First, I have a question, do you read light novels? this is exactly the format of a light novel. you have a character page, description of powers, characteristic of protagonist page, and most importantly, it is easy to understand and absorb. why am I asking? because I love light novels. and I clearly admire anyone who also loves to create one. thank you for an enjoyable read, and for reminding me of my favorite kind of book there is.

Wow. Wow. wow. I highly recommend the author to write more coz I cant wait for the next chaps. The book was very great and it vividly showed the characters.

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I will describe the work as, incredible. I am not a big fan of the genre of this work, but this was one of the few that I liked. I was not attracted by the problems or the situations as such, but the way in which the author described it and I feel that this is something important. 4 stars :3

So, let's go with the strong points first... The character and world-building in this story are pretty decent. Just as other reviewers have written, it has this light novel type of building which is pretty adequate for the Webnovel platform and readers. What can the author improve? 1. Grammar. (Which the author knows since in ch1 it was mentioned about the grammatical mistakes. I recommend using Grammarly or MS Word to check on those tiny mistakes. If you are writing in 3rd POV remember that most verbs are going to be in the past tense.) 2. Being clearer. I like reading the synopsis, and it took me a few times re-reading it to understand the idea. There's also a lot of redundant sentences. The same goes for the chapters I have read so far. You need to describe so your readers know but prevent being redundant. Try using pronouns. And... that's all. I hope that maybe someday the author will go back and edit the chapters. This story can have a lot of potential with a bit of more polishing.

Perfect book dear author you are an amazing writer who one in a million best book are been liked by me your book are amazing and wonderful I usually don't like these types of book but I give it a try and I was amazed with the talent and words that are in it it touches my heart and that I really loved it right now I am running out of words to say I will say I rate this novel 100% The best I could have done you are an amazing writer keep it up 🎖 your book \ novels mean alot to me you are one of the best author in the world . and I wish you all the best in the future and continue to achieve perfection and write more novel can't wait to see more chapters from your sincerely fan Vanessa dowlatram thank you very much for letting me comment on your book😀 \novel.🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎗🎗🎗🎗🎗🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎖🎖🎖🎖

this story feels so real and it is well written! it has me hooked already and i want to keep reading. the author did a great job in creating this story

The story is an intriguing premiss to the post-apocalyptic sci-fi genre, in a way it made me think of ghouls and the bloodlust of vampires. Am curious how this story will continue to grow. Want something fresh filled with lots of blood and action? Certainly give this novel a try! Keep up the good work Author-kun! ^_^

a well written book. i like how the character was introduced and how easy the writer was able to show us the world. there was alot of exposition and it was easy to follow. the action scene are a bit wordy in my opinion but that's fine but yea that's all i got for this book I'ma keep reading also.