Same man, I had 4 books that I love, 3 got disconnected and 1 finished.

Thanks for the update.

Me too man. Me too

Okay so I just finished the 47th chapter.... And I'm not gonna lie this novel is extremely good and addictive, and I'm going to tell you why. Writing quality: the first 1-30 chapters have some minor grammatical errors And after 30 chapters the grammatical errors are becoming less in numbers. So over all: a little bit of errors here and there, but nothing too major. Updating stability: One chapter a day. But if it was up to me, I would prefer 12 chapter a day, that's how good the story is. Story development: not world breaking, but really, really fun. with some comedy here and there. It basically starts with the mc getting reincarnated into a ergo game that involves'capturing' woman and making them fall in love with the him. That includes: hes mother/sisters/aunt and many more. It's honestly very fun seeing him try hard and then get the fruits of his lobar.that's the basic premise. But don't misunderstand Of course there's a plot and a good one it that, it's not just about courting woman, but it's the focus of the story. Character design: pretty good, everyone has their own personalitie, but no character is really explored. So that's a shame, but hay I'm not going to complain. World background: the world actually feels Rich and with hidden lore. And I hope the writer can expand on it.( But the writer said he is just writing this for fun and Will drop it when he gets bored, so it's hes chose not mine 😅) bonus category: the 's ex' is Good and has a lot of details.( There's no actual penetration UP to this point, just for play, and your going to know the reason if you read it.) Overall: a good novel for those that fancy some good 'se x' and a plot to go with it. Definitely one of my top 10. And a give it: 8.5/10 I highly recommend it to people. suggestions for the writer: 1. Make the world a more mysterious Place.(add some folk lore that Will happen in the future or something. I recommend you read "reverend insanity" and get some inspiration for the world building, But add your own twist to it. Cause reverend insanity, is the king of world building and can give you some ideas on how to handle things. 2. Add a little more depth to the characters. 3. Expend on the blood line system and the original owners of them. 4. You've got to work on hand to hand combat choreography. Because it feels a little underwhelming. And that's about it. Note: I know it might seem like I'm demanding or telling the author what to do. But I'm honestly so worried that this novel might become bad. Because it's so, so Goddamn hard to find a good novel with a promising future AND an author who actually listens to hes fans. And if I'm being harsh, it's actually from my love of this novel and wanting it to become number 1 on this site. Because if the author continuous on this road he will get big. Mark my words Thank you for reading.🤍

Good chapter 😌

Thanks for taking the time of your day to write this novel🤍

This novel is really really good. Honestly surprised. The author should be proud of himself 👏👏.

Holy shit. This chapter almost killed me from laughing. Fucking hell🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

I think you might have misunderstood me "friend", I'm not going around ordering people everywhere,I just give the author an interesting idea that can make the story a little bit better. So stop talking about how other people should Feel when the person in question does not care.🤦

No. That's pretty much it.👌

That's true.

Also will you at least consider what I said about rare elements and monsters?.

Thank you for replying soo fast. That shows you truly consider you fan's opinion. And I deeply respect you for that.

Also there's no romance ( thank God ) because I hate romance. But *** is peasant and that I appreciate.

After reading 140 chapters from this story, all I can say is .... not bad, not bad at all, and I will tell you why, and anyone who wants me to ask me about this story can reply to the comment. Writing quality: honestly only the first 5-20 chapters have major grammer mistakes, after that it's smooth Sailing. Updating stability: can't complain. Story development: really good. I don't want to spoile anything. Character design: here is my first major Gripe with this story, the mc is pretty heartless and cruel and Psychotic, (which I like, considering my favorite novel is reverend insanity, i pity people who haven't read it), He only cares about four people, my favourite is hes grandpa, one is only characteristic is being "cute", the other is a world-class sadistic bitch, which i hate, The other one is an emotionless siscon that only cares about his sister, he only appears in one ARC and i think appears later on in another arc.The only emotions shown are: spite,anger,Indifference,coldness,greed. And rarely, rarelyyyyy,Selflessness and sympathy. The characters are Two dimensional at best and one dimensional at worst ( word of advice author: show a little more emotions then the ones Mentioned above. Have some characters be nice. Some evil. some Naive. Some experienced. Some like jokes. Some absolutely hate them. Make there dynamics feel alive. And not every character spiteful as shit. There are some examples like: olive( the "cute" character)and Hound Stench. Which have some good qualitys. World Building: the best thing about this story. I just hope you can explore things like, rare elements and their monsters: time,destruction،space, Creation،/ I also hope their monsters aren't extinct, just really hard to encounter, so Felix can find them. Just the idea of Eldritch abominations, hidden in the cracks of space, biding their time is spine chilling and so fucking cool. So please author if you see this review, please, please consider what I said. Minor gripe: you should add some more hand to hand combat Scenes.( You really don't have to do anything I just said , just a request). Over all: a damn good novel with good story, good writing, and good everything. A solid 8'7/10. my 3 Favorite novel of all time. And definitely worth your time.