This is my newest fanfic. Hope you guys like this as I have put a lot of my time and effort into it. And although in this fanfic that people would argue about some things so, please keep in mind that everything is according to the context and you must read the story by focusing on the context and not just a single line or sentence. And honestly it's you choice what reviews you want to give, but do not use uncivilized language in y comments and do not say things like "I want to kill this author" or "I want him to stop writing" because I write the fanfics for fun, not for pandering to others.
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I feel you didn't really study age groups well. shizuku is just 2 years old and you made her behave as if she's about 10. even if you say she's a genius this is just too forced. go and read about child growth even if she and ouma are geniuses they'll highest be able to speak but won't be that mature. it doesn't matter if they grew up in a noble house. most noble houses won't start serious etiquette training till at least they are 5
You need to understand that these people are Blazers. Both Ouma and Shizuku had the age to at least shatter reinforced steel, so not being able to communicate would be awkward. You need to understand that Blazers are tens of times more intelligent and powerful than common people. Ouma and Shizuku are not normal humans, in the least bit. Everything mentioned in this fanfic, I wrote these etjings after a considerable amount of research. So, please don't accuse me for something like this. You need to understand that the weakest and most stupid Blazer is still superhuman in terms of strength and intelligence compared to common people
ProfessorofCulture:I feel you didn't really study age groups well. shizuku is just 2 years old and you made her behave as if she's about 10. even if you say she's a genius this is just too forced. go and read about child growth even if she and ouma are geniuses they'll highest be able to speak but won't be that mature. it doesn't matter if they grew up in a noble house. most noble houses won't start serious etiquette training till at least they are 5
Look Author, your idea is great nice how it goes, some misspelling but nothing great to Hurt it. The worst you do are 2 things that if you fix you should really makes it a better work. First: CHILDREN ARE REALLY REALLY STUPID THEY DO NOT THINK LIKE ADULTS DONT BLUSH AND THEY ONLY THINK POOP OR SOMETHING!đ Second: DO YOU HAVE A GOLDFISH'S MEMORY OR SOMETHING? IN BETWEEN 20 WORDS YOU MAKE THE M.C. 4 Y.O. AND 6 Y.O. OR A TIER 1-5 TO 1-4. That's it as readers we can't expect anything from the Authors but at least don't make mistakes about your own story at least and the he/she him/her because it makes story really painfull to read, that's it good luck. đ
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Md_Omr_Alpha:Also any spam review or reviews where people threaten me will be deleted. What review you people give is completely up to you, I am only saying that any reviews that any kind of threats or harassments will be removed and that also includes spam reviews.
Md_Omr_Alpha:Also any spam review or reviews where people threaten me will be deleted. What review you people give is completely up to you, I am only saying that any reviews that any kind of threats or harassments will be removed and that also includes spam reviews.
Md_Omr_Alpha:Also any spam review or reviews where people threaten me will be deleted. What review you people give is completely up to you, I am only saying that any reviews that any kind of threats or harassments will be removed and that also includes spam reviews.
Md_Omr_Alpha:Also any spam review or reviews where people threaten me will be deleted. What review you people give is completely up to you, I am only saying that any reviews that any kind of threats or harassments will be removed and that also includes spam reviews.
Md_Omr_Alpha:Also any spam review or reviews where people threaten me will be deleted. What review you people give is completely up to you, I am only saying that any reviews that any kind of threats or harassments will be removed and that also includes spam reviews.