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Veiled_Watcher
Veiled_WatcherLv45mth
2024-05-31 10:05

Of all the BL novels that I had read, this one was my first and is my favorite. Seeing how Zane develops and grow thru his life, how he come to accept himself and opening up to other is very very warming. Zane is a scheming and cunning man, such people will usually cut off most of their emotions, especially people with such trauma like Zane. Like in one of the chapter, he’s constantly ignores his own suffering n trauma as he think his pain is nothing to mention and other have it worse. That’s really unhealthy, really an unhealthy mentality to have… I’m really glad that Phoenix was there for him tho, hopefully they’ll open up to each other more soon🥰🥹🥰🥹🥰🥹 I’ll definitely say that their development especially the Mc is epically cool n smart. Hopefully he’ll use his enchanting skills to make lots of tools n a few trump cards, even disposable ones are fine. Just so mc will be a bit more safer n prepared for various situations. Magical tools that’ll help him(maybe automatic following and attacking/defending turret smth smth) devices that’ll protect him giving layers of safety ✨🍀✨🍀✨🍀✨ It’s also very very great seeing his relationship with his family, the father n Xavier/Jasper are so very warm in some aspect. Xavier pls be nicer to Zane, Jasper pls be more sane towards Zane. The father is so caring and heartwarming, tho he can be such a worry wart which is kinda cute haha. 🥰😊🥰😊🥰😊 The grandpapa, elders n some others on the other hand can go **** ***, *你这个***，去***你自己**吧. I really hope to see more Zane relationship with his classmates but it’s okay, I believe once school starts for real again for Zane, things will happen👀. Zane will definitely have fun sca- I mean interacting with them hehe 👀 Going back to Zane n Phoenix, their relationship is just cute, warm n very very hot 🥵. Some chapter are deserving of being spicy. Tho I really hope for another session of Zane topping(tho Zane is such a bottom haha, still him topping every now and then is just so hot), and maybe with some edition of elixirs n toys hehe. Maybe in one smexy night, they’ll switch after each round hehehe. It will be so very hot n spicy lol 🥰🥵🥰🥵🥰🥵 PS. I recommend toys n outfits for their special times hehe😏

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JR_989
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Love this book tremendously so far. The main character is charming and plays cunningly with his smooth facade. The developing romance is endearing and the introduction in this magical world is well-developed. Definitely one of the gems in Webnovel!

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Amateur_Author
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Wow , we have similar beings in our mythology. This made me nostalgic as it reminded me of all mythological beings who are immortals. Thank you author. Keep up the good work.

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Maryixxx
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Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Keep writing, Author. Can't wait for more chapters...

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Kystal88
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Overall a very interesting and good story. I can see where a couple of folks have left comments with suggestions for edits- they looked to be correct, and they'll make the story a little more polished. I enjoyed reading the prologue-type of introduction, and it really set up your story for success in the later chapters, very good use of that writing tactic. The characters' interactions are above average here on WN, and the suspense build up is perfect. Good job, and keep writing, dear author!

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devilDestroyer22
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Interesting premise, however there are quite a few grammatical errors and punctuation errors. If you can polish your book it would turn the book even better. Otherwise good job!

4yr
mahirakhaana
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it's an awesome book👍😍but no update did the author drop it or something do tell if someone know 🤦

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Cyclxne
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First off: Zane, cool name. I like it already lol. The MC's a bit interesting. He's definitely not a hero, but he's not really a villain (anti-hero) either. I haven't seen many MCs like this, so this was a fresh twist. The plot has really just began, but I want more chapters already! Keep it up, author!

3yr
Mikazuki_Sora
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Hi! Your book is interesting. I'm looking forward to Zane's improvement in the story. But I want more updates. Don't stop here! Kudos to the author!!

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CacackleLasson
CacackleLassonLv1

There is some good characterization on the characters, I think the plot will go to somewhere interesting. But in the first part there is a hefty amount of info dumping. It might be challenging for the light readers to read though. I think grammar needs some work but else good story.

4yr
devilDestroyer
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Off to a food start, the characters are well described and i csn visualize it well. I look forward to seeing more chapters coming out. Keep up the good work!

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