ravhage

perfectly likable MC and fun powers

welcome back !!!!!!!!!

excellent effort, your modifications are a positive and the updates are frequent

ai trash. with ni edits or effort to hide it. utter and total trash

second time i try this story and your effort is by far the best try at it i came upon. thank you for the modifications

ok so i love this, really love everything about this, the i dont give a f^^k vibes are on point and im all for it. hope (desperately) to see more of it.

dont engage with the loud minority my friend, the noise gives the illusion of majority and importance, but if you mute them you will see that the readers love what you do and the support fallows. by responding and engaging whith them you give them satisfaction, because thats what they want, interaction and validation, just a reaction from you is enough for that

love the story so far, hope you stick with it

my man ! thats the best gift you could have given us heathens and lurkers of the dark corners of this wretched site

stellar job, thats my review. you made a well thought out military plot and a compelling MC, without the idiocies of wasted pawer or unrealistic flaws