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heaven_vault
heaven_vaultLv13yrheaven_vault

so I just read the new chap and finally decided to drop now. the bad point of this story: first ever since the mc started his crew he somehow able to make ace join him (not to big of a deal btw) second many character acted more like an oc such as van augur (but this is not a big deal too as maybe the author just can't get the act right) third he recruited some useless girls from alabasta (among the three only robin was kinda useful because she can read poneglyph the other two was just a leech) fourth the powerlevel was shitty utterly shitty (he can win again dory and broggy, win again enel, and that leopard guy, can fight against sea king underwater, but lose again a vice admiral?) fifth he have haki but mostly useless (to the point I thought that is haki really that useless) sixth in the newst chapter the three girl want the mc to accept perona or they will the crew, when the mc don't care and started leaving. the three girl actually attacked him, and mc only punched their face once and that was just to knock them out. as for perona the mc already started to walk away and leave her, but somehow perona started to have a suicidal though and said her miserable life out loud, and the mc somehow feel guilt and what not decided to accept her and that where I drop this. the good point of this story is: first the flow and take was mostly different from other fic.

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One Piece: Finally Free

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Seikatsu
SeikatsuLv5Seikatsu

Just made me not wanna read this lol

VoidWalker9
VoidWalker9Lv11VoidWalker9

same here lmao

Seikatsu:Just made me not wanna read this lol
Venerabe_Yun
Venerabe_YunLv3Venerabe_Yun

Woaahh, thanks for info !!!

Venerabe_Yun
Venerabe_YunLv3Venerabe_Yun

Same here

Seikatsu:Just made me not wanna read this lol
origin_seth
origin_sethLv4origin_seth

almost all Low star is so usefull review... Thanks... i want to read this but stop when read your review.. i can imagine enough what MC look like.

nesimreg
nesimregLv1nesimreg

the punishment goes further literally like, two chapters later if that's your concern...

origin_seth:almost all Low star is so usefull review... Thanks... i want to read this but stop when read your review.. i can imagine enough what MC look like.
AshburnDz
AshburnDzLv11AshburnDz

me three

Venerabe_Yun:Same here
Barnacleboy
BarnacleboyLv15Barnacleboy

Well ill say your right on all points but the last one. Like your mad about them attacking the captain and your right. But no lie, if you read 1 chapter later, he gives the punishment for all the crew to punch em in the face and robin accepts. The other two try and run and he basically cuts there legs off. If you ask me this novel is already good for not going all wuxia on is like every other fanfic

DaoistGatsu973
DaoistGatsu973Lv13DaoistGatsu973

I agree with you on everything except the last point; you don't let a person commit suicide just because you want to be selfish. If the MC has the means, he might take her, especially if she have suicidal thoughts, He need close monitoring her. It shows you've never had someone close who attempted suicide; otherwise, it wouldn't bother you in such a way.