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Ztik21
Ztik21Lv64yr
2020-08-11 11:57

*personal opinion that hopes not to offend anyone* Thus ends the first binge. I do enjoy the story and long for more. Thank you for writing such good story. 😁😁😁😁 I like how the MC doesn't really give a f with Harry... At least from what I've read. Because I find it logical to care for your family more than a person you only know from a book. Since he still needs more time and power to defend himself and his family. I like that. Knowing your limit is realistic especially for a Ravenclaw. As to why only 4 stars for the writing quality... Some grammatical errors and misspelled words. Nothing too major that a minor editing or proofreading can't fix. Still understandable so not really a problem. I'm a reader first and foremost so... I do wish for mass releases but since I'm also a freeloader, I hope you do write on your own phase and not be discouraged by trolls or haters(dumb people that either wants to go fanfic authors to go with the canon or those suddenly hating when fanfic authors have their MC go along with the canon even if there are significant changes that those dumb **cks seem to ignore). I now binge around 20+ chapters for those stories I love reading. This one too. Easily around the top 5 HP fanfics I look out for. 👌

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Alexander_the_grey
Alexander_the_greyAuthor

Thanks a lot. It’s actually been surprisingly good when I look at comments and I try to fix errors people show me. Thank you for reading and hope you enjoy.

Clams
ClamsLv5

what are the other four fanfics?

samsara
samsaraLv5

Thanks surprisingly, i have been skipping the novel due to the title but given as you explain the dont give a flying fvck about HP but accepts his new life.........

Watienla_Jamir
Watienla_JamirLv3

who is the love interest?

jezelle2009
jezelle2009Lv2

Yeah who is it ?

Watienla_Jamir:who is the love interest?
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ViciousHandler
ViciousHandlerLv5

Starts out good but gets very passive and lame as story progress. MC personality is very beta and very passive. Hes a goodie two shoe complex. what bugs me is is attitude towards the death eaters, the Dursley and Ron the Weasel. Death Eaters : MC is OP enough to kill them but adopts an attitude of wait for the fight that the bad guy will bring instead of hunting them and killing them one by one. Instead he tries to train others to fight the death eater while stating how much he hates them and blaly bla bla.... The Dursley: MC supposedly has a passive attitude/mentality that says gives bad people a second chance (school bullies, ***** wizards -death eaters) but when he shows up to the Dursley he loses it and and acts like a tyrant. This scene makes me feel like MC is bias or is prejudice towards muggles cause he doesnt even give them the friendly warning like how he does with withches/wizards. Even though author wrote him going off his rock was because of his magical animal side take over - Still does not excuse!! Ron the Weasel : We all know Ron is a twat! Author tries to make excuse that he wants to give Ron the second chance and benefit of the doubts. In authors novel he straight up makes Ron a twat. Ron goes off shooting his mouth and does offensive/retarted thing but MC just brush it off saying "oh he is still young and still teachable to change". While this happens over and over. Author is basically a Ron lover and give him free pass just cause he is Harrys side kick. Over all 3 stars, could be better. Perfer the other Alexander harry potter novel. this one is too passive with Beta complex.

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