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After reading 140 chapters from this story, all I can say is .... not bad, not bad at all, and I will tell you why, and anyone who wants me to ask me about this story can reply to the comment. Writing quality: honestly only the first 5-20 chapters have major grammer mistakes, after that it's smooth Sailing. Updating stability: can't complain. Story development: really good. I don't want to spoile anything. Character design: here is my first major Gripe with this story, the mc is pretty heartless and cruel and Psychotic, (which I like, considering my favorite novel is reverend insanity, i pity people who haven't read it), He only cares about four people, my favourite is hes grandpa, one is only characteristic is being "cute", the other is a world-class sadistic bitch, which i hate, The other one is an emotionless siscon that only cares about his sister, he only appears in one ARC and i think appears later on in another arc.The only emotions shown are: spite,anger,Indifference,coldness,greed. And rarely, rarelyyyyy,Selflessness and sympathy. The characters are Two dimensional at best and one dimensional at worst ( word of advice author: show a little more emotions then the ones Mentioned above. Have some characters be nice. Some evil. some Naive. Some experienced. Some like jokes. Some absolutely hate them. Make there dynamics feel alive. And not every character spiteful as shit. There are some examples like: olive( the "cute" character)and Hound Stench. Which have some good qualitys. World Building: the best thing about this story. I just hope you can explore things like, rare elements and their monsters: time,destruction،space, Creation،/ I also hope their monsters aren't extinct, just really hard to encounter, so Felix can find them. Just the idea of Eldritch abominations, hidden in the cracks of space, biding their time is spine chilling and so fucking cool. So please author if you see this review, please, please consider what I said. Minor gripe: you should add some more hand to hand combat Scenes.( You really don't have to do anything I just said , just a request). Over all: a damn good novel with good story, good writing, and good everything. A solid 8'7/10. my 3 Favorite novel of all time. And definitely worth your time.
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MidGard
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I think you might have misunderstood me "friend", I'm not going around ordering people everywhere,I just give the author an interesting idea that can make the story a little bit better. So stop talking about how other people should Feel when the person in question does not care.🤦
Unruh_:Umm.. you know, that's a bit asking for much. You can't just ask someone to change the story based on your preferences. It is not your story. Notice that. The author is free to write what he likes, and pressuring him to do otherwise isn't a good thing, is it. I know that was not your intention, but now, be reasonable. Let the author do his thing, and only give suggestions, that are not formulated as if they are orders. Probs not your intention, but yeah. To conclude, I am sure he already has something in mind. This novel is not going to be a short one.
I didn't want to force the evil of the characters without reason, especially inside the games when everyone already knows what they are signing for. It won't look pretty when someone shows hate signs at Felix inside the games. That's why I am building up real villains in the real world, as those truly could show signs of evil and be within reason. Meanwhile, for hand/hand combat, I couldn't really write about it since Felix had the poisonous aura and everyone who entered it, well they are pretty much doomed. But as bloodline changes, fighting styles changes! So you can always accept a full melee battle in the future! I don't wait to write anymore as it will border like a spoiler! Thank you for the review! <3
Thank you for replying soo fast. That shows you truly consider you fan's opinion. And I deeply respect you for that.
MidGard:I didn't want to force the evil of the characters without reason, especially inside the games when everyone already knows what they are signing for. It won't look pretty when someone shows hate signs at Felix inside the games. That's why I am building up real villains in the real world, as those truly could show signs of evil and be within reason. Meanwhile, for hand/hand combat, I couldn't really write about it since Felix had the poisonous aura and everyone who entered it, well they are pretty much doomed. But as bloodline changes, fighting styles changes! So you can always accept a full melee battle in the future! I don't wait to write anymore as it will border like a spoiler! Thank you for the review! <3
MidGard:I didn't want to force the evil of the characters without reason, especially inside the games when everyone already knows what they are signing for. It won't look pretty when someone shows hate signs at Felix inside the games. That's why I am building up real villains in the real world, as those truly could show signs of evil and be within reason. Meanwhile, for hand/hand combat, I couldn't really write about it since Felix had the poisonous aura and everyone who entered it, well they are pretty much doomed. But as bloodline changes, fighting styles changes! So you can always accept a full melee battle in the future! I don't wait to write anymore as it will border like a spoiler! Thank you for the review! <3
Umm.. you know, that's a bit asking for much. You can't just ask someone to change the story based on your preferences. It is not your story. Notice that. The author is free to write what he likes, and pressuring him to do otherwise isn't a good thing, is it. I know that was not your intention, but now, be reasonable. Let the author do his thing, and only give suggestions, that are not formulated as if they are orders. Probs not your intention, but yeah. To conclude, I am sure he already has something in mind. This novel is not going to be a short one.
the_eldritch_truth:Also will you at least consider what I said about rare elements and monsters?.
the_eldritch_truth:I think you might have misunderstood me "friend", I'm not going around ordering people everywhere,I just give the author an interesting idea that can make the story a little bit better. So stop talking about how other people should Feel when the person in question does not care.🤦