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Oh no, not Alma... 😭
Holy, that's a lot of features! 😲
Hello, Author! Writing Quality: I think you're doing great! Your writing format's fine! Stability of Updates: Just update if you can or want to. Story Development: I think it gets even more interesting. I can't spoil here, but to those who are hesitating, read this. Character Design: You distinguished them very well. World Background: You're also doing great! I hope you'll find success in this story!
Hello, Author! Writing Quality: I understand that English isn't your first language and there's room for improvement, so I believe you will improve. I suggest to use keyboards with auto-correct spelling or re-read what you've written before publishing it. Stability of Updates: You don't have to force yourself to update as soon as possible. I believe that squeezing or brainstorming ideas for a chapter could be tiring, so update if you only feel to. Story Development: It reminded me of some shounen animes out there. So it's interesting if you're a fan! Character Design: It's nice to see the roles of each character. World Background: Fantasy Setting? It's all good! I hope you'll find success in this story!
Hello, Readers. Before you read this story, I want you to read this pinned review first. I'm listing down the reasons why your time wouldn't be a waste if you read "what happened?". Let's start! Writing Quality: I admit. English isn't my first language. But I have the skill to compose or read English. I also have Grammarly installed to check the spelling or grammar errors and suggest synonyms so repetitive words wouldn't occur that much. Stability of Updates: I can update daily. If I can't, I will update after one, two, or three days. I'm trying to update fast as soon as I can. You can check the release dates of each chapter as proof. I can update two chapters if the reader demands it, or if I'm in the mood to do so. Story Development: If you're a fan of friendships, family, slow-paced, and romance, I think you will find this story good. I can assure you this would have a twist even if you see some cliches in here. Character Design: I've designed each Character based on their roles. World Background: It's not complicated to understand the setting since it's based on Modern Fiction. If you're kind enough, please do support this book through leaving chapter or paragraph comments, vote with your power stone, add it to your library, leave a review (a constructive one please), or donate in my Ko-Fi account: https://ko-fi.com/daydreamtowrite Thank you for reading this.
Hello, Author! Writing Quality: So far, it's decent and understandable, and you write good descriptions. But there are instances like you shouldn't put a comma after a quote, you should put it before the quote ends, for example: "I like this," said John instead of "I like this.", said John. You should use a single quote (') if you want to write the thoughts of the character in mind, for example: 'Why did father teach me?' instead of "Why did father teach me?" I believe in improvement, so I believe in you! Stability of Updates: For me, just update if you're willing or ready. Don't be pressured to update if you really, really can't. Story Development: I don't know how will the story unfold, but it's looking great so far! Character Design: You can distinguish who's who, so you wouldn't have a difficult time adjusting. World Background: I have no idea about some gun's name, so it's pretty cool to learn those names in here. This is a hidden gem, so you should read it if you're a fan of a slow-paced, episodic-like, seeing character interactions, action, and survival. Although you're not a fan of those, I think this is still worth reading. I hope you'll find success in this story! I'll continue to read this, so it stays in my library!