At the beginning, this story was worth between 8 and 9/10. Then MC met Nami (the chapter before I thought he killed her even though I didn't understand why she would have attacked him). The story totally changed. At that moment it was hovering between 2 and 4. Finally, there was the chapter 14 named Acceptance. It was basically the stupid reason why his women would accept the idea of a harem. I cringed during all that. The story went down to less than 1/10 on this chapter. I still have hope that it will become better.
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So you are one of those!
i have been cheated so many times before. we need to take some precautions here π
ππ first 8 chapters are crazy good but he kinda changed after meeting Nami, I guess girls make one unintelligent, right!? still. Author saw our comments and said he would do his best to try and best his fic. Thou is tough making a fic but it tougher to please readers! So a good critique is always welcome for them to improvise!
to improve* sorry, auto correct is evil!
You should try it. The romance part (all concerning Nami) is bad but the rest is really really good. The last chapter reignited my hopes. Also the system is finally explained (and it was made logically).
Honestly hate how badly he ruined the novel with the girls. And changed the mcs personality really. Still the novel gives good ideas and I hope someone writes their own version with similar plot but doesn't have a *** addicted, idiotic(when it comes to women) character. Besides he should want strong mates, Nami and her sister, without fruits are honestly just not that impressive overall.
The worst is buying a ship... If I was him I would have gone on a years long eating feast in the calm belt, and with Zunisha as a dessert
