockpiling chapters, honestly though this novel is bugging me, the mc constantly relying on sly tricks and there's not much straightforward fighting.

Ancient_:World's Best Martial Artist is best, I'm gonna try reading this again, because the comments are saying it's different from all the other same cliche novels.
Littleheros
LittleherosLv2

Yea shamed it got dropped, but the fighting like this is more of a opinion on what you like

Mute:Shame that novel got dropped, i was stockpiling chapters, honestly though this novel is bugging me, the mc constantly relying on sly tricks and there's not much straightforward fighting.
Veasna_TDM
Veasna_TDMLv11

I don't hate system story, but face slapping is just bad, it just side character acting stupid or unreasonable then get face slapped by mc. after the 100th time of the same thing, it no longer enjoyable

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