"If I can't conquer your heart, I will conquer your land." He smirks in the heat of the moment, with drumming heart and trepidation from those audacious words he just declared. And finally, he dealt a spit for his last growl: "This world shall know Domination!" *** Miguel is an Ex-General punished with a death sentence, transmigrated as a spirit trapped in the body of a young former Ranoan: Argus. The era is at the age of conquest, a millennia before Miguel's country was colonized. Or so Miguel thought? Argus, armed with the experience and knowledge shared from a General, declares to conquer the world! But then, Argus found himself in a complicated love triangle between him, the Saman and the Transmigrator. While the phase of the moon changes, the soul who controls his body also changes. Two souls in one body, two fate under one path. How would you unify the islands if you, yourself is divided? Read as the story befitting of its title, unravels the mysteries of this newfound world, How Miguel and Argus deal with their complicated relationship while treading their own path to Domination. A Glorious Veiled Saga that re-writes history! *** UPDATES REGULARLY: 1 CHAPTER DAILY, w/ OCCASIONAL BONUS CHAPTERS All aboard and welcome to the world of Veiled Saga! DM me at discord if you want to join my server (ID: Suezaro#2503) This is my first novel on this platform, Nice meeting you! PLEASE SUPPORT MY BOOK! If you are Filipino reading this, Please support my novel. This story is based on the civilization, culture, and traditions we once had. I hope I can do the best in portraying ours.
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Aragnar is a world of Sword and Magic. Here, the different Races live in their respective domains, protecting the legacies their ancestors build with blood and sweat. But still, the world of Aragnar had not yet been fully explored, and the powerful races contest much of its unexplored land and untapped resources. Ivan Jaeger, an ordinary boy from planet earth with extraordinary dreams, woke up one day in a young body on the verge of starvation and death. No one had known at that instant except the rats killed for the experience that with an exceptional aide, a bigger wolf had arrived in the world of Aragnar, who would make others feel like sheep. But that's not the reason for his acknowledgment to be known and feared as the Wolf of Aragnar. To know that, you need to follow Ivan Jaegar's journey throughout his famed adventures. You need to know in detail about his daily life and his Pursuits after Wealth, Power, Ambition, Military Glory, Eternal life and the greatest of all his goals 'Conquering the Beauties' *Wink* ------------------------------------------- Support the Author: https://ko-fi.com/rollingpandaa https://paypal.me/Rollingpandaa ------------------------------------------- 2 Chapter Per Day (0.00 am GMT+8) Time Approx) Bonus Chapters as per power stones donated by the end of the week. Vote with power stones. Give review. Suggestions and encouragement in the comment box. Also, read my other Novel 'The Pleasure Lord' Happy reading. ------------------------------------------- Tags: Weak to Strong, R-18, Violence, Gore, Mature, Comedy, Reincarnated, Shameless, Harem, Adventure, Beast Companions, Politics, GameElements, Magic&Swords, FantasyRaces ------------------------------------------- Discord-->Rollingpandaa#8813 Discord group for 'The Pleasure Lord'--https://discord.gg/8Xbe3qJ
Revenge is a dish that tastes best when served cold but can a single man take revenge on a powerful kingdom? Do you like it when a hero kills an arrogant young master but spares or falls in love if the arrogant one turns out to be a young miss? Do you like it when the mc collects beauties like trophies on every arc rather than working towards his goal? Do you like it if the MC has to save his friends and family every single time from his enemies? Do you like it when the MC is a goodie two shoe who has to save every single character he meets like a good samaritan? The answer is probably NO. This story takes place in a world ruled by the humans after winning the war against the other races and every single race has been hunted down like prey by humans ever since. However, everything's going to change when another worlder steps into this world with only one goal, to destroy everyone who wronged him in the past. But no one realized, there's an evil force from ancient times that has already started to wake up and the only hope to win against this evil force is DON. **NOTE** :- Before you read the book,you have to know somethings English is my second language and I've taught my self by watching movies and reading novels so you can find grammar mistakes though i always edit the chapters again and again. Its my fantasy world and i bent some unwritten laws of fantasy Dont hold back your thoughts bcz without you criticising I cant get better and improve the novel Dont read the novel with a sole purpose of finding logic errors and mistakes,just try to enjoy the journey Finally,SAY HELLO TO YOUR BELOVED/HATED AUTHOR (me) when you start to read the novel p.s - DONT JUDGE THE BOOK BY THE AUTHOR'S RUSHED OUT/ MESSY / BAD SYNOPSIS !!!!!!!
Ayaan entered a portal that leads him to the world of magic. There, he received the legacy of the greatest demon to have lived under heaven, a magic library system he can use to level-up his magic powers. But great power requires one to pay a great price, too. Resulting in him losing his humanity! *** "Won't you reconsider taking her as one of your spouses?" "Fuck you, Birdy!!" "Hehe, curse all you want, but I can hear all your thoughts, you can't deceive me." *** "Can't you see how hot she is?" "No, I can't." "Then you must be gay." """___""" *** This is the story of the ordinary boy who will walk an extraordinary path. This is the story of love, betrayal, revenge, and tragedy. Follow Ayaan on his journey and find out dark-secrets of this new world. Tags: High-Fantasy, Magic, Male-Protagonist, Romantic-Subplot, No-Ntr, No-Rape, Evolution, Cultivation, Weak-Strong, Romance, Harem, R-18, Elemental-Magic, World-Travel, Mythical-Beasts, Legacy, System, Power-Up, Game-Element, Minor-Smut, Non-Human protagonist, Revenge, Adventure, Action, Secret-Dimensions, Beautiful-Female leads, Necromancy, Undead. Caring to his girls but ruthless to his enemies. ______________________________________________ Discord Server: https://discord.gg/DJqTQYd Discord Name: Eternal_Demon Instagram: Eternal_Demon1 ______________________________________________ The cover isn't mine. All credit goes to the artist.
Darkness. The ultimate ruler, the true One-Above-All. Everything starts from it, and everything returns to it eventually. People say that in your final moments, darkness seeps in your very existence, engulfs your whole being. They say it’s an incredibly relaxing feeling that takes you on your journey to your afterlife. They say that in the very darkness, the ‘nothingness’ your weary soul will finally be able to rest and relax. This brings up some very philosophical and existential questions. Do you even exist? Follow the epic journey of Aiden, the last primal, a unique and ancient race as he finds his place in a strange, new world, filled with threats and violence. ----- If you would like to reach out to me, my discord tag is: Shaele#5221 Don't worry, I don't bite (too hard)! ----- This story (and the world itself) is something I started writing and creating 15 years ago, while I was telling stories with my friends in our regular D&D sessions. The world is a hand-crafted fantasy world, filled with history and lore that we created over the course of years. While I may be new to the writing scene, I will do my very best to bring you an enjoyable experience. UPDATE: The current schedule (from September 2020): 1 chapter EVERY DAY (between 1500-1700 words) One final note: I plan to write R-18 chapters later as well (the first one is planned to happen between chapter 170-190), but as you will see from the flow of the story, this is not feasible for the short term. While I have a sizable backlog pre-written, nothing besides the main story is set in stone, and I look forward to constructive criticism and feedback. Hope you enjoy the journey just as much as I enjoyed creating it. ----- The cover image is not my own creation, all credit goes to the author. It was listed under "Free to use with modification". I'm hoping that at some point I can replace it with one fan-made. :)
The time has come! The Earth had been chosen to become another victim of the universal scheme and so part of its lands along its residents transport to another world! Reigner is one of those and this is his story. Come and see how Reigner deals with new, another world and the reincarnations with his Item Creation System!
The past is the sea of the present, and it's the shrine of the future. No one knows that the master of chaos, the king of death, and the envoy of hell. Is sittings on a throne of skulls as he watching the world in a deadly silence .. No one knew at the time that the past, present and future are a maze of amazement and shocks. Do not lower your head while you read so you Don't hurt yourself. when the hero of the story is the villain that the world is afraid of, when will the clock stop and announce the beginning of the end
Kaz can't help but be the butt of everyone's jokes. always being harassed and beaten by his classmates and neglected by his parents. Kaz had finally had enough. In a desperate fit of rage, he sought to change his world around but instead he found himself at death's door. only a voice to guide him to the afterlife. starting his new life as a Kobold in an unfamiliar world, Kaz must grow and become the Prince of Darkness to survive and become something more than himself. On the other hand, the Kobold Fritz is starting his new life in a human body and must come to understand what it means to be human. Will he find redemption in the human race or will he succumb to despair living Kaz's life? Will Kaz's hatred for humanity cause him to destroy the world or will he find something greater to achieve? find out in "A System for the Prince of Darkness." Updates Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays!
What will you do if you are reincarnated in another world full of wonders and magic? Of course, you want to be a Hero or a Villain! The problem is our Main Character chose not to become any of those, but he cannot avoid trouble!!! Meet Wreck, an average dude trying to live peacefully in a different world. Join him as he explores and accidentally establishes his legacy in this Medieval Fantasy World!!!! Uploads every day 7 chapters every week 1500-2000 words every chapter LOVE Y'ALL
Political marriage, war taxes, subsidies, a tribute... All those terms sound nice when one juggles them from behind the screen of his trusty computer! Junk food? Check. Sugary drinks that will cause me diabetes? Check. Two weeks of leave from the work? Check. A fresh copy of the newly released game finishing downloading as I'm going back from the grocery store? Check. Oops! My emotions got better to me, and I tripped on the stairs. I'm so silly! Then... Why the hell am I kneeling in a throne room, watching the marriage and coronation ceremony of the King, dressed in the noble robes with the game itself only flashing in the corner of my eyes? Discord link: https://discord.gg/pJTVGZZ
In the World of Eldeon, whereas Magic and Magical beast exist. Kiro was summoned into this unknown realm with the help of the SYSTEM. He strived his way to overcome the tribulation of this new life. Follow him on the journey to this isekai-world. * * * Have some suggestions? Join my discord channel. https://discord.gg/mKypCxc *Disclaimer* I do not own the cover photo. *Source* Pinterest: Kel, Holy Marksman
"THE END IS HERE" The only sentence which made sense in the situation Mark was in. Trying to take the easy way out from all the horrors of his life Mark Blaze encountered the eruption of Zombies. The fight for survival has started. Would Mark be able to survive while facing his dark past he wanted to get away from or would he lose everything once again? IMP NOTE- THE MC IS NOT COLD BLOODED AND ISN'T A SOLO WARRIOR. IF YOU EXPECT THAT KIND OF CHARACTER THEN I CAN ONLY SAY THIS BOOK DOES NOT PROVIDE YOU THAT. NOTE- This book is for the spirity contest so please do support it
Eric's hands dug in a Black Wolf's chest for the sake of self defense, a Fireball howled from his palms after out of pure fear, splitting the Wolf in half! That's where his Destiny began! Fire? Ice? What's one magic when Eric as the Electus has all 8? At the end of the day, what is magic? Is it really magic? Do Demons have anything to do with this? Continent of Ignis! Going through racial cleansing, land wars, an economical collapse too! But it's still nothing compared to the "Peaceful" Demons who want Ignis and the rest of the 13 Continents gone, tearing their way through everything to achieve their goal! Eric, is the only being powerful enough to put an end to this madness! Justice will remain his best friend. My goals: - I'm gathering the guts and nerves to write 150k+ words a month which is equivalent to 100 Chapters or 2 Volumes, best part is that I'm succeeding! Please give me motivation with a Power Stone! - This book series will stretch over 40 Volumes (2,500+ Chapters), that's the minimum guarantee from me as the Author. - I can't predict with 100% accuracy from now but my goal is to reach 100 Volumes (5,000+ Chapters) with this series, and considering how many ideas I've already written down there is a 70% possibility of reaching this goal or go beyond it. Not to mention anything slightly less than the goal, the possibilities just rise! Novel's Discord Server including Maps and Kingdom Budgets: https://discord.gg/35mTmwA
Within less than a day of the Inquisitor’s arrival, Fen ends up bound to the stake. As he stares down at the face of the friend who sold him out, the stakes are lit as the execution begins. "I will burn you for this treason!" Those words resounded in Fen's mind as his body gave up, releasing his soul into the flames Only for it to be cleansed, and reborn from the fires! Now, the age of the dragon is over. It's time for the return of the Phoenix! Discord link: https://discord.gg/pJTVGZZ
This is a work of fiction, any names, characters, stories or events, are fictitious! (Even the country in the story is just the author's fantasy as the author never visited those countries in the story) Armipotent is an archaic adjective meaning "strong in battle." Basically, it refers to someone who is physically tough in war. Originally, it was used to refer to the Roman god of war, Mars. ===================== Tang Shaoyang, an orphan who dropped out of the middle school to fight on the street as he found out school was useless for a penniless orphan like him. Tang Shaoyang dropped out of his school, fighting on the street, and made a name for himself. Berserker Tang from Youyouliucun. Afterward, Dragon Wing triad recruited him and everything was good for him. Even though the public deemed him as a tumor of society, Tang Shaoyang was having a decent life. Until one day, everything changed as an absurd and strange game started. "... Game starts! Stage one: Survival for The Fittest!" After the game started, zombies appeared out of nowhere. ... Ding! "You have killed 1000 zombies less than 24 hours since the game started! You gained 3 Talents!" Dong! "You may choose 3 Talents! please choose carefully!" Tang Shaoyang held his chin and mused what Talent he had to choose. "With Zombies appear everywhere, I need an infinite strength... this is one, I still need to choose 2 Talents more..." Then a lewd smile formed on his lips. "I want an infinite strength, charm and charisma to conquer women, and the last one, I want to upgrade my **** so I can please my women!" After saying this, Tang Shaoyang laughed aloud. "Hahaha, there's no way such talent exists... ehhhhh?!!!" Ding! Dong! "3 Talents are consumed! You have been granted Divine Body! Good Luck, Gamer Tang Shaoyang!" Tang Shaoyang immediately checked the detail of Divine Body. After a brief silence, he muttered unbelievably. "Such Talents really exist..." Note: I don't own the cover. If the creator wants me to take down the cover or put credit, please notify me by replying to my review at the Review section.
The great mystic universe, where the magic is part of everyday live of people. Where users of magic are considered elite and everybody dream to become a Magic Emperor. As the ancient words are engraved in the heart of every one who wants to reach the peak. MORTAL LIVE BY THEM, TRANSCEND KNOW THEM, SAINTS UNDERSTAND THEM, DIVINE TRANSFORM THEM, WORLD CREATES THEM. A boy born in country side dream to become one of the few peak expert standing on the peak of the universe and discover the mysteries of past and conquer the future. As he sitting on his throne and looking at the vast horizon, Kai declared "The first era was dominated by God Emperors and Universe Lord" "The second era was ruled by Fallen Great Magic Emperors" "The third era belongs to me" NOTE: MC IS OP. STRONG FROM BEGINNING. later he will become weak and strong again. ------------------------------------------------------------------------- **Discord=> Evernightlord#5624 Discord Group=>https://discord.gg/MDY3g4Z **Updates** 7chapter a week and time to time bonus chapters depending upon the power stones at the end of the week. 1000power stones two extra chapters 2000power stones four exta chapters Editor:- Arumi **Disclaimer** This cover is not owned by me. If you want me to take it down just comment me.
I woke up in this world with a System and a sword. Without hesitation, I chose to complete the princess’ quest with my weapons: Arrogance. Cunning. Pride. I will lead guild Sol Invictus. Denizens of the 7 hells, respect me. Servants of the 11 heavens, know fear. Guild Invictus, know the suffering of training so you can wrest victory from the jaws of those who dare doubt you. This is a story about a snake named Tycondrius waking up in a fantasy world of swords and sorcery. There is action, violence, unapologetic murder, and arrogant displays of power. There is an emphasis on combat growth as well as psychological growth on more than a few members of Guild Invictus. There is camaraderie and also the inevitable comedic dialogue amongst manly men. There are even elements of romance and Tycon running away from terrifying, powerful women. (Did you know most female snakes eat their partners after mating?) Give this book a read. I hope some of these stories can inspire you to fight your battles with analytical intelligence, heroic courage, and ruthless lethality. Schedule: 12+ chapters per week. 2/day Mon-Fri. 1/day Sat-Sun @ 11:00 PDT Chapter Length: 1000+ words per chapter Here is my discord: https://discord.gg/NNbAj7N Constructive criticism and corrections welcome. Other Authors extra-welcome.
The power of absolute control... Time. As Rock died, he mysteriously reincarnated in Shun Long's almost dead body when a mystical rock merged with his soul, and a sudden influx of information flooded his head. He is now cultivating a magical technique called the 'Monarch's Hourglass' that affects time around him. This is his journey as he adventures through the cultivation world, fighting geniuses while he reaches the pinnacle in both martial arts and alchemy.
Chase is a normal young man that loves anime very much. On one unfortunate day, he died... But whoever thought that he was able to get another chance by GOD at a new world as he been reincarnated back with his memories still intact. Reincarnated back in the world full of magic and demons, where Chase always just saw in those Anime! "EEHHH!!! I AM A RING!" Not as a living being but a ring... ------------------------------------------------ Info: The novel cover is not mine! I will remove them if you tell me. Update: I will also be updating 2 chapters daily, if I was really busy I will only upload 1 chapters Contact Me: instagram.com/ex_chaser
*NO NTR* *NO RAPE* *Some chapters contain R-18 Content* Kyoya got summoned to another world by a beauty whose aim was sole to get a weak husband! So weak that he wouldn't be able to get a harem and seek other women! Such motives quickly exposed beauty's real personality - a yandere - so Kyoya could only have two paths in his new life! Either to get enough strength to run away from the yandere wife or be strong enough to teach her common sense! A few days were enough to break one of his paths, however! But not only that, his special power, All Creation System, seemed to favor a yandere wife instead of him?! - Comments and replies of the author are his and only his opinion. - Story is a fiction solely for the entertainment purposes, nothing related to the reality. -
As blood rushed up his throat and leaked between his teeth, his sinister appearance aggravated to the point that he looked like demon. After his maniacal laugh, his punctured lungs finally gave out, causing his whole body to collapse on the ground, dyeing it a scarlet shade. His mind went blank, while his consciousness started leaving his battered body. *** After what appeared to be a few minutes, he suddenly woke up. He was startled at first, but realized that he had indeed died. He had no body and everything around him was black, without an ounce of life. It was an absolute void. ''So this is what happens when you die... You just drift in darkness... That's actually underwhelming... I wonder if I'll just fade away into nothingness'' When Derrick's thoughts were starting to drift, a prompt showed up in front of him. [Welcome Derrick Tarlin! This is System : Nemesis] [Would you like to take revenge? Yes/No]
How would you feel living a life of absolute misery and pain? What would think when the sister of a girl you were falsely accused of killing breaks into your home and kills you by accident. Even the Gods are unsettled with what humanity has become, so what do they offer John? A: Reincarnation B: Power C: Revenge D: The choice to start apocalypses throughout the three universes. or E: All of the Above You know where this is going.
An RPG gamer who played the cultivation VRMMORPG ‘The Immortal’ for years, finds himself teleported to a parallel world that resembled the game greatly. He takes on the body of his ascended online character, only to find the once thriving Heaven's in ruins, the thousand year old sects nothing but ancient memories. Follow him as he sets out on a journey to find out the reasons behind his teleportation, and hopefully unveil the mystery of the tragedy that struck the heavenly realm.
In less than a minute, the world that we knew had changed. A mass vertigo occurred and for a brief moment, everyone fell unconscious. When people woke up, they learnt that their bodies were strengthened and that they also gained unique skills for themselves. Zombies and mutated monsters began to rampage on the streets. Jun was a casual thug. When he woke up, he gained an extra ability that will help him survive in this new world. Join him as he journeyed through this apocalyptic wasteland in search of his remaining family. Watch him build his own underground empire and make a haven for his own. NOTE: This is a slow-pace novel.
Aizen, an ultra-genius scientist finally succeeded in making a breakthrough in science and technology by creating the world's first Super Artificial Intelligence. But as if fate had another will, he died with a smile on his face after completing his perfect masterpiece, leaving his life's ultimate work that will continue to evolve with time to the world for the hope of an extraordinary and unimaginable future. "Welcome back, Master Aizen." That was the first word Aizen heard when he opened his eyes. He awoke before a beautiful woman who was familiar to him. Axel, an avatar of the Impartial Artificial Intelligence System or introduced to the public as [Axel Goddess] finally managed to revive her long-lost master alongside his daughter, Ana. His short sleep to welcome the morning turned out to be eternal sleep that was less eternal, a thousand years had passed since his death. Faced with a problem that even Axel could not solve which forced the creation of a second civilization on Mars, while humanity on Earth was on the verge of extinction because the deadly mutations caused living organisms to grow violent by changing their bodies and abilities. With a super hot Artificial Intelligence that finally gets a perfect human body, as well as a clingy and spoiled daughter who is formerly estranged on his side, Aizen must use his intelligence to find a way to save his home planet which turned out to be very complicated and ends up getting them involved in it.
"Gods? Magic? Fantasy? Nonsense." An-Namrud never cared for any of those things. All that mattered was his work. The Tower of Babel. This would prove it to everyone... that gods do not exist. Until one day, it all came crashing down. His world destroyed, his life ended. Thrust into a world of magic, where gods exist. They compete for the souls of mortals in a never ending game of power and betrayal. An-Namrud is reincarnated as Aleksandros, the son of a nobleman. But, he is cursed and doomed to a life of suffering and his eventual death. Somehow, he escapes this chain of misfortune and receives unimaginable power. He will get his revenge. Rise, the 'Soul Eater', devourer of souls. Release schedule is 3 chapters a week for now. Chapters will be released on Monday, Wednesday and Friday. Novel will go premium in February (maybe). At least that is what I am being told for now.
The child prodigy who lost his parents due to a catastrophic event. Soon follows his journey to reclaim the honor that was taken away from him. And as he travels throughout the continent, he may unravel the truth and lies hidden between the faces of darkness. Artirian Reginald Cartelan. "I who prevail, as I hold my destiny"
40 years ago, our world believed that magic was merely fiction, and nothing more. But that all changed when it was revealed that magic truly does exist to the public. To that end, a place was created, a place where magic can be studied and taught. And that place is Takamagahara Island, the home of Kurokami Tatsuro, a young man who just wants to live his days in peace. That is until he has a fateful encounter one day, an encounter that would change not only his life but the entire world ...
Main character dies killed by a truck in the middle of the sea and is reborn 400 years in the past. cover: painting by Józef Brandt, a Polish painter 1841-1915 ______________________________________________ I'm writing this for fun, so ... no stones. Save them for someone who needs them. Maybe I will quit it sometime so I advise you to keep it in mind. The language can be vulgar, there will be blood, there will be guts and sex. Probably someone will be offended by reading ... but I don't give a shit. English is not my first language so expect mistakes. ￼ ￼
In the year 2025 virtual reality stopped being a dream and became part of every person's daily life. On January 25, 2030 Samsara Online was launched, being the first virtual reality game supported by the main banks of the world. It was also from that moment that Xie Feng's life started to deviate from the norm, changing his destiny completely. Other tags in the novel: Student life - Mystery - Espers ***** You can go to Discord/suggestions and leave a comment if you think something needs to be improved. Discod Link: https://discord.gg/hDsvdSD
After death, Devon is given the second chance he never wanted. He decides to make the most out of his new life, exploring all that life in this new world has to offer, whether that be adventuring or soliciting elf girl prostitutes. For more lewd, check out patreon.com/melonball (Extreme R-18 warning!)
Come and follow the story of a boy named Mike and his adventures with the hypnosis system and see for yourself the stupid things he would do with such power.
After waking up with a vague recollection of the past, our MC finds himself as a humanoid tester in a corporation. He doesn't know who he was, or why he was there, the only thing he knew is that he has to test the humanoids sent to them or death awaits him. The only way to escape this predicament is to participate in the annual freeing of workers: Runners Survivors. Run or Be Captured. Fight or Be Killed Welcome to the Runners Survivors! Run for your life! Ready!!! Start!!!
Veiled Saga: Conquest and Domination is a book of fiction written by Suezaro. Though the story follows a particular culture and tradition of a certain country, the author has added his own twists and turns. The book is related to the Philippines, an Asian country. The terms are described well, so no confusion can arise here. The characters are fleshed out, and for that, I would like to compliment the author! Each has their own distinguishable characteristic, making readers fall in love with the characters. Grammar is definitely the major flaw in this novel. Sometimes, phrases ended up being somewhat sentences. There are one line paragraphs that are not meant to be one line, it makes things look like a letter. Next, dialogues are great. Punctuation is superb! Commas and em dashes are used properly. If there is anything the author has to improve, that would be grammar. Have is used for present, and had is used for past. I've noticed some "haves" took the place of "hads" even if the one being referred to is past. Well, that is all I can say! Keep writing!
I really like the way you write, I haven't read every chapter yet but the first few chapters had me falling in love with the story Plus the way you based it on Filipino culture really strikes something in me, I hope to see more good chapters coming our way, there isn't anymore praise I could give other than it was really exceptional Keep up the great work and I wish you the best in all that may come your way
Hello, Suezaro So I came from scribble Hub, I have read your story from there. At first I got furious that it only contained up to 10 chapters but I see that you have moved here. I am glad you did not drop this book because I really like this book and I want to see its end. I finally found a book to my cup of tea and am not letting you go! You should finish this book! I love how the story had progressed. I reached Chapter 42 and men I am loving the flow of the story. I want to find out what will happen next. Although the grammar is a bit rough and unpolished, well I suggest you to get yourself an editor. You are good to go. The world building is nice and the characters seems to come alive as I read them. that's all and wish you luck author! keep it up
I had this concept long before isekais were just becoming popular but life happened and I can only shelf it in my bank of novels. But now I am determined to finish this book! I will need all the support I can receive from you guys. So, for all my readers who wrote a review and commented, And those who continuously read this novel... I THANK YOU! We just created a Discord server, where we can discuss my novels and future novels. If you are interested, visit us from this link: https://discord.gg/vCk2Xe
So a General huh? Then we can expect an expert in warfare? Also I noticed some Filipino terms... Author san must be a Filipino? Kamusta tol! Hanep galing mo magenglish haha So far from the chapters released, it was a great one. More chapters please! And Author-san! Keep up the good work. You should add a book cover too, so that other readers would be much interested on your novel.
Im at 30 something and the author seems to have pacing issues, thus far Im still at the slave life, they introduce this character and that, what they eat, then they do battle some crocs then they talk about the origin of the world and such then he talks about his wife. I was waiting for something to happen, but thus far there was nothing happening, it felt like a filler most of them, well they might develop the world and the characters but it felt too dragged out. There has been no interesting enemies thus far and I still can't see any clear conflict on anything. I imagine at this point he should have a few bands of warriors with him, and his problems has no sense of urgency. Well hes a slave but he is well taken care of, if he was complacent he could just stay here and live as much as he wanted, the MC has literally no reason to go rogue or rebel, except of he wanted to. Since there is no pressure I find it not engaging for me at least.
I can feel the amount of effort the authur must have done in order to write this book. Highly recommended! Its a must read. Just the few chapters alone, takes you to a different world. The characters comes alive and its not ur typical isekai webnovels. Unlike those other books who literally have npc side characters here you can feel that the characters have thier own thoughts and not just being forced by the plot. This book definitely has potential. I hope that webnovel would invite the author of this book for a contract. He deserves it.
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