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CacackleLasson
CacackleLassonLv13yrCacackleLasson

Im at 30 something and the author seems to have pacing issues, thus far Im still at the slave life, they introduce this character and that, what they eat, then they do battle some crocs then they talk about the origin of the world and such then he talks about his wife. I was waiting for something to happen, but thus far there was nothing happening, it felt like a filler most of them, well they might develop the world and the characters but it felt too dragged out. There has been no interesting enemies thus far and I still can't see any clear conflict on anything. I imagine at this point he should have a few bands of warriors with him, and his problems has no sense of urgency. Well hes a slave but he is well taken care of, if he was complacent he could just stay here and live as much as he wanted, the MC has literally no reason to go rogue or rebel, except of he wanted to. Since there is no pressure I find it not engaging for me at least.

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Veiled Saga: Conquest and Domination

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Suezaro
SuezaroAuthorSuezaro

Please have more patience... If you are already at 30 then most of your questions will soon be answered. Also, the fun will soon start, it just had a slow build. but yes, if it is not ur cup of tea then who am I to force u. Just asking for another chance tho.

Worn_out_by
Worn_out_byLv15Worn_out_by

Hes a general only so was he a stupidly smart and strong general or was his country just that good cause i dont think a general could conquer to much without hitting a solid wall

Suezaro:Please have more patience... If you are already at 30 then most of your questions will soon be answered. Also, the fun will soon start, it just had a slow build. but yes, if it is not ur cup of tea then who am I to force u. Just asking for another chance tho.
Suezaro
SuezaroAuthorSuezaro

read more chapters to find out, at some point in the 1st arc this shall be mentioned. thanks for reading my book.

Worn_out_by:Hes a general only so was he a stupidly smart and strong general or was his country just that good cause i dont think a general could conquer to much without hitting a solid wall