I like this. I really do. This is actually the first time I found a fanfiction on webnovel, no matter what fandom or genre, that is actually very good. Color me impressed. I sincerely hope this story will be continued for a long time, hopefully even beyond the storyline of the seventh book. Maybe explore some more of the unknown wizarding world. Magic in different countries, ancient relics and ruins, myths, and all that. For now, I defenitely recommend this book to anyone who likes the wizarding world. Keep up the good work. 👍

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One of his wishes is to be handsome then in the first few chapters hes tortured and scarred everywhere also they slice his eyes so he is blind. what was even the point of that wish and wouldve been nice to know he was a blind mc before reading

keep going ^^ .........................................................................................................................................

English is not my main language, I was expecting to read it but I was very disappointed with the story, and basically the beginning of a fan-fic that did not go forward, I expected more from history as a person to die and the reward and reincarnation and soon so I lose my family out of nowhere and suffer for months. it was better to stay dead, worse of all he accepts it in a good way and doesn't complain and totally illogical since he lost his family in the first life and soon lost it in the second it was better to have put him as an orphan that the story could have been better, and another serious but interesting thing to have put him in a family because why put him in a family of pure blood he invents without a good story, you cannot accept it, because the end is already in his face he will spend the 7 years being a helper from Harry because dumbledore will say that his parents were of the order of the phoenix and he would like him to be of the order too then he will spend the whole fan-fic helping everyone with his very bad powers, sorry thing and what i think when i read the first 6 chapters

A good fan fic with nice character growth as well as a nice MC. Good job author 👍 ps: the story mostly fallows canon, but he still does his own thing.

Amazing, this reads more of an OC Harry Potter fanfiction from most and its veryrefreshing to see one that isnt blindly following around the golden trio, while it does have some spelling/grammer errors overall they are barely noticable and overall I can safely give it a 5 star rating.

Good writing, with an average understanding of the canon, too little interactions with characters from Rowling, and way too much interaction with OC, it's well written but not my thing, from one side you had the horrors of the death eaters and from the other, the naivety of a child story, the idealistic points of view and hero complex of the MC are a bit over the top for my liking but that's only my point of view I stick around until chapter 67 and couldn't go further. I gave you 5 in writing quality even when taking into account some misspells because you deserve it, but 2 in story development and character design, as I said too much contrast between a gritty reality of the horrors of the death eaters and the "fluff" you presented, anyway keep going in your projects, although it wasn't for me, I see why many people liked it. I wish you success in your future endeavors.

a beta mc and too much of a ron lover with the way ron acting and the way you keep making the mc patient with him yuckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk