Whilst the writing is good and legible, the character interactions are all forced as fk. Within less than hrs of meeting the characters act as though they knew each other for yrs and are too trusting. I mean even in the OG they took time, and every main cadt went through their own arc/mini arc to form a basic bond. None of that is here and its all rushed

Another wasted potential. Liked the begining, but after MC starts meeting humans it gets cringe. After MC meets Nami be goes from Yeager to Babysitter. Then the harem ruins the story completely. Harems are fine if they are done right. But rushed and pointless harems like this...🙅‍♂️🤦‍♂️. Don't waste your time, read something better.

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The story started awesome. Until he takes a system and became a slave of it. As if that weren't enough, he now has to stay with nami's slut, just give her some coins and **** her ass. Don't be a beta male. She already showed her naked body for some money as in the case of Alabasta and i doubt she get the money too. If you're going to **** her, just pay her a little more, you don't have to act like Sanji. There is no need to be your hunting dog. I hate these MCs who think with the dick!!! "Don't worry, beauty, I'll kill him for you! You can't get on the ship, get on me first, I'm your eternal slave, beauty." Characters like sanji are disgusting to see. Where was the proud kimera ant? Like an animal, meeting females would be just to breed, not to be a fucking beta man. How disappointing

Well......5-Stars, huh.....I like the Pic, makes me remember " God of Slaugther" and I loved the Novel!

the intercour** part is skipped. guess he's just doing it with another b**ch. good luck with that but i don't want to waste my time reading just another stupid mc

The story at first looked pretty good, but it was just an illusion. The truth is that the whole plot of the story is incredibly forced and superficial, like a generic fanfic or anime that they take at random, all that "love" that happens is quite garbage and forced, you can't really feel anything for the characters because they are like empty shells, if it weren't an OP fanfic for almost all of them they would have almost no personality. Now we have that weird change in the stats that I have no idea if they made it weaker or still the same, but it was pretty confusing, and it didn't make much sense. In general the only good thing about this is the grammar and updates.

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