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QingDomCom
QingDomComLv22yr
2022-05-07 21:38

This story is action packed, especially the first few chapters. It reads like a thriller as it gets your heart racing as you narrowly escape from these deadly situations with the MC. I love the pacing and storyline. I also love how we learn about the character a little overtime. I still have so many questions that I can't wait to keep reading to find out. why does she drink blood? Why does she only use a 200 year old gun? where is everyone else? what caused the apocalypse?

A Supernatural Apocalypse

Bit_Lucky
4.8
77 Chs

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Bit_Lucky
Bit_LuckyAuthor

I don't care if you out the web novel put me in the rankings or not All I want is you people to add this to your library, Love it, Share it, and also keep reading increasing the people who read this. i just want you all to have a wonderful time reading this. Check my other story if you want to in original works.

4yr

Mary_Algen_Guiang1
Mary_Algen_Guiang1Lv14

First, I have a question, do you read light novels? this is exactly the format of a light novel. you have a character page, description of powers, characteristic of protagonist page, and most importantly, it is easy to understand and absorb. why am I asking? because I love light novels. and I clearly admire anyone who also loves to create one. thank you for an enjoyable read, and for reminding me of my favorite kind of book there is.

3yr
Sukyna_Katamba
Sukyna_KatambaLv13

Wow. Wow. wow. I highly recommend the author to write more coz I cant wait for the next chaps. The book was very great and it vividly showed the characters.

3yr
dominick_munoz
dominick_munozLv1

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Swords_Sensei
Swords_SenseiLv1

I will describe the work as, incredible. I am not a big fan of the genre of this work, but this was one of the few that I liked. I was not attracted by the problems or the situations as such, but the way in which the author described it and I feel that this is something important. 4 stars :3

3yr
HANA_4345
HANA_4345Lv3

So, let's go with the strong points first... The character and world-building in this story are pretty decent. Just as other reviewers have written, it has this light novel type of building which is pretty adequate for the Webnovel platform and readers. What can the author improve? 1. Grammar. (Which the author knows since in ch1 it was mentioned about the grammatical mistakes. I recommend using Grammarly or MS Word to check on those tiny mistakes. If you are writing in 3rd POV remember that most verbs are going to be in the past tense.) 2. Being clearer. I like reading the synopsis, and it took me a few times re-reading it to understand the idea. There's also a lot of redundant sentences. The same goes for the chapters I have read so far. You need to describe so your readers know but prevent being redundant. Try using pronouns. And... that's all. I hope that maybe someday the author will go back and edit the chapters. This story can have a lot of potential with a bit of more polishing.

3yr
Vanessa_dowlatram
Vanessa_dowlatramLv1

Perfect book dear author you are an amazing writer who one in a million best book are been liked by me your book are amazing and wonderful I usually don't like these types of book but I give it a try and I was amazed with the talent and words that are in it it touches my heart and that I really loved it right now I am running out of words to say I will say I rate this novel 100% The best I could have done you are an amazing writer keep it up 🎖 your book \ novels mean alot to me you are one of the best author in the world . and I wish you all the best in the future and continue to achieve perfection and write more novel can't wait to see more chapters from your sincerely fan Vanessa dowlatram thank you very much for letting me comment on your book😀 \novel.🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎗🎗🎗🎗🎗🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎖🎖🎖🎖

4yr
favorit567
favorit567Lv10

this story feels so real and it is well written! it has me hooked already and i want to keep reading. the author did a great job in creating this story

4yr
RaijinInu
RaijinInuLv4

The story is an intriguing premiss to the post-apocalyptic sci-fi genre, in a way it made me think of ghouls and the bloodlust of vampires. Am curious how this story will continue to grow. Want something fresh filled with lots of blood and action? Certainly give this novel a try! Keep up the good work Author-kun! ^_^

4yr
Sentigosedge
SentigosedgeLv3

a well written book. i like how the character was introduced and how easy the writer was able to show us the world. there was alot of exposition and it was easy to follow. the action scene are a bit wordy in my opinion but that's fine but yea that's all i got for this book I'ma keep reading also.

1yr
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