Well. This story could be great, but in the end, it's just a harem fanfic with uninteresting main characters, a ton of cliche and easiest power struggle out of there. I liked how thoughtful you was in power description. I liked how you make use of them I liked characters for harem *. I don't like how easily he gets them. I mean make them brainwashed lovers ,and mc getting all white of how he dislike it, but still need they powers ....yeah, I cringed hard, but at least it's was glossed over fast. And then there is story itself and mc. Why he doing anything he does ? Because it's best option? Yeah, sure. That's the problem, I don't feel like mc have more in him, than just conviniet function to make good decisions. The same with his character changes*, when he introduced flames, I was already iffy. But when he reminded of sky flames...i just realized how deep the rabbit hole. Either way, story don't have much tension or interesting moments. P. S. When you go in dxd and create harem only from the girls you summoned from another world(and Valerie, I dropped it) ....what? There is no good girls in dxd?
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Yes, I am amused by the senselessness of the author's actions, add "harem" to the name of fanfiction and then limit it to 6 people "
There was a guy who trues to recreate anime harem style. There was harem tag and after chapter 100 he confes that mc would only get with one girl. Plus there is a lot of cultivation works with harem, with only one main girl and others just a political marriage wife's.
SD_Liv:Yes, I am amused by the senselessness of the author's actions, add "harem" to the name of fanfiction and then limit it to 6 people "
Valery is part of the harem ?? Or is she paired with Harry?
I don't know 20 chapters in the story, she is more like sister. I don't care either way, he said harem would be from the summoning girls.
Ok so I saw this fanfic and read the summary but have not read it yet. In the summary it says R34 Economy. Now I scroll and found your comment or review and I don't want to assume or make false statements but the first sentence from your review intrigue me, however after reading the whole thing ...... it seems you don't know what R34 Economy seems to imply. So I want to ask for clarification. Do you know what R34 Economy is supposed to be?
I'm reading stories on qq. Yeah, I know. You imply that r-34 economy story couldn't be great? I have low standards. I'm reading on webnovel ,ya know...
Ezukejyll:Ok so I saw this fanfic and read the summary but have not read it yet. In the summary it says R34 Economy. Now I scroll and found your comment or review and I don't want to assume or make false statements but the first sentence from your review intrigue me, however after reading the whole thing ...... it seems you don't know what R34 Economy seems to imply. So I want to ask for clarification. Do you know what R34 Economy is supposed to be?
Yeah that's why I asked for clarification xD anyways thanks for answering and clearing up my doubts ^.^
Yuri_is_Ntr:I'm reading stories on qq. Yeah, I know. You imply that r-34 economy story couldn't be great? I have low standards. I'm reading on webnovel ,ya know...
Oof. This reminded me about certain fanfic: "Is It Wrong For A Godslayer To Have A Harem Of Goddesses?" - Actual title should be "Is It Wrong to Bait Readers With Misleading Title?". Crossover of Campione(harem) and Danmachi(harem), with harem title and synopsis, what could've gone wrong? How about author who understood that he can't pull harem and decided to go for good old "Me and My Amazin Imaginary Waifu", without changing name of the novel. Later on he even dared to bitch about "You expectations aren't my problems"! Fuck you author.
Yuri_is_Ntr:There was a guy who trues to recreate anime harem style. There was harem tag and after chapter 100 he confes that mc would only get with one girl. Plus there is a lot of cultivation works with harem, with only one main girl and others just a political marriage wife's.
what is R34 economy?
Ezukejyll:Ok so I saw this fanfic and read the summary but have not read it yet. In the summary it says R34 Economy. Now I scroll and found your comment or review and I don't want to assume or make false statements but the first sentence from your review intrigue me, however after reading the whole thing ...... it seems you don't know what R34 Economy seems to imply. So I want to ask for clarification. Do you know what R34 Economy is supposed to be?
It's like tier-list of girls, that have different cost You have like 10 points and could summon only on this. Girls varies from 1 to 5. Where cost only depends on how author wants. So some girls that could literally destroy worlds /city's could be cheaper than just girls that author liked or more popular. Which make it weird.
ThanatosGreekGod:what is R34 economy?
thank you that helped a lot
Yuri_is_Ntr:It's like tier-list of girls, that have different cost You have like 10 points and could summon only on this. Girls varies from 1 to 5. Where cost only depends on how author wants. So some girls that could literally destroy worlds /city's could be cheaper than just girls that author liked or more popular. Which make it weird.
I haven't read it yet but from what you said is the Mc not going to be powerful himself? Also, will he always be saved by his harem?
Yuri_is_Ntr:It's like tier-list of girls, that have different cost You have like 10 points and could summon only on this. Girls varies from 1 to 5. Where cost only depends on how author wants. So some girls that could literally destroy worlds /city's could be cheaper than just girls that author liked or more popular. Which make it weird.
Old comment but he trains with his girls and becomes 'strong' but his girls are always stronger, ending is also super rushed and there's no real romance, mc is very much "MA FAMILY, I DO EVERYTHING FOR MA FAMILY" *starts pointing at everyone in romania while screaming* "YOUR ALL MA FAMILY!!!" he's not particularly relatable in any way and reads like a fictional character himself with no sense of realism so don't expect anything realistic from the start honestly, this author's other novel "Lord who visits another world" is much better in relation to harem and romance and a relatable main character but as it didn't seem like it would be harem at the start it ticked off a few readers too as he tends to change direction after starting the novel he's writing before an abrupt end to the novel or just plunges them into eternal hiatus.
ALazyReader:I haven't read it yet but from what you said is the Mc not going to be powerful himself? Also, will he always be saved by his harem?
