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Your knowledge of narutoverse is too shallow. Although i encourage ans admire authors taken on their own ideas into a fanfic, i really hate it when they get their facts wrong. First of all the timeline, that can be overlooked because this is a AU. But giving chakra colors, then mc activating his sharingan on the day he was born, then saying after three years he hasn't unlocked his chakra points, dude you can't activate a sharingan without unlocking your chakra. Then theres the whole bullshit about the mc saying he can't train taijutsu till age 7, dude madara killed his first ***** ninja at the age of 4or5 yrs old and was stronger than most adults at age 10 or something, and here we have a mc with perfect sharingan, one tail level chakra at birth with a regenaration ability as strong if not stronger than hashirama himself and he is afraid of training too much*scoffs* as much as i hate insulting, i hate it more when information is wrong, so i advice you author to reread your facts and correct your mistakes.
Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson
ForgottenLife
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Wow, really you want me to write a story where Mc starts weight training just after birth and when I write about it, you want to whine on thr fact that how impossible this is? Now that I haven't written this, you are whining because I haven't done it. As for reasoning of Madara being stronger than most adults by 10 then just read about the war part, Izuna is 8 years old when he participated in war and killed many shinobis. He is stronger than most adults if he can easily kill them. As for facts, If you like to point them out then provide a reliable source not just your knowledge.
No matter what i say you will probably argue with me so, all i will say is,go to narutopedia and search chakra,it is clearly stated chakra is open when a child turns 3 yrs old, and as for age heh you just contradicted yourself, no taijutsu intil 7, thats just not right
ForgottenLife:Wow, really you want me to write a story where Mc starts weight training just after birth and when I write about it, you want to whine on thr fact that how impossible this is? Now that I haven't written this, you are whining because I haven't done it. As for reasoning of Madara being stronger than most adults by 10 then just read about the war part, Izuna is 8 years old when he participated in war and killed many shinobis. He is stronger than most adults if he can easily kill them. As for facts, If you like to point them out then provide a reliable source not just your knowledge.
No matter what i say you will probably argue with me so, all i will say is,go to narutopedia and search chakra,it is clearly stated chakra is open when a child turns 3 yrs old, and as for age heh you just contradicted yourself, no taijutsu intil 7, thats just not right
ForgottenLife:Wow, really you want me to write a story where Mc starts weight training just after birth and when I write about it, you want to whine on thr fact that how impossible this is? Now that I haven't written this, you are whining because I haven't done it. As for reasoning of Madara being stronger than most adults by 10 then just read about the war part, Izuna is 8 years old when he participated in war and killed many shinobis. He is stronger than most adults if he can easily kill them. As for facts, If you like to point them out then provide a reliable source not just your knowledge.
That's exactly what I have written, he unlocks his chakra at the age of 4 and as for Sharingan, it is his wish, an easy to evolve sharingan. For taijutsu training I metioned it includes weight training and eight gates, you can read it in further chapters. So, I don't think I have made many mistakes, but if it is a genuine plot mistake then feel free to point out.
Baneofthedragon:No matter what i say you will probably argue with me so, all i will say is,go to narutopedia and search chakra,it is clearly stated chakra is open when a child turns 3 yrs old, and as for age heh you just contradicted yourself, no taijutsu intil 7, thats just not right
No your saying he unlocks chakra at 4 thats just not possible, they are unlocked at 3 not 4, and you can't open your sharingan without opening your chakra, because it hasn't circulated within your body, and and you have to 'willingly' make chakra flow to your eyes to open them, so unlocking his sharingan without opening his charka points is impossible, and the thing about taijutsu is just wrong, what about the those who graduated, no better yet, in narutopedia, read about the wars before the introduction of villages, children went to war, especially hashirama and his brothers and madara and his, madara and hashirama were already better than chunin level at the age 4-5, and also, they have chakra so your point of the body like that on earth is not a good reasoning, since with his regeneration he could simply regenerate any wear and tear in muscles, i never said weights and the 8 gates were possible, i simply said not touching any taijustsu until 7 yrs old is just plain right stupid.
ForgottenLife:That's exactly what I have written, he unlocks his chakra at the age of 4 and as for Sharingan, it is his wish, an easy to evolve sharingan. For taijutsu training I metioned it includes weight training and eight gates, you can read it in further chapters. So, I don't think I have made many mistakes, but if it is a genuine plot mistake then feel free to point out.
Dude he trained in basic taijutsu with his dad and Sakumo, I have mentioned it already. The serious training for taijutsu with weights and gates start at age 7. There is no mention of chakra unlocking anywhere in Narutopedia, this is something I added on my own. So, my point still holds. Tell me how will it make sense for a 3 year old child to perform extensive exercise and beat genins and chunnins to shit. If such thing was common in Naruto, then every kid would be a genius. The clans train their kids at age of 5 who later join academy at the age of 5 or 6. If you doubt my words then rewatch the academy part. It is even mentioned in story Kakashi is an exception because of the war. He is the only exception even Minato and Itachi graduated at age 7.
Baneofthedragon:No your saying he unlocks chakra at 4 thats just not possible, they are unlocked at 3 not 4, and you can't open your sharingan without opening your chakra, because it hasn't circulated within your body, and and you have to 'willingly' make chakra flow to your eyes to open them, so unlocking his sharingan without opening his charka points is impossible, and the thing about taijutsu is just wrong, what about the those who graduated, no better yet, in narutopedia, read about the wars before the introduction of villages, children went to war, especially hashirama and his brothers and madara and his, madara and hashirama were already better than chunin level at the age 4-5, and also, they have chakra so your point of the body like that on earth is not a good reasoning, since with his regeneration he could simply regenerate any wear and tear in muscles, i never said weights and the 8 gates were possible, i simply said not touching any taijustsu until 7 yrs old is just plain right stupid.
As for Madara's and Hashirama's age it was never mentioned but from their appearance, I doubt they look like a 4-5 year old. They are more like 6-7 year old. Tobirama is born at that time and heck even he appears to be a 5 year old kid.
Baneofthedragon:No your saying he unlocks chakra at 4 thats just not possible, they are unlocked at 3 not 4, and you can't open your sharingan without opening your chakra, because it hasn't circulated within your body, and and you have to 'willingly' make chakra flow to your eyes to open them, so unlocking his sharingan without opening his charka points is impossible, and the thing about taijutsu is just wrong, what about the those who graduated, no better yet, in narutopedia, read about the wars before the introduction of villages, children went to war, especially hashirama and his brothers and madara and his, madara and hashirama were already better than chunin level at the age 4-5, and also, they have chakra so your point of the body like that on earth is not a good reasoning, since with his regeneration he could simply regenerate any wear and tear in muscles, i never said weights and the 8 gates were possible, i simply said not touching any taijustsu until 7 yrs old is just plain right stupid.
Didnt Tobirama say to Sasuke that when an uchiha feels a certain degree of emotion ‘a special type of chakra’ goes through there brain, i dont think that means you have to have I guess useable chakra to awaken the sharingan...
ForgottenLife:As for Madara's and Hashirama's age it was never mentioned but from their appearance, I doubt they look like a 4-5 year old. They are more like 6-7 year old. Tobirama is born at that time and heck even he appears to be a 5 year old kid.
LORD_LUMI:Didnt Tobirama say to Sasuke that when an uchiha feels a certain degree of emotion ‘a special type of chakra’ goes through there brain, i dont think that means you have to have I guess useable chakra to awaken the sharingan...
well, I'm with the author, if you can deflect shit, why take it. And an author is supposed to say "thanks" to good criticism, if the author just says it even if he knows it is wrong, that he really doesn't care about what is written in that criticism. And I would want an author, who cares about the comments all day, over one who just goes "oh thanks", and just ignores the comment.
DiamondDust:Tip: Being curt is infinitely better than having an argument. “Thanks reader.” Done.
Dude, it is a Fan-Fic. Do the vast majority of us care if some minor details like that are changed or missed. No, we don't. Concerning Chakra age and Sharingan awakening. So? You are telling me that this story becomes lesser if every child in this story and Naruto as a whole doesn't awaken their chakra at age 3 exactly? I mean really... if that is what it takes to pull you out of a fan-fic stop reading them right now for your own sanity. Given the context of him being reborn into this world from a God that granted him wishes... it is very easy to believe that he got sharingan at birth. It now involves the meddling of a God so it frankly makes sense given context. If there was no wish and he was just reborn as an Uchiha... then ya, big oops to do that.
If you are unable to defend your own choices in writing then why write. You may find yourself to be wrong or you may not. But if you are not allowed to defend and explain your choices when confronted and insulted on it... well say goodbye to alot of writers. Its a matter of what's worse. Pissing a fan off and some who may share his opinion and the fervor behind, thus showing it is him who is writing the story and not everyone who is willing to insult to give his ideas. Or he could just capitulate. Let the toxicity potentially grow or embolden new people to do the same. Fan fiction has an bad trait among readers of it. Not all mind you but enough that it is known for it. Namely people who want their ideas of a fan fiction to be in it. The won't write their own but they will make sure the author knows that he was wrong for picking that idea instead of the one they thought was better... personally, author defend your points and ideas. This won't ever be a published novel so all those things like decorum aren't expected or required. Just do you, but of course don't go too far. Here, I don't think you did. Keep writing, I for one am just fine with the facts as they are right now.
DiamondDust:Tip: Being curt is infinitely better than having an argument. “Thanks reader.” Done.
Tho it can be really infuriating when someoen cones and critisies your work like that without points and being an as*hole. the worst part was when he was all like ‘reread and correct your mistakes’
DiamondDust:Tip: Being curt is infinitely better than having an argument. “Thanks reader.” Done.
And people are defending that stuff hopefully there aren't any big mistakes, I'll give this fanfic a chance myself
Alfha_Robby:thanks bruh, if author dont even bother to properly research about the lore of fanfic they write then its 99% the story turn into wish fulfillment garbage, thanks for your rebiew I'm outta here.