Hello, Author! Writing Quality: I understand that English isn't your first language and there's room for improvement, so I believe you will improve. I suggest to use keyboards with auto-correct spelling or re-read what you've written before publishing it. Stability of Updates: You don't have to force yourself to update as soon as possible. I believe that squeezing or brainstorming ideas for a chapter could be tiring, so update if you only feel to. Story Development: It reminded me of some shounen animes out there. So it's interesting if you're a fan! Character Design: It's nice to see the roles of each character. World Background: Fantasy Setting? It's all good! I hope you'll find success in this story!
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