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daydreamtowrite

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Discord: daydreamtowrite#2736 Ko-Fi: https://ko-fi.com/daydreamtowrite

2020-07-13 JoinedGlobal
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  • daydreamtowrite
    daydreamtowrite2mth
    Replied to abby_123

    You'll soon know enough who she is! 馃槈

    Ch 48 048 | meet up
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  • daydreamtowrite
    daydreamtowrite2mth
    Replied to Stephanne_Atalia

    It is! 鈽猴笍

    Ch 2 002 | her bonds
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  • daydreamtowrite
    daydreamtowrite2mth
    Replied to mange4everPD

    Thank you for leaving a review! It means a lot to me. 鉂わ笍 Same I want the Female Lead's beauty. 馃槀

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  • daydreamtowrite
    daydreamtowrite2mth
    Replied to mange4everPD

    I think no one's going to get killed. 馃槄

    Ch 4 004 | her boyfriend
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  • daydreamtowrite
    daydreamtowrite2mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire

    Ch 1 001 | queen of hearts
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  • daydreamtowrite
    daydreamtowrite3mth
    Replied to abby_123

    Thank you so much! 鉂わ笍

    Ch 31 031 | could no longer
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  • daydreamtowrite
    daydreamtowrite3mth
    Commented

    Oh no, not Alma... 馃槶

    "No, he took away Alma, my little sister."
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  • daydreamtowrite
    daydreamtowrite3mth
    Commented

    Holy, that's a lot of features! 馃槻

    "It was handed from the Inventors faction to the other friendly factions. It will serve as your ID and companion. It can serve as radio, Gps, clock, alarm, flashlight, heat sensor, and night vision camera. It was attached to your battle suit at the nape, facing the solar panel to the sun to charge while moving. Or attach it in your hand while combatting.", Harold said.
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  • daydreamtowrite
    daydreamtowrite3mth
    Replied to amaichara

    Thanks for the review, amaichara! Cheers!

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  • daydreamtowrite
    daydreamtowrite3mth
    Replied to SnowPenguin

    Thank you for the review, SnowPenguin! Cheers!

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  • daydreamtowrite
    daydreamtowrite3mth
    Posted

    Hello, Author! Writing Quality: I think you're doing great! Your writing format's fine! Stability of Updates: Just update if you can or want to. Story Development: I think it gets even more interesting. I can't spoil here, but to those who are hesitating, read this. Character Design: You distinguished them very well. World Background: You're also doing great! I hope you'll find success in this story!

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  • daydreamtowrite
    daydreamtowrite3mth
    Replied to Shionokami

    Thank you for the review, Shionokami! Cheers!

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  • daydreamtowrite
    daydreamtowrite3mth
    Posted

    Hello, Author! Writing Quality: I understand that English isn't your first language and there's room for improvement, so I believe you will improve. I suggest to use keyboards with auto-correct spelling or re-read what you've written before publishing it. Stability of Updates: You don't have to force yourself to update as soon as possible. I believe that squeezing or brainstorming ideas for a chapter could be tiring, so update if you only feel to. Story Development: It reminded me of some shounen animes out there. So it's interesting if you're a fan! Character Design: It's nice to see the roles of each character. World Background: Fantasy Setting? It's all good! I hope you'll find success in this story!

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  • daydreamtowrite
    daydreamtowrite3mth
    Replied to Esther_Heredia

    Thank you for the review, Esther_Heredia! Cheers! 馃榿

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  • daydreamtowrite
    daydreamtowrite3mth
    Commented

    Oh... Jonah can't really take a break huh.

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  • daydreamtowrite
    daydreamtowrite3mth
    Commented

    I bet Marlin's going to be a leader someday. 馃榿

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  • daydreamtowrite
    daydreamtowrite3mth
    Replied to abby_123

    Thank you so much for reading this! 鉂わ笍

    Ch 25 025 | talk without cookies
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  • daydreamtowrite
    daydreamtowrite3mth
    Posted

    Hello, Readers. Before you read this story, I want you to read this pinned review first. I'm listing down the reasons why your time wouldn't be a waste if you read "what happened?". Let's start! Writing Quality: I admit. English isn't my first language. But I have the skill to compose or read English. I also have Grammarly installed to check the spelling or grammar errors and suggest synonyms so repetitive words wouldn't occur that much. Stability of Updates: I can update daily. If I can't, I will update after one, two, or three days. I'm trying to update fast as soon as I can. You can check the release dates of each chapter as proof. I can update two chapters if the reader demands it, or if I'm in the mood to do so. Story Development: If you're a fan of friendships, family, slow-paced, and romance, I think you will find this story good. I can assure you this would have a twist even if you see some cliches in here. Character Design: I've designed each Character based on their roles. World Background: It's not complicated to understand the setting since it's based on Modern Fiction. If you're kind enough, please do support this book through leaving chapter or paragraph comments, vote with your power stone, add it to your library, leave a review (a constructive one please), or donate in my Ko-Fi account: https://ko-fi.com/daydreamtowrite Thank you for reading this.

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  • daydreamtowrite
    daydreamtowrite3mth
    Replied to Mel_Aniv

    Thank you for the review, Mel_Aniv! Cheers!

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  • daydreamtowrite
    daydreamtowrite3mth
    Posted

    Hello, Author! Writing Quality: So far, it's decent and understandable, and you write good descriptions. But there are instances like you shouldn't put a comma after a quote, you should put it before the quote ends, for example: "I like this," said John instead of "I like this.", said John. You should use a single quote (') if you want to write the thoughts of the character in mind, for example: 'Why did father teach me?' instead of "Why did father teach me?" I believe in improvement, so I believe in you! Stability of Updates: For me, just update if you're willing or ready. Don't be pressured to update if you really, really can't. Story Development: I don't know how will the story unfold, but it's looking great so far! Character Design: You can distinguish who's who, so you wouldn't have a difficult time adjusting. World Background: I have no idea about some gun's name, so it's pretty cool to learn those names in here. This is a hidden gem, so you should read it if you're a fan of a slow-paced, episodic-like, seeing character interactions, action, and survival. Although you're not a fan of those, I think this is still worth reading. I hope you'll find success in this story! I'll continue to read this, so it stays in my library!

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