ravhage

love the story so far, hope you stick with it

my man ! thats the best gift you could have given us heathens and lurkers of the dark corners of this wretched site

stellar job, thats my review. you made a well thought out military plot and a compelling MC, without the idiocies of wasted pawer or unrealistic flaws

ok, this is without a doubt the best writing i have found on this site....dear god thank you

brilliant effort, i know that its almost all new writing and that you changed some truly horrid and repetitive stuff, so thx for that

love the story so far i hope you can continue it

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love the story so far, the MC is chill and logical. i hope and am eager to see more of this

good story, love the shadow approach. make a patreon and stick to the story please, all the good earning writers try to finish 1 in 2 stories at least to keep an audience.

too much content, too much description without story advancement, you risk making a good character an edge lord, and there you will loose the story and your audience