Item: Traveling Through the Multiverse as a Chimera Ant
Rating: 2
Author: Overwrit

OverwritLv34yr

2020-10-04 07:03

The story at first looked pretty good, but it was just an illusion. The truth is that the whole plot of the story is incredibly forced and superficial, like a generic fanfic or anime that they take at random, all that "love" that happens is quite garbage and forced, you can't really feel anything for the characters because they are like empty shells, if it weren't an OP fanfic for almost all of them they would have almost no personality. Now we have that weird change in the stats that I have no idea if they made it weaker or still the same, but it was pretty confusing, and it didn't make much sense. In general the only good thing about this is the grammar and updates.

Traveling Through the Multiverse as a Chimera Ant

Black_Paladyn

4.0

50 Chs

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Whilst the writing is good and legible, the character interactions are all forced as fk. Within less than hrs of meeting the characters act as though they knew each other for yrs and are too trusting. I mean even in the OG they took time, and every main cadt went through their own arc/mini arc to form a basic bond. None of that is here and its all rushed

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