Littleheros

Your writing is good but unfortunately you release chapters daily which format only really works if their is some sort of progression. The buildup is good, and I like it, but me and many others just get frustrated that it feels like nothing happened. This type of writing really needs to be released together. Like Naruto the Outsider is similar with its buildup and slowness but it releases 3 chapters a week or sometimes holds chapters to release even more together on big moments. I feel like this is the type of approach you need in order to make sure people aren't just dying inside, to see what's going to happen.

What chapter are you up to???? MC isn't like this at all.

Just want to say that Daphne not showing up in chapters, means that Quinn doesn't spend enough time with her. I'm pretty sure it's been said and implied that he does indeed spend time with her a lot, and that was also during the summer when he didn't meet Ivy much I think. Again the main point is that because a character doesn't show up in the physical chapter, it doesn't the characters don't interact off-screen. So many people just think oh, she's not in the physical story, Quinn must not be talking to her, and unless it's actually stated in the story, I'm most def sure that they spend time together or talk, just not directly stated.

its actually literally around chapter 60 all the copying is stopped, and the story after that point is when it should be better, but ig if u didnt like it u didnt like it

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WARNING!!! prepare to have tissues ready for reading this!

Brooooooo.... why you gotta do this me man, I thought I was gonna have some wholesome stuff, now I'm crying.

SO GODAMN SHORT AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

I don't have much to say except that it's pretty interesting imo. Those who liked reading The Author's Pov probably would probably like this a lot as well.

bro thats how I really imagine them to be lol